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Satanic Silk Posts: 153
Hidden Account atk: 4.5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 6.0
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17hh :: 5 (Tallsun) HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
#1
Like mother like son, be more creative with your hues!
You're a mutt, a beast, blood so muddied.
Let the ancients write forever of your tragic demise.

Sincerely, Mr. Silk

0/2 Hidden Falls
0/3 World's Edge
0/4 Aurora Basin
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Adelric Posts: 101
Hidden Account
Stallion :: Hybrid :: 16.3hh :: 1.5 [Birdsong]
Tobias :: Common Cerndyr :: Lamplight Sevin
#2
Adelric protects himself, just in case

Like mother like son, be more creative with your hues!
--Has the same coloration as his mother, more or less
--Gender ref

You're a mutt, a beast, blood so muddied.
--Is a hybrid

Let the ancients write forever of your tragic demise.
--His name means noble commander. I would argue that many a noble commander has had a tragic demise during his lifetime.
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Please do not tag Adelric unless it is in an opening post

Satanic Silk Posts: 153
Hidden Account atk: 4.5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 6.0
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17hh :: 5 (Tallsun) HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
#3
Silk shakes his head. "I do not seek you, Adelric."
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Satanic Silk Posts: 153
Hidden Account atk: 4.5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 6.0
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17hh :: 5 (Tallsun) HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
#4
Ilios was sought!
(Per our alliance, he shall not be stolen, even if the stealth passes.)

Like mother like son, be more creative with your hues!
//Appearance ref:: he is colored very similarly to Parelia, his mother
//Gender ref

You're a mutt, a beast, blood so muddied.
//Breed/species ref:: can either refer to hybrid nature, or his many breeds of lineage

Let the ancients write forever of your tragic demise.
//Name ref:: Ilios is another name for Troy, of ancient mythology, written about by Homer. The sacking of Troy, Homer's Illiad...
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Tamme the Tempting Posts: 140
Administrator
Mare :: Other :: 2 :: 2 HP: 9001 | Buff: Admin
Tamme
#5
Like mother like son, be more creative with your hues!
//Appearance ref:: he is colored very similarly to Parelia, his mother
//Gender ref

+1 | appearance ref
+1 | gender ref


You're a mutt, a beast, blood so muddied.
//Breed/species ref:: can either refer to hybrid nature, or his many breeds of lineage

+1 | hybrid ref

Let the ancients write forever of your tragic demise.
//Name ref:: Ilios is another name for Troy, of ancient mythology, written about by Homer. The sacking of Troy, Homer's Illiad...

-1 | Ilios is not Troy, even if his name is another word for it. So this to me, sounded like a history reference for some sort of tragic life event. Also, the phrasing was confusing with the ancients write forever instead of "the ancients wrote about..." with the tenses. Also, even if you were to look at history, there are many, many, many tragic instances, even in ancient history. There was nothing tying specifically Troy to Ilios

2/3 is a fail from me

Odd the doer of things Posts: 115
Administrator atk: 23 | def: 42 | dam: 108
Mare :: Other :: 5"2 :: 27 HP: 108 | Buff: badass
Odd
#6
Like mother like son, be more creative with your hues!
//Appearance ref:: he is colored very similarly to Parelia, his mother 1 | Yep! Good clue
//Gender ref 1| Yep

You're a mutt, a beast, blood so muddied.
//Breed/species ref:: can either refer to hybrid nature, or his many breeds of lineage 1| Good.

Let the ancients write forever of your tragic demise.
//Name ref:: Ilios is another name for Troy, of ancient mythology, written about by Homer. The sacking of Troy, Homer's Illiad...
-1 | Misleading. The clue is far too vague. Why would I think of the ancient greeks? And specifically Homer's period as being 'ancient'? There are many who wrote about tragedies prior to this, and many after. There's nothing here to suggest that I ought to have been thinking about this period, or this writer. The reason I took off one point, is that even without the ambiguity of what the clue was meant to hint at, the "tragic demise" suggests something about Ilios himself. But our Ilios hasn't had any sort of tragic demise. There's nothing on his profile that could even remotely be connected here. A clue that might have worked would have been something like, "Homer wrote that your namesake fell" or something like that.

2/3 is a fail from me.

Blu the Bootyful Posts: 443
Administrator atk: 99 | def: 99 | dam: 99
Mare :: Other :: 5'7" :: 25 HP: 99999 | Buff: TWERK
Blu
#7
FAIL

Like mother like son, be more creative with your hues!
//Appearance ref:: he is colored very similarly to Parelia, his mother
//Gender ref
+1| [Appearance ref] pretty straight forward
+1| [Gender ref] also easy to decipher

You're a mutt, a beast, blood so muddied.
//Breed/species ref:: can either refer to hybrid nature, or his many breeds of lineage
+1| [Breed ref] another straightforward one

Let the ancients write forever of your tragic demise.
//Name ref:: Ilios is another name for Troy, of ancient mythology, written about by Homer. The sacking of Troy, Homer's Illiad...
-1| [Name ref] nothing about this points me to his name, and 'tragic demise' suggests he has died, or at least perhaps fallen from great graces/rank, which isn't the case, and what is overall made it a bit misleading. The only buzz word i really got from this was "the ancients" which revealed nothing to me about Ilios when I googled it, so on its own just suggests ancestors or possibly Helovia's gods which are sometimes referred to as Helvoia's ancients.


2/3 necessary to pass

You had some great, clear clues this time, it was just that last one was suddenly very vague and nonsensical. I definitely feel like you're improving though :)
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