the Rift


What A Strange World [Cowboy’s small leather bag to Raeden]

Raeden Posts: 188
World's Edge Specter atk: 7 | def: 11 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 15.3hh :: 5 Years 3Months HP: 66.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Tin :: Plain Cerndyr :: Earth Spirit Dressy
#1
Since when is an ocean only inches away from a Desert?
Red rivers roaring with whitecaps fill this odd world.
The wild crazy storms take over the lands sometimes,
Sooth calm nights allow the storms to roll off the creature’s backs without a second thought  
The landscape is bare,
Leaving the creatures alone and fighting for themselves


AB: 0/3
DT: 0/4
HF: 0/3

Volterra the Indomitable Posts: 785
Dragon's Throat Sultan atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 17'2hh :: 3 HP: 80 | Buff: SENSE
Vérzés :: Common Red Dragon :: Frost Breath & Toxic Breath & Vadir :: Royal Gold Dragon :: Fire Breath & Shock Breath Snow
#2
Volterra protects himself.

Since when is an ocean only inches away from a Desert?
Red rivers roaring with whitecaps fill this odd world. - Red rivers = he has red eyes, whitecaps = white markings
The wild crazy storms take over the lands sometimes, - Dreams of kinghood
Sooth calm nights allow the storms to roll off the creature’s backs without a second thought - Creatures (plural) = he has two companions
The landscape is bare, - Equine
Leaving the creatures alone and fighting for themselves - Outcast

[ you can't stray from what you are, you're the closest thing to hell i've seen so far  ]
[ use of force/magic on him is permitted aside from death/maiming ]




Raeden Posts: 188
World's Edge Specter atk: 7 | def: 11 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 15.3hh :: 5 Years 3Months HP: 66.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Tin :: Plain Cerndyr :: Earth Spirit Dressy
#3
Raeden looks at the dark man with a smile " I do not seek you tall, dark, and handsome."

Abraham Posts: 113
Absent Abyss atk: 4.5 | def: 8.0 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Hybrid :: 17.3 hh :: Three years HP: 71 | Buff: NOVICE
Gwyneverre :: Plain White Dragon :: Fire Breath & Brienne :: Royal Gold Dragon :: Frost Breath Time
#4
Abraham protects himself.

Since when is an ocean only inches away from a Desert? Likes the Endless Blue but lived in the DT for a time

Red rivers roaring with whitecaps fill this odd world. White markings, has murdered several characters

The wild crazy storms take over the lands sometimes, Prone to anger

Sooth calm nights allow the storms to roll off the creature’s backs without a second thought

The landscape is bare, Equine hybrid

Leaving the creatures alone and fighting for themselves Two companions, outcast

Raeden Posts: 188
World's Edge Specter atk: 7 | def: 11 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 15.3hh :: 5 Years 3Months HP: 66.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Tin :: Plain Cerndyr :: Earth Spirit Dressy
#5
Raeden lookes over the large man with a chuckle " I do not seek you, I might be crazy but I'm not stupid. "

Rexanna Posts: 499
World's Edge Mare atk: 4.5 | def: 8.0 | dam: 5.5
Mare :: Unicorn :: 15hh :: 7 years HP: 61.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Marembo :: Marbled Polecat :: None Skylark
#6
Rexanna blocks her son, Rein.

Since when is an ocean only inches away from a Desert? - appearance, blue eyes with a gold pelt
Red rivers roaring with whitecaps fill this odd world. - appearance, red markings with white appy blanket.
The wild crazy storms take over the lands sometimes, - magic ref, spark magic
Sooth calm nights allow the storms to roll off the creature’s backs without a second thought  - history, used to spend time with Ashamin's companions.
The landscape is bare,
Leaving the creatures alone and fighting for themselves - tends to stay to himself
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Permission given for moderate power play.
Feel free to use magic/force on Rexanna, without killing her.
Please tag in every post!

Raeden Posts: 188
World's Edge Specter atk: 7 | def: 11 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 15.3hh :: 5 Years 3Months HP: 66.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Tin :: Plain Cerndyr :: Earth Spirit Dressy
#7
Raeden shakes her head no softly with a smile " I respect our alliance, and your dear child golden one. " Rein was not sought

Kaj The Aurelight Posts: 381
Hidden Falls Conscript atk: 4.0 | def: 9.0 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17.2hh :: 8 Years 9 Months HP: 69.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Arabella :: Common Zephyr :: Wakiya Brit
#8
Kaj blocks his daughter, Aleta

Since when is an ocean only inches away from a Desert? 
-- Blue and gold eyes, Sohalia is from the Throat and Kaj was from Edge/Falls

Red rivers roaring with whitecaps fill this odd world.
The wild crazy storms take over the lands sometimes,
-- Father is Czar with storm magic and was once called Stormbringer

Sooth calm nights allow the storms to roll off the creature’s backs without a second thought 
-- Lightning mark on her skin is active but harmless

The landscape is bare,
-- Minimalistic design, no items

Leaving the creatures alone and fighting for themselves
-- No companion

credit bronzehalo
Please only tag starting posts, spars, and threads collecting dust!
Plot with me here!

Raeden Posts: 188
World's Edge Specter atk: 7 | def: 11 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 15.3hh :: 5 Years 3Months HP: 66.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Tin :: Plain Cerndyr :: Earth Spirit Dressy
#9
Her cream skull looks to the winged man " I do not seek her. "

Time the Dice Queen Posts: 144
OOC Account atk: 50 | def: 50 | dam: 50
Mare :: Other :: 5'7 :: 22 HP: 5050 | Buff: DROPKICK
Time
#10
Please keep track of herd guess numbers. @Raeden

Raeden Posts: 188
World's Edge Specter atk: 7 | def: 11 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 15.3hh :: 5 Years 3Months HP: 66.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Tin :: Plain Cerndyr :: Earth Spirit Dressy
#11
OH crap Im soo SORRY!!!

HF:: 1/3
DT:: 0/4
AB:: 1/3

Raeden Posts: 188
World's Edge Specter atk: 7 | def: 11 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 15.3hh :: 5 Years 3Months HP: 66.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Tin :: Plain Cerndyr :: Earth Spirit Dressy
#12
48 hour outcast time is up!

Cowboy’s small leather bag was sought

Since when is an ocean only inches away from a Desert?
Appearance Ref :: one eye is Blue one is light brown brown
Red rivers roaring with whitecaps fill this odd world.
Appearance Ref:: Red Roan
The wild crazy storms take over the lands sometimes,
Personality Ref:: Says he is “Wild” in his profile
Sooth calm nights allow the storms to roll off the creature’s backs without a second thought
Personality Ref::"Calm- He is very laid back and lets most things just roll off of his back"
The landscape is bare,
Species Ref:: Equine
Leaving the creatures alone and fighting for themselves
Rank Ref: Outcast

Bunnie the Bonnie Lass Posts: 9
OOC Account
Filly :: Unicorn :: 16.2 :: 25
Bunnie
#13
Since when is an ocean only inches away from a Desert?
Appearance Ref :: one eye is Blue one is light brown
 0 - Desert being capitalized borders on this clue being misleading, but I can see appearance clues here as well.  Be careful what you capitalize.  

Red rivers roaring with whitecaps fill this odd world.
Appearance Ref::  Red Roan 
+1 - I like it.

The wild crazy storms take over the lands sometimes, 
Personality Ref:: Says he is “Wild” in his profile
+1 - Yep!

Sooth calm nights allow the storms to roll off the creature’s backs without a second thought  
Personality Ref::"Calm- He is very laid back and lets most things just roll off of his back" 
+1 - Yep!

The landscape is bare,
Species Ref:: Equine 
+1 - Indeed.

Leaving the creatures alone and fighting for themselves
Rank Ref: Outcast
+1 - Yep!

Bunnie the Bonnie Lass Posts: 9
OOC Account
Filly :: Unicorn :: 16.2 :: 25
Bunnie
#14
5/3 is a pass from me :D

Time the Dice Queen Posts: 144
OOC Account atk: 50 | def: 50 | dam: 50
Mare :: Other :: 5'7 :: 22 HP: 5050 | Buff: DROPKICK
Time
#15
Since when is an ocean only inches away from a Desert?
Appearance Ref :: one eye is Blue one is light brown
 0 - "Desert" capitalized is giving it a proper noun, so I was convinced that this was a Dragon's Throat character. While it is not misleading, it is still substantial.  

Red rivers roaring with whitecaps fill this odd world.
Appearance Ref::  Red Roan 
+1 - Very clever!

The wild crazy storms take over the lands sometimes, 
Personality Ref:: Says he is “Wild” in his profile
+1 - Great

Sooth calm nights allow the storms to roll off the creature’s backs without a second thought  
Personality Ref::"Calm- He is very laid back and lets most things just roll off of his back" 
0 - Already have a personality reference.

The landscape is bare,
Species Ref:: Equine 
+1 - I thought about this!

Leaving the creatures alone and fighting for themselves
Rank Ref: Outcast
0 - The way this reads you need to have the line before it to make sense, so this does not pass. I almost marked this as a -1 because the use of "Creatures" as plural suggests that there is more than one character here: a twin, or companion(s), etc.

3/3 Pass from me.

Time the Dice Queen Posts: 144
OOC Account atk: 50 | def: 50 | dam: 50
Mare :: Other :: 5'7 :: 22 HP: 5050 | Buff: DROPKICK
Time
#16
Cowboy’s small leather bag to Raeden.


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