the Rift


Hollow Demise

Valentine Posts: 203
Hidden Account
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.1 :: 12
teeroo
#1
Your bones are light, as is your mind
But are you aware of your surroundings?
You speak of things that make my mind tweak,
And I want it to end now
Though the gold light shines on you,
the color doesn’t change,
and you continue along the enemy’s path.
For you are my enemy, and I want you to know it.
I want you to suffer, for you have taken from me.
Prepare yourself, because you haven’t seen hell like this before.
I am no longer going into the cbox due to recent events. You can PM on this (Valentine's) account, go on my skype (teeroo777), or PM me on DA (teeroo). Thank you.


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Ascended Helovian

Ophelia the Amaranthine Posts: 701
Outcast atk: 6.5 | def: 10.5 | dam: 7
Mare :: Hybrid :: 16.0 hh :: 6 Years HP: 77 | Buff: BULK
Tinek :: Royal Silver Dragon :: Frost Breath & Shock Breath Tamme
#2
Phi blocks herself




Undertow has come to take me. Guided by the blazing sun. Look at everything around us. Look at everything we've done.
Please. Anyone. I don't think I can save myself. I'm drowning.


Please tag me in every response!

Phaedra the Opulent Posts: 343
Deceased
Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.3 :: 6 Buff: NOVICE
Stella :: Secretary Bird :: None Aud
#3
I'm sure Phae, Myr, and Vermillion are safe.
 HP: 45.5

Kri the Resolute Posts: 243
Hidden Account
Mare :: Pegasus :: 14.3hh :: 10 Buff: NUMB
Boom Boom!
#4
Kri protects Leander.

ali Posts: 22
OOC Account
Mare :: Hybrid :: 5'4 :: 28
ali
#5
Ktu protects herself

Murder Posts: N/A
Unregistered
:: :: ::
#6
Murder protects himself

Valentine Posts: 203
Hidden Account
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.1 :: 12
teeroo
#7
All others are safe, because Leander was sought.

Your bones are light, as is your mind (Pegasus ref)
But are you aware of your surroundings? (fluff)
You speak of things that make my mind tweak, (fluff)
And I want it to end now (fluff)
Though the gold light shines on you, (Coat Ref)
the color doesn’t change, (fluff)
and you continue along the enemy’s path. (Area ref, since he is in the Throat)
For you are my enemy, and I want you to know it. (Same as above)
I want you to suffer, for you have taken from me. (fluff)
Prepare yourself, because you haven’t seen hell like this before. (fluff)

How was it for my first stealth?
I am no longer going into the cbox due to recent events. You can PM on this (Valentine's) account, go on my skype (teeroo777), or PM me on DA (teeroo). Thank you.


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Svetlana Posts: N/A
Unregistered
:: :: ::
#8
Not completely sure if I would pass it. The third ref, about the area, doesn't seem the best. Up to admin in the end.

Pretty good for your first stealth :)

Psyche the DarkEmpress Posts: 380
Deceased
Mare :: Unicorn :: 15.3 hh :: 8 (ages in Orangemoon) Buff: ENDURE
RayoDeSoleil
#9
I agree. I want to pass it, but I'm not sure that the area clue was quite clear enough. To be sure in the future, perhaps be sure to include more clues?

But it did much better than mine, so <3. :)

Faelene Posts: 297
Hidden Account
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16 :: 9 Buff: NOVICE
Sica
#10
Kri protected Leander so yeah...

Tamme the Tempting Posts: 140
Administrator
Mare :: Other :: 2 :: 2 HP: 9001 | Buff: Admin
Tamme
#11
Kri protected Leander, therefore the stealth is VOID. .


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