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MIDAS

CHALLENGER -- Round 2

[Realism]
+ 1| ATTACK: Biting Lloyd's withers
+ 1| ATTACK: Hooves to Lloyd's haunches
+ 1| DEFENSE: Retreating to the sky quickly

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read - wonderful!
+ 1| Emotion- beautiful post!
+ 1| Flow

CHALLENGER -- Round 3

[Realism]
+ 1| ATTACK: Dive to knock over Lloyd
+ 1| ATTACK: Teeth to lloyd
+ 1| DEFENSE: Fly away!

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion - proof that short, easy to read posts can have quite a bit of emotion!
+ 1| Flow

CHALLENGER -- Round 4

[Realism]
+ 1| DEFENSE: Smart way to crash to the ground
+ 1| DEFENSE: Prepared with bared teeth after the magic wore off
+ 1| ATTACK: Biting neck
0| ATTACK: I am not sure how feasible it would be for Midas to kick out right after a bite like that, but you explained it with reason

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Emotion
+ 1| Flow

CHALLENGER -- Round 5 (defense only)

[Realism]
+ 1| DEFENSE: taking to the skies

[Prose]
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 2| Emotion - beautiful
+ 1| Flow


CHALLENGER

[Bonus]
+ 2| Using smaller size to his advantage against the larger twins
+ 1| Relatively uninjured

[Injuries]
0| No significant injury

[Creativity]
+ 1| Very easy to read style, wonderful

Comments: Excellent, especially for your first battle! I loved the emotion. My suggestion to increase your scores in the future, especially with a battle like this, is to attack multiple targets.

TOTAL
Challenger - 27





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RE: QIAN Vs EDGE INVASION :: QIAN Rubrics - by Official - 10-05-2012, 01:38 PM

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