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11-02-2013, 01:10 PM
Since you're offering, love, I had a quick question. And my feelings are hard to hurt so don't worry about that, hahaha.
What are your opinions on the way I write Oxy (i.e. second person narrative). I really enjoy writing him that way as it really gets me into character with him and helps me think like Oxy would think. However, I have a hard time judging if its hard for other people to get into his character, you know?
Is it difficult to read? Is there anything you would suggest changing? Are there ways to make it more readable for others, if indeed it is difficult to read?
Thanks for any help!!!!
What are your opinions on the way I write Oxy (i.e. second person narrative). I really enjoy writing him that way as it really gets me into character with him and helps me think like Oxy would think. However, I have a hard time judging if its hard for other people to get into his character, you know?
Is it difficult to read? Is there anything you would suggest changing? Are there ways to make it more readable for others, if indeed it is difficult to read?
Thanks for any help!!!!
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