Ensnared by a trepan,
Watch!
The shadows cloak us,
And the night is long,
I bid you return to my flank,
As is your rightful place,
Blood of my blood.
Let this be our eye-for-an-eye.
The Tenth Month [October to Confutatis]
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The tenth term,
Ensnared by a trepan, Watch! The shadows cloak us, And the night is long, I bid you return to my flank, As is your rightful place, Blood of my blood. Let this be our eye-for-an-eye.
10-16-2013, 08:03 PM
OCTOBER was sought.
The Tenth Month October is the tenth month of the year. The tenth term The same as above. Ensnared by a trepan, Captured by a capturer- basically a hint that the horse she was seeking was stolen. Watch! The shadows cloak us, October is black. And the night is long, I bid you return to my flank, As is your rightful place, Blood of my blood. October is Confutatis' half-sister through the sire Oblivion. Let this be our eye-for-an-eye. October helped Confutatis escape (well, convinced her) when she was imprisoned by Kipp- now Confutatis does the same for her.
10-16-2013, 09:21 PM
I PASS this.
The tenth term October is the tenth month of the year. +1 | Pass. Ensnared by a trepan, Captured by a capturer- basically a hint that the horse she was seeking was stolen. +1 | Pass. Watch! The shadows cloak us, October is black. +1 | Pass. And the night is long, I bid you return to my flank, As is your rightful place, Blood of my blood. October is Confutatis' half-sister through the sire Oblivion. +1 | Pass - but I feel that you could have done more with this section. Let this be our eye-for-an-eye. October helped Confutatis escape (well, convinced her) when she was imprisoned by Kipp- now Confutatis does the same for her. +1 | Pass. I felt that this was a really well-done stealth, and I had my suspicions about who it was for. However, I also think that there were a few small moments where you sort of lost the point a bit, or got a bit superfluous. With that being said, I don't feel that this detracted from the stealth at all, but I might be aware of it in the future.
10-16-2013, 09:31 PM
I pass this, for the same reasons Rayo outlined above.
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