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General Writing Help

Aurelia Posts: 307
Outcast atk: 5.5 | def: 9 | dam: 5
Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.2hh :: 7 HP: 62.5 | Buff: NOVICE
baylee
#5
If it isn't TOOOOO much work, do you think you could critique how I write Aurelia?

I've had her for a short time, but love her a lot. I've done a lot of opening posts (which I'm very bad at... >.>), so it's not my best writing, but there is a few threads that have been replied to, and that I've replied back.

Anyways, if you could give me really tough criticism, it'd be really helpful.

Success isn't the result of spontaneous combustion.



Messages In This Thread
General Writing Help - by Torleik - 11-01-2013, 02:06 AM
RE: General Writing Help - by Cypress - 11-01-2013, 05:49 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Kahlua - 11-02-2013, 01:10 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Torleik - 11-11-2013, 04:02 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Kahlua - 11-11-2013, 06:09 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Torleik - 11-12-2013, 12:29 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Aurelia - 11-11-2013, 04:21 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Eris_ - 11-13-2013, 09:47 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Seele - 11-14-2013, 12:54 AM
RE: General Writing Help - by Torleik - 11-15-2013, 03:12 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Torleik - 11-27-2013, 03:38 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Eris_ - 11-27-2013, 04:45 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Aurelia - 11-27-2013, 05:22 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Resplendence - 11-28-2013, 01:28 AM

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