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Carnesîr Posts: 60
Hidden Account atk: 5.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 15.2 :: 3 HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
wanda
#1



And on the first day of summer, he appears in the abandoned threshold of the gods, coat damp with sweat, fatigued but determined.

Carnesîr pads forward quietly, moving in such a way he is more reminiscent of cat or wolf than horse. A rain falls, the thick, soupy warm rain of summer, consistent and quiet, a welcome change from the blistering heat of late spring, dampening his coat. One might think it would be cold with the drizzle, but the day is hot and humid. The horizon is tinged with the faint pink of the dying sun, hardly discernible among the dullness of the gray clouds swallowing the sky. Gray rock has been washed black, turning a detestable shade of charcoal; in the more craggy regions, pools of glistening water has accumulated. With each step the stallion douses his lower legs, soaking through the thin wisps of feathers deep to his bones. Luckily for him, his cloven hooves are better than, perhaps, solid ones, having adapted to grip and not crack in sudden changes of weather.

It is the foreigner's first time in this cracked island created for the gods home on earth, and he takes in the ruined shrines to the mightiest of divine creatures with wonder in his eyes. There are four. One is buried beneath tendrils of black vine, but their ugliness is tempered by the beauty of budding violet and cream blossoms. Who were the gods again? Earth, Wind, Time, and Sun? Certainly the flowers were a sign of hope for the mortals, gifted from the Earth God. Had they ruined their own shrines? Why would they do such a thing? The next is blackened, crumbling charcoal and drifting, soaked ash, still not dissipated despite the weather's attempts. The Sun's. The third in sight is odd, covered in glyphs and runes that reminds Carnesîr faintly of his elvish home's writing. How intriguing. Lastly is one split in half- no doubt the other remnant is destroyed, perhaps lost somewhere in the foaming ocean flanking the peninsula.

With the grace of a leaping gazelle, the stallion jumps effortlessly over a slow trail of blue lava dribbling from the volcano. For the moment he is suspended above it, he can feel it's heat searing his hooves. Then he has landed on the stone, and he moves closer to the shrines.

Where is Onni?

Would they answer his calls, even if he was a stranger to Helovia? How should he pray... beg, cry, speak normally, reverently? His chest quivers as he inhales deeply, lungs expanding until they push against his ribs, almost as if they want to break free.

He waits for Onni.




Onni the Illuminant Posts: 194
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Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.2hh :: 8 Buff: SWIFT
Lyhty :: Diamond Firetail Finch :: Sing Boom Boom!
#2

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The rain had delayed her, forcing her to walk from the desert of her home around to the peninsula. Had the painted girl known that she would have been held from the skies by this torrential downpour, she would have left much sooner. In her heart, the shaman partially doubted that the stallion would even remember their promise. After all, the boy had run from her side before she had even offered a proper answer. Still, the flicker of doubt in her chest would not hold her back. A promise was a promise.
Now, the mare just hoped she would not be too late.

Seeking refuge under the curve of her wing is the small little songbird; his mood is sour, not even attempting to hide his dismal attitude about meeting this silver-tongued fool out in the Veins of the Gods. Normally, on the first day of summer, Onni would greet the sun with a song. Instead, they greeted the sunrise behind the clouds with busily plodding feet traveling as swiftly as possible to the meeting place. Lyhty thought the whole ordeal was stupid, dramatic, and unnecessary. However, you will note that the bird chose to accompany her still, never leaving her side for long.

With relief and a fast canter, Onni finally gets a glimpse of blue light in the distance, picking up her speed in the flat terrain to speed forward. The blonde and ivory mane slicks back on her neck, her pale face. Muddied tail races behind like a heavy weight, wings long since drenched. Despite her ruined appearance, even with the sun hiding behind the storm, the shaman glows like a golden lantern. Her figure is easily distinguished from the dreary surrounds, all bright-eyed and foolish racing about in the rain.

The pale colored hooves do not falter as she easily makes her way up the pathway she had traveled so many times. Her pace remains fast, leaping over larger streams of lava and making Lyhty chirp uneasily every time. Then, she sees him.

A dark silver figure distorted by the rain, a gleaming white horn in the distance.
Amazed but happy, Onni pushes down on her hind end like uneasy breaks, settling on an easy trot toward his side, the smile on her face beaming more brightly than her golden aura.

"Carnesîr! You came!" she says, voice eager and happy. "Sorry I am so late... the rain made it impossible to fly." Sheepish, a smile as she waves a soggy chocolate wing toward him. The more time she stood, the more awkward she began to realize this situation was. Had he discovered the truth in his home, the racist tendencies? Would he accuse her of lying? Would he even be happy she arrived as promised?

All there could be in this moment is hope. Luckily, Onni is the most hopeful fool in the world.

WHAT IS TO GIVE LIGHT MUST ENDURE BURNING.
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& wolfgangstaudt @ flickr
 just enough dark to see</style>
  how you're the light over me.</style>

Carnesîr Posts: 60
Hidden Account atk: 5.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 15.2 :: 3 HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
wanda
#3



She came from the darkness, a promise of the sun to come, glowing with that golden light of hers.

Struck by her ambiance, the glittering web of raindrops caught in her mane and glistening in her soaked wings, Carnesîr wonders if he could ever look so beautiful as Onni; for he just looks soggy and his mane is frizzy, static hairs creating a nimbus about his face. No doubt he looks the fool.

And the smile she offers him, brighter than the sun itself... Her greetings, warm and gentle, all velvet voice but without the slick buttery richness of flattery. Why is it that him, made even smaller by the miserable clouds and sorrowful torrents of rain, could bring such a grin to wreathe her face? It looms at him, suddenly a promise more wicked than kind, a memory of the last smiles he was given. Only expectations rode on bright-eyed faces such as those, hopes and dreams knitted with him as the main symbol. And he couldn't withstand the possibility of someone having confidence in him, for he had only ever failed to rise to the occasion.

Please, Onni. I'll only ever let you down.

"That is okay." Carnesîr murmurs, legs shifting beneath him. He has turned the color of dark iron, the rain having tainted the paler silver of his grullo coat. "I..." How should he explain the words Lena had whispered in his ear to soothe the ache of his heart? "Onni."

There is panic in his eyes, but slowly it fades, his next murmured words overridden by the drumming of the rain. Carnesîr tells himself he must be strong and clear and sharp, as brilliant as his father's diamond sword. He cannot lie, cannot weave nor create the stories spun of empty words. So he will tell her what he knows and what he has learned. "A friend of mine told I that the... a... Qian stole homelands of the Basiners. She said that crimes were committed on both sides, of heroine and cold-hearted." Each word is enunciated carefully, as if he is making an enormous effort not to ruin his structured sentences. "Onni, do you know this Qian? Can you... tell me about them, and those within its armor?"

"And where do you come from? What stories do you carry on your shoulders?"




Onni the Illuminant Posts: 194
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Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.2hh :: 8 Buff: SWIFT
Lyhty :: Diamond Firetail Finch :: Sing Boom Boom!
#4

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For all her brightness, the face which greets Onni is gloomier than the rain surrounding the land. The expression of happiness wavers, a flicker of candlelight, bringing the corners of her lips to a more sobered place. The rain soaked through her mane, the pale tendrils clinging to her face, her neck, sticking like glue. Finally, all the drops feeling like pelted ice under coldly lit eyes. Immediately, the Illuminant freezes, realizing that her emotions may not be the same as her company. Relief felt at seeing the figure of a friend, but now that gnawing doubt radiates through her limbs.
What if his search for knowledge left hatred in his heart for her?

Another protesting chirp ringing from the bird, announcing his presence but also quietly the berating their company for being so dreary. Ruining the mood of the amiable girl, making his worse. A horrible friend to meet in the rain.

"Yes?" she whispers into the pattering of rain, peering through the streaks of gray toward the solemn expression of Carnesîr's face.

When his words finally gather enough strength to climb above the dull roar of the storm, the pale faced girl nods calmly, a response showing both that she understood and knew of the Qian. A sad smile on her face. Doubtfully, the shaman glances toward the glowing blue floor, hissing as the drops fall into the pulsating lava. "The Qian are the moon's children," she says. "My mother has long been close with Mirage the DragonHeart, leader of the Qian and World's Edge." Pausing for a moment, Onni realizes that he has no idea who her mother is, what that would mean. "Basically, my home and theirs are allied."

Sidestepping being the daughter of the land's longest standing warlord - probably a good idea for this conversation.

"Mauja resided as King in the World's Edge when I came to Helovia. The herd occupied by strictly unicorns, much like the Basin now. Then, the Qian were an outcast band, allied with the Tuuli who captured the Dragon's Throat herd." Pale eyes glance toward him, cautious not to speak too quickly. Unfamiliar words being bandied about, Carnesîr would likely get lost. "Living in the Wilds is not easy in this land; it is no wonder that many prefer to graces of herd life. In order to care for her family, the Qian, allied with the Dragon's Throat and the Foothills under Paladin, invaded and captured the World's Edge."
"I healed the soldiers of the Qian and their allies after the battle."

Another quiet, melancholy smile through the rain. Onni thinks of the fires, the smell of blood, the broken bodies, and the death of Jaydan. One of her few friends, if she would be so lucky to be considered as such.

Looking toward him with sincerity on her face, but also a touch of guilt boiling in her heart, the shaman is a little lost for words. How to make him understand? "Otherwise, the Qian are a peaceable herd. All they sought was a home."

The second set of questions, the Illuminant is not as ready to answer. Pausing, looking toward him with a blank look, the winged girl walks past him. She brings herself toward the singed altar, bowing her head toward it. An uneasy breath, the painted girl wavers before it. How she wished the God of the Sun would clear the rain, change this conversation, erase her past. Despite the kindness in her heart, how is she still so stained? "Lend me your strength," she whispers. Before raising her head, the mare pauses once more, studying the ruined surface of the once great tribute.

"Isilme," her voice calls over the rain, behind her. Pale face turning, Onni looks at Carnesîr with an even expression on her face. "I am from Isilme, the land of twilight. A land overrun by the dead."

WHAT IS TO GIVE LIGHT MUST ENDURE BURNING.
credits: aquiloniuslupus, hjr-photography, chocomix, and roar-shack-stock @ dA.com
& wolfgangstaudt @ flickr
 just enough dark to see</style>
  how you're the light over me.</style>

Carnesîr Posts: 60
Hidden Account atk: 5.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 15.2 :: 3 HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
wanda
#5



A bird chirps, uttering a small note of warning. Carnesîr recognizes Lyhty's cautionary not, being oblivious in a self-destructive way to the negative affect he is having on the second mare in Helovia he might dare to call his friend. Have no doubt, if he were aware of the sobriety taking over Onni's alight features, he would feel guilt gnawing at his heart, pity squeezing his chest; but he is not aware, so it matters not.

As they stand in the rain, Carnesîr is reminded of the night they met, with the net of stars sprawled across the sky, and his screams ripped away from his mouth because of the vindictive wind. She was glowing then too, a beautiful goddess in her own right, shining with the incandescence of the yellow-eyed sun, the cold wet sand turned pale gold beneath her hooves. That night, he had thought little more of her as a celestial object, a divine creature far from his mortal whims. But there was kindness in her silken voice, gallantry in her soft, sky eyes; she was a wonder, no small one at that but a great big curiosity. Many mares with looks such as hers were shallow, petty things, but not Onni. There were tangles in her mane and mud in her tail, but she glowed physically and mentally, and it was difficult not to immediately love that.

And even when you can see the sadness in her eyes, she prevails, a smile burning fearlessly on her muzzle. Here we are, a coward and a queen of grins. How did she stand HIM, Carnesîr the craven, Carnesîr the foolish, Carnesîr the cowardly self-depreciating self-asorbed vain middling piddling ugly excuse for a unicorn?!

"But you are a child of sun." He murmurs, pushing away the thoughts of gloom and despair. If the sun and the moon can ally with each other, perhaps they could too, overcoming their differences, Onni's heat and Carnesîr's pusillanimity. In thought he tips his head, rather like a curious dog, horn catching the faded gray light, raindrops arranged gracefully on his pearl crown. "You are a child of the sun," he repeats, almost as if relishing the words. He savors them on his lips. "I am child of twilight. I am in between, but never here nor there."

She speaks of peace, but Carnesîr's ears twitch suspiciously, something clouding over his eyes. The circle continued, Lena told him. War does not just end; it is continuous, unstoppable, no matter how long the breaks in between battles.

"Ah," He says instead of the thoughts wheeling about his head, crows around carrion.

Isilme. It is a word, that to those who lived in the country, no doubt conjures images of war and clashing soldiers and the hate for all species other than one self's. There is nothing on Onni's face that whispers of the world baptized in gore and glory, or in her deadened tone. But it seems, for a brief moment, the world stops, perhaps due to the gravity of the situation. Still, a foreigner is a foreigner, and he lets it float past, not questioning it.

Carnesîr begins to cry, silently, soundlessly.

"Onni," he sighs. "Onni."

"The darkness eats us all."



Onni the Illuminant Posts: 194
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Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.2hh :: 8 Buff: SWIFT
Lyhty :: Diamond Firetail Finch :: Sing Boom Boom!
#6

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A child of the sun.

Onni smiles sadly, thinking how she is the daughter of a warlord and a shapeshifting absentee. If life had been perfect, the shaman would have been born with the rising of the sun in Helovia. Despite the challenges posed by this realm, it endured, it existed. Isilme held many memories. Many were fond, bright thoughts enough to bring smiles to her face. The others, the vast majority, however, were memories filled with loss, turmoil, death, destruction. The great ending of her life in Isilme came with the shadows of the dead eating the land and inhabitants with their anger.

How she wished to be a child of the sun she loved so dearly. He may not understand or know it, but Onni is much more dark than her bright, shining appearance lets on.

The tears on his face are not in recognition of her loss. Carnesîr, for all of his good intentions, has no idea how to glimpse through her eyes and see the graves of her beloved friends, her mentor, her former homes. The small droplets are mixed with the rain, lost to her eyes. The saddened expression, his darkened words, they are not for any sake other than his. Whatever war rages within his heart is not the same as Onni's, yet broken and bloodied hearts seem to sink together. Darkness eats us all.

"Darkness waits for us all," she agrees, thinking sadly about her troubles the past few seasons. The cold of the rain upon her back reminiscent of the absence of sunlight felt during the winter. "But, I do not believe it can consume you without your permission."

Her pale eyes look to his dark, wet face for a glimmer or understanding, of recognition to her words. How much will he understand? Carnesîr seemed proficient enough in her language, but the shaman could never be certain. "I am no more a child of sun than you. I simply choose to follow his path the best I can," a clarification offered, in hopes at least this meaning would get through. He seems so troubled, so saddened; Onni only hopes that she can pull him from this state. "Every light casts a shadow, and every shadow needs a light."

You just need to have faith.

WHAT IS TO GIVE LIGHT MUST ENDURE BURNING.
credits: aquiloniuslupus, hjr-photography, chocomix, and roar-shack-stock @ dA.com
& wolfgangstaudt @ flickr
 just enough dark to see</style>
  how you're the light over me.</style>

Carnesîr Posts: 60
Hidden Account atk: 5.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 15.2 :: 3 HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
wanda
#7



The tears are falling down his face, and he shivers, damp, cold, and soaked to the bone. How miserable this is, all of it; them, bedraggled scholars and healers, them, with their bleak memories playing in their lonely heads, them, alone and with their crumpled hearts.

He is a selfish coward, a brave craven unicorn.

His father had told him as much when he had lived with them still. Galathil was no kind warrior. For years he had served as a soldier during the deadliest, longest, and bloodiest wars, progressing from warrior to captain to general to ruler. When he looked at his son, disgust filled his eyes. He had loved his daughter more than his own coltish offspring, her with bright eyes and laughter. That Carnesîr had taken away from him. It had been a mistake, a dreadful err, but still they would not forgive him. When he ran, they watched, and he could hear the laughter of the commoners in his ears still on quiet days, their chuckles and smiles and their joy at him being gone, gone, gone.

Even now, Onni glows, shining with her aura of crystalline golden light. How jealous he is of her, with her kind soul and bright smile. If only he could be like her, always seeing the good in the worst of horses. But he is not her, he is the lord of the sun and the prince of nothing.

The more he is around her, the more he realizes how little he knows her, and again he recognizes how she is everything he is not. There are words she says, words he doesn't know and can't understand, but her tone is meant to be comforting, so he offers his uncertain smile and watches the raindrops gleam dully on her coat. For a moment, the sun peeks out from the gray of the clouds, illuminating her in a thread of finest gold, as if the lord of the sky has blessed her.

He understands better what she says next, and recognition glints in his eyes at the end of her words, ears twitching forward in expectation. "Perhaps I should take to following sun then." Then I need only follow you, for you are the summer sun where I am the autumn storms- unpredictable and miserable. He swallows his tears, pushing down the emotions. Why must he always cry around her?

For a moment he rummages around for another topic, but he seems unable to find one. Instead, something he had been thinking of for a while bubbles to the surface.

"Onni," Carnesîr says hesitantly, wanting to ask favor of her. "May you take me to meet some of your herd? I would go myself, but... they might not welcome a unicorn who smells of winter." He ducks his head, pulling away from her gaze; one of his forehooves scuff the hard rock nervously.




Onni the Illuminant Posts: 194
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Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.2hh :: 8 Buff: SWIFT
Lyhty :: Diamond Firetail Finch :: Sing Boom Boom!
#8

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Perhaps I should take to following sun then. The shaman smiles, a blessed expression. Just the thought of the Lord of Light is enough to lift her spirits. If he would to gain a follower out of this friendship, Onni would be glad. The golden deity had been misunderstood by many, especially following the Tallsun of his wrath. However, the painted girl always suspected the harsh and often cruel words and actions of the Sun were due to a sensitive if not guarded heart. He who fights the hardest has the largest heart, at least according to her mother.

"He is a kind soul," the healer says mostly to herself, though certainly loud enough for Carnesîr to hear. There is plenty that she could say to sway the stallion toward the path of fire and light, but he was not requesting a sermon. Instead, she stands with a blissful smile on her face, looking blindly past the rain falling around them. It is not until the grullo speaks again that she returns to reality, glancing toward the dark shrouded face.

Finally, something disturbs her inner peace. It is not particularly surprising, but Carnesîr would likely not be welcomed warmly in her home. Shifting her weight about on her legs, rain soaking through her coat and wings, Lyhty chirping uneasily from his canopy beneath the feathered limbs. While Onni trusted the stallion, she doubted that any in her herd would be too fond of his visit, seeing as they were recently invaded by his herd.

A frown grows on her face. "I..." Looking from the ground toward his retreating eyes, the shaman feels the pull of guilt. Her trust should be enough to guide him safely through her home. Kri would likely not understand, but Midas was reasonable. "I will take you, if you wish." A weak smile, but still as genuine as ever.

WHAT IS TO GIVE LIGHT MUST ENDURE BURNING.
credits: aquiloniuslupus, hjr-photography, chocomix, and roar-shack-stock @ dA.com
& wolfgangstaudt @ flickr
 just enough dark to see</style>
  how you're the light over me.</style>


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