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Lost For Words

Kahlua the Sunshower Posts: 662
Outcast atk: 5.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 4.5
Mare :: Equine :: 15.3hh :: 9 [Orangemoon] HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Khan :: Common Blue Dragon :: Frost Breath Sevin
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Don't be afraid to use commas and semicolons, too. There are a lot of stylistic ways to avoid using too many connecting words and since this isn't an English class you're free to explore a little bit. Commas and semicolons are just one of my favorite methods, which means I probably use way too many, lol


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Messages In This Thread
Lost For Words - by Windwalker - 01-05-2014, 07:42 AM
RE: Lost For Words - by Deimos - 01-05-2014, 08:10 AM
RE: Lost For Words - by Kahlua - 01-05-2014, 11:32 AM
RE: Lost For Words - by Windwalker - 01-05-2014, 03:01 PM

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