the Rift


Once Upon A Time

Lotherarius Posts: 37
Outcast
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17.0hh :: 6 :: Ages in Tallsun
Danjah
#1
Let me tell you a tale,
Of a queen that was born,
In the ruins of something once great,
But you were not alone, were you?
The lavender dances in your eyes,
You can't speak to others like you should or could,
Poor little thing, 
The only gold that resembles a queen is what she bears on her body,
Not a queen really...

AB 0/3
DT 0/4
WE 0/4

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Ophelia the Amaranthine Posts: 701
Outcast atk: 6.5 | def: 10.5 | dam: 7
Mare :: Hybrid :: 16.0 hh :: 6 Years HP: 77 | Buff: BULK
Tinek :: Royal Silver Dragon :: Frost Breath & Shock Breath Tamme
#2
Ophelia blocks herself:

Let me tell you a tale, ---> Based on Hamlet
Of a queen that was born, ---> Female
In the ruins of something once great, ---> Isilme born
But you were not alone, were you? ---> Has a twin
The lavender dances in your eyes, ---> Flowers based on Hamlet story maybe...
You can't speak to others like you should or could, ---> History - never communicated like the others
Poor little thing,
The only gold that resembles a queen is what she bears on her body,
Not a queen really... ---> Has no gold markings




Undertow has come to take me. Guided by the blazing sun. Look at everything around us. Look at everything we've done.
Please. Anyone. I don't think I can save myself. I'm drowning.


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Zyanya Posts: 70
Outcast
Mare :: Unicorn :: 14.1 hh :: VI
Tai
#3
Zyanya blocks herself.

Let me tell you a tale,
Of a queen that was born,
In the ruins of something once great,
--- Zyanya's former home is currently undergoing a civil war
But you were not alone, were you?
--- She had two siblings.
The lavender dances in your eyes,
--- Her eyes are lavender.
You can't speak to others like you should or could,
--- From her profile: "The quiet mare finds her tongue clamped in most situations to avoid upsetting her company."
Poor little thing,
The only gold that resembles a queen is what she bears on her body,
--- Zyanya's coloring is pale gold and blue.
Not a queen really...

Lotherarius Posts: 37
Outcast
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17.0hh :: 6 :: Ages in Tallsun
Danjah
#4
A dark smile rips across Lotherarius' lips. "I seek neither of you, go home."

Pyrene was sought!

__________________

Let me tell you a tale, -- fluff
Of a queen that was born, -- gender reference, 'queen' being a female
In the ruins of something once great, -- as on profile, Pyrene was born in the ruins of a temple, history reference
But you were not alone, were you? -- has a twin, lineage reference
The lavender dances in your eyes, -- purple eyes, appearance reference
You can't speak to others like you should or could, -- as on profile, finds it hard to hold conversations
Poor little thing,
The only gold that resembles a queen is what she bears on her body, -- appearance reference to the gold plated horns
Not a queen really...

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Bunnie the Bonnie Lass Posts: 9
OOC Account
Filly :: Unicorn :: 16.2 :: 25
Bunnie
#5
Let me tell you a tale, -- fluff
Of a queen that was born, -- gender reference, 'queen' being a female
+1 Gender - woot
In the ruins of something once great, -- as on profile, Pyrene was born in the ruins of a temple, history reference
+1 History - ah neat!
But you were not alone, were you? -- has a twin, lineage reference
+1 Lineage - clever
The lavender dances in your eyes, -- purple eyes, appearance reference
+1 Appearance - yep
You can't speak to others like you should or could, -- as on profile, finds it hard to hold conversations
+1 Personality - woo
Poor little thing, 
The only gold that resembles a queen is what she bears on her body, -- appearance reference to the gold plated horns
+0 Appearance - already got a point for this category but I do love the word play here intensely.
Not a queen really...

5/3 is a pass from me!

Odd the doer of things Posts: 115
Administrator atk: 23 | def: 42 | dam: 108
Mare :: Other :: 5"2 :: 27 HP: 108 | Buff: badass
Odd
#6
Let me tell you a tale, -- fluff
Of a queen that was born, -- gender reference, 'queen' being a female
-1 | given that she has NO royal lineage, I found this misleading. While it's true that queens are traditionally female, first and foremost it's a ranked position, of which this character has no relation.

In the ruins of something once great, -- as on profile, Pyrene was born in the ruins of a temple, history reference
+1 | history

But you were not alone, were you? -- has a twin, lineage reference
+1 | Nice! Lineage ref

The lavender dances in your eyes, -- purple eyes, appearance reference
+1 | Appearance

You can't speak to others like you should or could, -- as on profile, finds it hard to hold conversations
-1 | CAN'T speak is VERY different from finding it hard to hold conversations.

Poor little thing,
-1 | 15.3 isn't little. I know this wasn't meant to be a clue, but even fluff can count against you if it's misleading!

The only gold that resembles a queen is what she bears on her body, -- appearance reference to the gold plated horns
+1 | Appearance

Not a queen really...


1/3 is a fail from me.

Tamme the Tempting Posts: 140
Administrator
Mare :: Other :: 2 :: 2 HP: 9001 | Buff: Admin
Tamme
#7
Let me tell you a tale, -- fluff
Of a queen that was born, -- gender reference, 'queen' being a female

0 | This definitely indicates royal lineage of some sort but that's not listed on her profile
In the ruins of something once great, -- as on profile, Pyrene was born in the ruins of a temple, history reference
+1 | Yup yup
But you were not alone, were you? -- has a twin, lineage reference
+1 | I guessed this one yup
The lavender dances in your eyes, -- purple eyes, appearance reference
+1 | Yes, I like this clue quite a bit
You can't speak to others like you should or could, -- as on profile, finds it hard to hold conversations
-1 | This one I do feel was misleading because of the same reasons as aud
Poor little thing,
-1 | Definitely not little Make sure your fluff isn't misleading!
The only gold that resembles a queen is what she bears on her body, -- appearance reference to the gold plated horns
Not a queen really...

+1 | Guessed this one too!

2/3 Is a fail from me D:


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