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#11

10-05-2012, 01:35 PM

R i c o c h e t

RICOCHET -- Round 2

[Realism]
+ 2| ATTACK: Exploding dust in the path of the brothers. Using the dust kicked up by Midas in the path of Lucius & Lloyd was brilliant.
+ 1| DEFENSE: Lucious's horn scraping along Rico's side.
+ 1| ATTACK: Cowkicking at the side of Lucious as he runs by is realistic and smart.
+ 1| DEFENSE: Barely missing Lloyd.
+ 1| ATTACK: Biting at Lucious's haunch, while trying to scrape his back legs.

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion
+ 1| Flow

RICOCHET -- Round 3

[Realism]
+ 1| DEFENSE: using speed of movements to escape Lucious's rear and horn swipe.
0 | DEFENSE: taking Lloyd's kick to his forearm instead of a more delicate part of the leg was good, but considering the height difference, a buck from such a large horse probably would have landed closer to the shoulder.
+ 1| ATTACK: Biting at Lloyd.
0 | ATTACK: Ramming into Lucious. This is smart, but I was not entirely certain when reading if you were just headed in his direction or actually attempting to ram him until I read your brief summary.
+ 1| ATTACK: using Guns to attack Lloyd who is busy rearing.
+ 1| DEFENSE: Lloyd's hooves bare touch because of Rico's movement toward Lucious

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion
+ 1| Flow

RICOCHET -- Round 4

[Realism]
+ 1| ATTACK: Using body as a battering ram to run through unicorns, while also taking note of the dangers of their horns. Not exactly smart, but very Ricochet.
+ 1| ATTACK: bucks at Monster and takes recoil pain from existing injuries.
+ 1| ATTACK: Biting at Delinne/Monster
+ 1| ATTACK: Half rearing to scrape Delinne's legs.
- 1| ATTACK: Shoving past Delinne and exiting the group. Should have stayed put because you do not really know what could happen during the span of time they are interacting.

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion
+ 1| Flow

RICOCHET -- Round 5 (defense only)

KNOCKED OUT

CHALLENGER

[Bonus]
+ 1| Mention of the fog and using it toward your advantage.
+ 1| Size difference and its implications.
+ 1| Effect of injuries throughout the invasion.
+ 1| Magic use

[Injuries]
None of note.

[Creativity]
+ 1| "At first Ricochet did not see them, but he could sense them, could feel them as their large hooves beat thunder into the sky that was the grassy terrain." Dat description.
+ 1| Cannot get over how cool it was to use Midas's dust cloud.

Comments: Ricochet is such a fun character to read, especially in fights! He has lots of energy and always has interesting emotion. You are so great at incorporating your surroundings, using the terrain to your advantage, as well as keeping your injuries in mind and present.

TOTAL
Ricochet - 28