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10-20-2015, 12:22 AM
FAIL
i came upon a masked fox today
(mask = her dark face, fox = conniving nature)
+1| [appearance ref] yup!
as i walked through nature's renewal, one shard of ice just forming
(born in birdsong, reference to cold nature and birth)
0|| [History ref] I see where you're going with this, but I think it was just too cryptic, and the word ice means so many more prominent things (basin, maqic) than a cold personality, at least with how it's worded her, to have lead to Colt.
once so charming, now beholden to none
("Once a kind-natured soul, that has long since been beaten out of her")
+1| [personality ref] Very nice!
that small vixen with terra her playground
(more foxy references, allusion to her magical abilities)
0| [magic ref] not enough to go on to lead me to Colt's magic, and not enough with the personality to lead me there either, though already scored above anyway. A gender ref might have been possible, but the inclusion of small vixen really made me think of a companion which sent me the wrong direction.
2/3 necessary to pass
Nice attempt! Just practicing how to toe that line between too vague but solveable :P
Also don't forget you could have revealed this much sooner! Outcasts only have that first 48 hours to reply, not like the multiple guesses herds get which earns them more time~
i came upon a masked fox today
(mask = her dark face, fox = conniving nature)
+1| [appearance ref] yup!
as i walked through nature's renewal, one shard of ice just forming
(born in birdsong, reference to cold nature and birth)
0|| [History ref] I see where you're going with this, but I think it was just too cryptic, and the word ice means so many more prominent things (basin, maqic) than a cold personality, at least with how it's worded her, to have lead to Colt.
once so charming, now beholden to none
("Once a kind-natured soul, that has long since been beaten out of her")
+1| [personality ref] Very nice!
that small vixen with terra her playground
(more foxy references, allusion to her magical abilities)
0| [magic ref] not enough to go on to lead me to Colt's magic, and not enough with the personality to lead me there either, though already scored above anyway. A gender ref might have been possible, but the inclusion of small vixen really made me think of a companion which sent me the wrong direction.
2/3 necessary to pass
Nice attempt! Just practicing how to toe that line between too vague but solveable :P
Also don't forget you could have revealed this much sooner! Outcasts only have that first 48 hours to reply, not like the multiple guesses herds get which earns them more time~
HP: 1100Helovia Hard Mode
