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Archibald

CHALLENGER -- Round 2

[Realism]
+ 1| Mentioning size differences when picking out his target.
+ 1| Attack: Shoulder ram to Arabella.

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion: Anger at Mauja for attacking Aaron.
+ 1| Flow

CHALLENGER -- Round 3

[Realism]
+ 1|Defense: Using the momentum from Monster's ram to spin away from Arabella's horn attack.
+ 1| Attack: Biting at Monster's neck.
+ 1| Attack: Using magic to knock Monster off balance.

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Flow

CHALLENGER -- Round 4
KNOCKED OUT


CHALLENGER -- Round 5 (defense only)

KNOCKED OUT


CHALLENGER

[Bonus]
+ 1| Magic Use.

[Creativity]
+ 1| I really liked the way you used an attack from one enemy to avoid an attack from another enemy.

Comments: I enjoyed reading Archibald's fight posts, so I'm really sad that you weren't able to finish. I think you have a good handle on attacks and defenses, I would just love to have more emotion coming from him in his fight.

TOTAL
Challenger - 12





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RE: QIAN Vs EDGE INVASION :: QIAN Rubrics - by Official - 10-05-2012, 01:33 PM

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