| Absent Abyss atk: 4.5 | def: 8.0 | dam: 7.5 |
| Stallion :: Hybrid :: 17.3 hh :: Three years HP: 71 | Buff: NOVICE |
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Gwyneverre :: Plain White Dragon :: Fire Breath
& Brienne :: Royal Gold Dragon :: Frost Breath
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Kiara's Earth God Feather was sought~
:: [Item: Earth God's Feather | A feather from the God of the Earth which makes pretty flowers when it touches the ground.]
You're such a tiny speck, your existence spits in the eye of true predators. Black panther companion, but since companions are smaller versions of their un-domesticated cousins, he is not a "true" predator-- "He is much smaller than his wild cousins".
Your hide betrays your name, but there is something in your heart that comes quite close. The name "Kiara" = black, dark. She is red/white. However, she is "depressed" as noted in her personality, and depression is often referred to as a "dark" time/feeling.
You betrayed yourself once, letting your dedication falter. History reference & Personality Reference: After hearing Sun God and Spark God talk she doubted her loyalty to the Moon Goddess, which betrayed her loyal personality.
Such a shame that you don't know the bastard that planted you. Father = unknown.
Holy water cannot help you now
Thousand armies couldn't keep me out
I don't want your money
I don't want your crown
See I've come to burn your kingdom down
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Odd the doer of things
Posts: 115
| Administrator atk: 23 | def: 42 | dam: 108 |
| Mare :: Other :: 5"2 :: 27 HP: 108 | Buff: badass |
| Odd |
You're such a tiny speck, your existence spits in the eye of true predators. Black panther companion, but since companions are smaller versions of their un-domesticated cousins, he is not a "true" predator-- "He is much smaller than his wild cousins".
-1 | 'You're' here is extremely misleading. The clue references her companion in which case the pronoun is inappropriate.
BUT [I actually don't know if I can do this, and so if one of the admins would like to correct me if not! I'm unclear if I'm allowed to give points for 'what I thought the clue meant', or if it has to be what the stealther intended to the clue to mean.]
+1 | Lots used this as a physical description of their characters when blocking. Given that Kiara IS small (13.2), and given that her companion IS a predator (and thus 'spitting' could be taken as a proximity reference) I would give a point here.
Your hide betrays your name, but there is something in your heart that comes quite close. The name "Kiara" = black, dark. She is red/white. However, she is "depressed" as noted in her personality, and depression is often referred to as a "dark" time/feeling.
+1 | I worried over this one a little. The clue regarding her name is great, but I got iffy on the depression = black = heart thing. As someone who has depression I don't associate it with my heart at all. BUT insofar as heart is the metaphorical link to touchy-feely things, I'm okay with it.
You betrayed yourself once, letting your dedication falter. History reference & Personality Reference: After hearing Sun God and Spark God talk she doubted her loyalty to the Moon Goddess, which betrayed her loyal personality.
+1 | Yep, clearly on her profile.
Such a shame that you don't know the bastard that planted you. Father = unknown.
+1 | Also clearly found on her profile.
IF I'm allowed to do a -1/+1 on clue on, then this is a 3/3 PASS from me.
If not, it's a 2/3 fail.
Sevin the Sucky, I mean are you a # or vacuum?
Posts: 161
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| Mare :: Other :: 5'5" :: 25 |
| Sevin |
You're such a tiny speck, your existence spits in the eye of true predators. Black panther companion, but since companions are smaller versions of their un-domesticated cousins, he is not a "true" predator-- "He is much smaller than his wild cousins".
0| The "you're" in this sentences implies that it is the character of interest who is small, not a companion. That said, the character I was looking for was not a horse, so I got half-way to the clue's intent.
Your hide betrays your name, but there is something in your heart that comes quite close. The name "Kiara" = black, dark. She is red/white. However, she is "depressed" as noted in her personality, and depression is often referred to as a "dark" time/feeling.
0| This wasn't something that was easy to get to- searching "Kiara" doesn't bring up any pages for me that indicate the name meaning and I don't know the meaning of my character's names off-hand. On the other hand, the note disparity between hide and emotions was good, I thought.
You betrayed yourself once, letting your dedication falter. History reference & Personality Reference: After hearing Sun God and Spark God talk she doubted her loyalty to the Moon Goddess, which betrayed her loyal personality.
+1| Good, from the profile!
Such a shame that you don't know the bastard that planted you. Father = unknown.
+1| Easy enough history clue- good!
2/3 for me- Fail
Blu the Bootyful
Posts: 443
| Administrator atk: 99 | def: 99 | dam: 99 |
| Mare :: Other :: 5'7" :: 25 HP: 99999 | Buff: TWERK |
| Blu |
FAIL
You're such a tiny speck, your existence spits in the eye of true predators. Black panther companion, but since companions are smaller versions of their un-domesticated cousins, he is not a "true" predator-- "He is much smaller than his wild cousins".
-1| [companion ref] the use of "you" implies it's about the character, so the fact this is all about the companion totally threw me off.
Your hide betrays your name, but there is something in your heart that comes quite close. The name "Kiara" = black, dark. She is red/white. However, she is "depressed" as noted in her personality, and depression is often referred to as a "dark" time/feeling.
+1| [Name ref] unlike Sevin's comment above one of the third pages on a google search of Kiara was "meaning of Kiara" and came up with black. Overall I thought this clue was pretty good and everyone seemed to get it and understand it.
You betrayed yourself once, letting your dedication falter. History reference & Personality Reference: After hearing Sun God and Spark God talk she doubted her loyalty to the Moon Goddess, which betrayed her loyal personality.
+1| [Personality ref] good and straight forward!
Such a shame that you don't know the bastard that planted you. Father = unknown.
+1| [History ref] Yep!
2/3 necessary to pass
You're clues were all good - just vague enough they applied to several characters, but specific enough that all together were a certain one. Unfortunately that companion twist at the top just did you in. With stealths the wording is so so key!
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