| Absent Abyss atk: 3.5 | def: 8 | dam: 6.5 |
| Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.0 :: 5 years HP: 64 | Buff: NOVICE |
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Athvadar :: Albino Grey Wolf :: None
Semper |
10-13-2015, 01:47 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-15-2015, 09:39 PM by Blu.)
Woman
Of the stars
You are not who you say you are.
Even your voice is not your own.
Your arrogance caused your downfall;
Through the tear in the sky you plummeted to earth
Now you're lost and without a home,
I wonder if they even know your light has not been extinguished?
Where's your delicate grace now?
Fear lashes out
And eyesight burns.
So you hide behind an unstable wall,
Hoping that your swords will save you from the monsters.
Will you ever be able to recover your pure heritage?
I look forward to watching you find your place upon the stars again.
(given permission by lead to post stealth)
AB: 0/4
HF: 0/3
WE: 0/3
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magic & force is permitted, excluding death or permanent injury.
| Outcast atk: 5.5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5 |
| Filly :: Hybrid :: 14,2 hh :: 3 years HP: 64.5 | Buff: NOVICE |
| Chan |
Erthë protects herself
Woman - female
Of the stars - pale colors
You are not who you say you are.
Even your voice is not your own.
Your arrogance caused your downfall;
Through the tear in the sky you plummeted to earth
Now you're lost and without a home, - outcast
I wonder if they even know your light has not been extinguished?
Where's your delicate grace now? - small and lithe but has a limp
Fear lashes out
And eyesight burns. - half blind
So you hide behind an unstable wall,
Hoping that your swords will save you from the monsters. - has two sets of horns
Will you ever be able to recover your pure heritage?
I look forward to watching you find your place upon the stars again.
~| Use of magic and violence is always permitted |~
~| Please only tag in opening posts |~
| Absent Abyss atk: 3.5 | def: 8 | dam: 6.5 |
| Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.0 :: 5 years HP: 64 | Buff: NOVICE |
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Athvadar :: Albino Grey Wolf :: None
Semper |
"Don't worry, child. You are safe."
Erthe is not sought and there safe.
please tag Zenobia in all replies!
magic & force is permitted, excluding death or permanent injury.
| Outcast atk: 5.5 | def: 9 | dam: 5 |
| Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.2hh :: 7 HP: 62.5 | Buff: NOVICE |
| baylee |
"I wish not to return to the desert." Aurelia is safe.
Woman - aurelia is a lady
Of the stars - she's lightly colored,
You are not who you say you are. - she's told people a different name than her actual one && she's a deceitful liar
Even your voice is not your own. - could reference to a sort of facade (or her many facades)?
Your arrogance caused your downfall; - aurelia is extremely arrogant and it has ruined her life in many ways (i.e. when she thought she could beat kahlua and challenged her for the spot of queen, when she set the floating island on fire, when she tried to attack moon goddess, when she attacked the hidden falls horses, when she's never been anything but arrogant her whole life? ?XD)
Through the tear in the sky you plummeted to earth - history ref to when a stallion tried to rip off her wing? pegasus ref? earth god feather?
Now you're lost and without a home, - outcast reference
I wonder if they even know your light has not been extinguished? - fire magic
Where's your delicate grace now? - used to be considered graceful, but not anymore
Fear lashes out - she lashes out often?
And eyesight burns. - fire magic ref #2?
So you hide behind an unstable wall, aurelia is the definition of unstable
Hoping that your swords will save you from the monsters. - went through depression recently, which could easily be symbolized as monsters. also has a lot of enemies (monsters in her social life?).
Will you ever be able to recover your pure heritage? - pegiquine parents, she was the first non-hybrid of the fam? im not really sure on this one
I look forward to watching you find your place upon the stars again. - fluff to end stealth? XD
Success isn't the result of spontaneous combustion.
| Absent Abyss atk: 3.5 | def: 8 | dam: 6.5 |
| Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.0 :: 5 years HP: 64 | Buff: NOVICE |
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Athvadar :: Albino Grey Wolf :: None
Semper |
"Believe me. The desert doesn't want you back."
Aurelia is not sought and therefore safe.
please tag Zenobia in all replies!
magic & force is permitted, excluding death or permanent injury.
| Hidden Account atk: 5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5 |
| Mare :: Equine :: 16.2hh :: 9 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE |
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Mongrel :: Common Kitsune :: Dark Illusions
wanda |
Confutatis protects herself.
Woman
Gender ref.
Of the stars
You are not who you say you are.
Even your voice is not your own.
Your arrogance caused your downfall;
Is arrogant, has repeatedly made attempts to rule but to no avail.
Through the tear in the sky you plummeted to earth
Now you're lost and without a home,
Outcast
I wonder if they even know your light has not been extinguished?
Where's your delicate grace now?
Fear lashes out
And eyesight burns.
So you hide behind an unstable wall,
Hoping that your swords will save you from the monsters.
Will you ever be able to recover your pure heritage?
I look forward to watching you find your place upon the stars again.
| Absent Abyss atk: 3.5 | def: 8 | dam: 6.5 |
| Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.0 :: 5 years HP: 64 | Buff: NOVICE |
|
Athvadar :: Albino Grey Wolf :: None
Semper |
"I think we all agree that we'd rather keep you away from the Throat."
Confutatis is not sought.
please tag Zenobia in all replies!
magic & force is permitted, excluding death or permanent injury.
| Absent Abyss atk: 3.5 | def: 8 | dam: 6.5 |
| Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.0 :: 5 years HP: 64 | Buff: NOVICE |
|
Athvadar :: Albino Grey Wolf :: None
Semper |
48 hours is up for outcasts! Seren was sought with the target being her Enchanted Bear God Hide Armor.
Woman
Gender Reference
Of the stars
Magic Reference: her passive magic causes her "coat to shine like nebula".
You are not who you say you are.
History Reference: Seren was not born "Seren", rather she was born with the name Remi and had a different appearance.
Even your voice is not your own.
Voice Reference? sounds like Amber Marshall, thus her voice isn't "her own"/unique.
Your arrogance caused your downfall;
History/Personality Reference: in the past "Remi" was very arrogant and trespassed on a demon's land to prove her bravery, thinking they could not harm her. this ultimately lead to her identity being stolen.
Through the tear in the sky you plummeted to earth
Helovia Reference: arrived via the Rift ("The very air cracked and fell apart around..")
Now you're lost and without a home,
Outcast Reference
I wonder if they even know your light has not been extinguished?
Relationship/History Reference: family believes her to be dead therefore her "light", aka life/soul, has been put out/ceases to exist.
Where's your delicate grace now?
Appearance Reference: stated to have "delicate grace that is unnatural to her form."
Fear lashes out
Personality Reference: "...she would lash out when she thought she was being threatened but only from her fear."
And eyesight burns.
Appearance Reference? was burned by the blood of the bear god which caused her to lose vision in her left eye.
So you hide behind an unstable wall,
Personality Reference: her kindness is said to be hidden behind a wall of fear, sadness, and terror (which is not an exactly stable and secure mindset).
Hoping that your swords will save you from the monsters.
Species Reference: swords = horns. plural used because Seren has two horns.
Will you ever be able to recover your pure heritage?
Breed Reference: pureblood Arabian heritage
I look forward to watching you find your place upon the stars again.
Fluff
(I hope I labeled everything properly.)
please tag Zenobia in all replies!
magic & force is permitted, excluding death or permanent injury.
Time the Dice Queen
Posts: 144
| OOC Account atk: 50 | def: 50 | dam: 50 |
| Mare :: Other :: 5'7 :: 22 HP: 5050 | Buff: DROPKICK |
| Time |
PASS.
Woman
Gender Reference
+1 :: Gender :: Good
Of the stars
Magic Reference: her passive magic causes her "coat to shine like nebula".
+1 :: Magic :: Good!
You are not who you say you are.
History Reference: Seren was not born "Seren", rather she was born with the name Remi and had a different appearance.
+1 :: History :: Makes sense when explained and is on the profile!
Even your voice is not your own.
Voice Reference? sounds like Amber Marshall, thus her voice isn't "her own"/unique.
-1 :: This is misleading, because this is just a reference.
Your arrogance caused your downfall;
History/Personality Reference: in the past "Remi" was very arrogant and trespassed on a demon's land to prove her bravery, thinking they could not harm her. this ultimately lead to her identity being stolen.
0 :: History :: Already used history clue.
Through the tear in the sky you plummeted to earth
Helovia Reference: arrived via the Rift ("The very air cracked and fell apart around..")
0 :: History :: Already used history.
Now you're lost and without a home,
Outcast Reference
+1 :: Rank :: Good!
I wonder if they even know your light has not been extinguished?
Relationship/History Reference: family believes her to be dead therefore her "light", aka life/soul, has been put out/ceases to exist.
0 :: History :: Already used history.
Where's your delicate grace now?
Appearance Reference: stated to have "delicate grace that is unnatural to her form."
+1 :: Appearance :: On profile, good!
Fear lashes out
Personality Reference: "...she would lash out when she thought she was being threatened but only from her fear."
+1 :: Personality :: Awesome!
And eyesight burns.
Appearance Reference? was burned by the blood of the bear god which caused her to lose vision in her left eye.
0 :: Clue doesn't really make sense to the description. I was thinking of a character with an intense stare, or a character with red/orange/yellow eyes.
So you hide behind an unstable wall,
Personality Reference: her kindness is said to be hidden behind a wall of fear, sadness, and terror (which is not an exactly stable and secure mindset).
0 :: Personality already used
Hoping that your swords will save you from the monsters.
Species Reference: swords = horns. plural used because Seren has two horns.
+1 :: Unicorn reference
Will you ever be able to recover your pure heritage?
Breed Reference: pureblood Arabian heritage
+1 Breed Reference
I look forward to watching you find your place upon the stars again.
Fluff
0 :: Fluff
7/3 PASS
Blu the Bootyful
Posts: 443
| Administrator atk: 99 | def: 99 | dam: 99 |
| Mare :: Other :: 5'7" :: 25 HP: 99999 | Buff: TWERK |
| Blu |
PASS
Woman
Gender Reference
+1| [Gender ref] yup
Of the stars
Magic Reference: her passive magic causes her "coat to shine like nebula".
+1| [Magic ref] yeppers
You are not who you say you are.
History Reference: Seren was not born "Seren", rather she was born with the name Remi and had a different appearance.
+1| [History ref] sure thing
Even your voice is not your own.
Voice Reference? sounds like Amber Marshall, thus her voice isn't "her own"/unique.
0| [Voice ref] eeeeeeh I don't know about this one, lots of people use other people's voices as a way to recognize the character's tone, this wouldn't be something I would account to the character with the way it's worded.
Your arrogance caused your downfall;
History/Personality Reference: in the past "Remi" was very arrogant and trespassed on a demon's land to prove her bravery, thinking they could not harm her. this ultimately lead to her identity being stolen.
+1| [Personality ref] very good
Through the tear in the sky you plummeted to earth
Helovia Reference: arrived via the Rift ("The very air cracked and fell apart around..")
+1| [Rank ref] yes
Now you're lost and without a home,
Outcast Reference
0| [Rank ref] already scored above, but would be doable - however her official rank is still Riftian, not Outcast, to be semantical.
I wonder if they even know your light has not been extinguished?
Relationship/History Reference: family believes her to be dead therefore her "light", aka life/soul, has been put out/ceases to exist.
0| [History ref] Because this is about Seren's history versus a clue to her actual family I counted it as History which has already been scored above.
Where's your delicate grace now?
Appearance Reference: stated to have "delicate grace that is unnatural to her form."
+1| [Appearance ref] mmhmm
Fear lashes out
Personality Reference: "...she would lash out when she thought she was being threatened but only from her fear."
0| [Personality ref] already scored Personality
And eyesight burns.
Appearance Reference? was burned by the blood of the bear god which caused her to lose vision in her left eye.
0| [Personality ref] already scored Appearance
So you hide behind an unstable wall,
Personality Reference: her kindness is said to be hidden behind a wall of fear, sadness, and terror (which is not an exactly stable and secure mindset).
0| [Personality ref] already scored Personality
Hoping that your swords will save you from the monsters.
Species Reference: swords = horns. plural used because Seren has two horns.
+1| [Species ref] easy peasy
Will you ever be able to recover your pure heritage?
Breed Reference: pureblood Arabian heritage
0| [Breed ref] in what way does she need to recover it?
I look forward to watching you find your place upon the stars again.
Fluff
0| [no ref] fluff
7/3 necessary to pass
Blu the Bootyful
Posts: 443
| Administrator atk: 99 | def: 99 | dam: 99 |
| Mare :: Other :: 5'7" :: 25 HP: 99999 | Buff: TWERK |
| Blu |
@Seren 's armor to Zenobia.
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