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Kri

CHALLENGER -- Round 2

[Realism]
+ 1| Moving higher to be out of reach of horns and mouths.
+ 1| Attack: Diving hoof attack on Psyche.
+ 1| Attack: Biting at Psyche to cause pain and s

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion: Kri's dislike of Paladin and of helping him in the battle.
+ 1| Flow

CHALLENGER -- Round 3

[Realism]
+ 1| Surveying the battlefield from the air and picking out a target.
+ 1| Attack: Air crushing magic on Giselle.
+ 1| Attack: Diving hoof attack on Giselle.

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion: Desire to keep her allies safe.
+ 1| Flow

CHALLENGER -- Round 4

[Realism]
+ 1| Bouncing off of Giselle's rump back into the air.
+ 1| Defense: Kri's reaction to Giselle's magic and the use of her own magic to keep her in the air.
+ 1| Attack: Kicking at Giselle in retalliation to her trying to tear out a feather.
+ 1| Blacking out because of exhaustion.
+ 1| Attack: Biting at Alan's poll to keep her from slashing with her horn.

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion: Kri's determination is amazing.
+ 1| Flow

CHALLENGER -- Round 5 (defense only)

[Realism]
+ 1| Aching body due to Giselle's magic.
+ 1| Aching legs because of her rough landing.

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion:
+ 1| Flow


CHALLENGER

[Bonus]
+ 1| Relatively uninjured compared to most of those she attacked.
+ 1| Magic use.

[Creativity]
+ 1| Use of wind magic to stay airborn after Giselle's blood freezing attack.

Comments: Kri is always present in this fight. Her determination to win and protect her allies makes her very endearing. I also love her ending bit about Paladin. I really can't help but think that she secretly likes him.

TOTAL
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RE: QIAN Vs EDGE INVASION :: QIAN Rubrics - by Official - 10-05-2012, 01:32 PM

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