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10-02-2013, 11:30 AM
The rejudge. The judge did not look at the initial verdict to make this one.
CIRCE
Realism [+3]
Your realism improved over the course of the fight, but some of your beginning attacks didn’t seem as plausible which impacted your overall score.
Emotion [+2]
You had great emotion the entire fight, and I would give you a 2.5 if I could! Really amazing feels the whole time.
Prose [+3]
Overall you had good prose with some great moments sprinkled in, but other areas that weren’t as well written which brought the overall score down.
Readability [+2]
Easy to read!
Finally tally: 23+10= 33 HP
PHAEDRA
Realism [+1]
Your realism did increase over the course of the fight, but your first defense really didn’t seem plausible, at least not with the way you wrote it making it seem so effortless for her to jump up and over close kicks. Your early attacks weren’t as realistic as your later ones, so overall that brought your score down.
Emotion [+3]
I really felt the emotion in all your posts, but even more so I felt where that emotion was coming from. You did a great job explaining the motives of every feeling that passed through Phaedra.
Prose [+4]
Excellent prose all throughout, it was a joy reading your posts.
Readability [+2]
Easy to read!
Finally tally: 24+10= 34 HP
By my verdict: PHAEDRA is the winner!
CIRCE
Realism [+3]
Your realism improved over the course of the fight, but some of your beginning attacks didn’t seem as plausible which impacted your overall score.
Emotion [+2]
You had great emotion the entire fight, and I would give you a 2.5 if I could! Really amazing feels the whole time.
Prose [+3]
Overall you had good prose with some great moments sprinkled in, but other areas that weren’t as well written which brought the overall score down.
Readability [+2]
Easy to read!
Finally tally: 23+10= 33 HP
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PHAEDRA
Realism [+1]
Your realism did increase over the course of the fight, but your first defense really didn’t seem plausible, at least not with the way you wrote it making it seem so effortless for her to jump up and over close kicks. Your early attacks weren’t as realistic as your later ones, so overall that brought your score down.
Emotion [+3]
I really felt the emotion in all your posts, but even more so I felt where that emotion was coming from. You did a great job explaining the motives of every feeling that passed through Phaedra.
Prose [+4]
Excellent prose all throughout, it was a joy reading your posts.
Readability [+2]
Easy to read!
Finally tally: 24+10= 34 HP
