Yeah, overall I think you're doing really well, and I apologize for the lack of critique, but I just didn't find anything wrong with it.
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11-13-2013, 08:12 PM
I think you wrote him very well, in my personal opinion, you caught that malicious and dark voice I love in unstable characters. One thing I can say though, always make sure you're in the right mood for writing characters like that. When I write Vulture, if I am going to write him correctly, I have to be in the right mindset. If I'm struggling to get into that 'place' I will read characters like, Histe, Eris, and Seele. All of whom have awesome voices, and are all incredibly psychotic characters. Also music to, I created this extensive playlist with songs I associate with Vulture, so, if that music inspires you then I really recommend that.
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tips on writing on a psychopath - by Helleborr - 11-13-2013, 07:05 PM
RE: tips on writing on a psychopath - by Apodis - 11-13-2013, 07:19 PM
RE: tips on writing on a psychopath - by Solace - 11-13-2013, 08:12 PM
RE: tips on writing on a psychopath - by Carnesîr - 11-13-2013, 09:01 PM
RE: tips on writing on a psychopath - by Satanic Silk - 12-13-2013, 12:51 AM
RE: tips on writing on a psychopath - by Alina - 12-13-2013, 11:44 AM
RE: tips on writing on a psychopath - by Voodoo - 12-13-2013, 03:30 PM
RE: tips on writing on a psychopath - by Illynx - 12-13-2013, 03:41 PM
RE: tips on writing on a psychopath - by Mauja - 12-13-2013, 03:56 PM
RE: tips on writing on a psychopath - by Tamme - 12-13-2013, 04:31 PM
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