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ORANGEMOON :: Year Eight
 ORANGEMOON cools off the lands with a a viscious force. Colder than normal, a sign of things to come during Frostfall, Helovia is bathed in a rich tropical lushness - albiet a cold one. The coastlines of the Dragon's Throat are pelted constantly by tidal waves, and the desert climate is humid but chilly. Ice begins to form early in the Aurora Basin leaving the winding trails slick and dangerous. The mists of the World's Edge coat everything in a glistening crystalline shine which encourages mould to grow everywhere. The Spectral Marsh is the only area which remains fertile, blissfully temperature and lush.
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June, 2017 
WEAVER, Corporal of the Aurora Basin, is a relatively recent addition to Helovia and has taken it by storm. Branded with the seal of Death on her chest, intrigue and interest follow both her past and present. Though she is assuredly beautiful, her sometimes sharp personality reveals that there is more to this uni-peg hybrid than meets the eye. Proving herself able on the battlefield in the Basin’s warrior ranks, we can’t wait to see her test her mettle against the looming Kaos happenings! Congratulations! |
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12-19-2012, 12:20 AM
Need some tea?
How about shiny things with clarity? You might be more capable of influence. Hey, don't shoot the messenger just because you need to change. ![[Image: faeleneicon.png]](http://i800.photobucket.com/albums/yy285/schwartze_asylum/faeleneicon.png)
12-20-2012, 03:27 PM
Phae protects herself.
Shiny things with clarity; 'Phaedra' can mean 'the beautiful, the bright, the shiny one' Capable of influence; Spy for the Grey? Just because you need to change; personality reference? I'm sure Fealene thinks Phae needs to change :P 4 lines for age.  HP: 45.5
12-20-2012, 07:16 PM
Rishima blocks herself.
Need some tea? --> Could be a name reference. Tea is native to the southeast Asian area, and Rishima is a Hindi name How about shiny things with clarity? --> Color reference, since she is now a shiny gold with clear black on top You might be more capable of influence. --> Rank, she holds a high rank in her herd and is the lead's sister, but doesn't do much that's influential Hey, don't shoot the messenger just because you need to change. --> Personality, as she wants to adjust her attitude and be a bigger part of her herd
12-21-2012, 01:15 PM
Kri blocks Cirrus.
Need some tea? How about shiny things with clarity? Cirrus holds an amulet. You might be more capable of influence. Cirrus is a heavy (and sometimes bad) influence on her sister. Hey, don't shoot the messenger just because you need to change. Her coat is ever changing.
12-21-2012, 10:28 PM
Kri protects herself.
Only One Direction Kri has the magical ability to shift the direction of the wind. Need some tea? Color reference. Black tea usually steeps to a color that reminds me of her coat. xP How about shiny things with clarity? Kri has an amulet. You might be more capable of influence. Kri is a leader, so capable of influence. Hey, don't shoot the messenger just because you need to change. She has a temper on her.
Aurelius is wanted.
Only One Direction Can you take to the Dragon's Throat as it's surrounded by water. Need some tea? You would ask what kind of tea. Basics are Green,Black,White. Aurelius has a green eye and a black eye. Faelene needs him back. How about shiny things with clarity? Shiny things refers to his mane and tail. They are platinum coloring. Clarity would refer to his "unblemished" body. You might be more capable of influence. In his personality he can be manipulative. He is also an Ambassador of the Basin. Hey, don't shoot the messenger just because you need to change. Messenger also refers to ambassador of the Basin. The need to change is because he is on a quest to transform into a wolverine.
12-24-2012, 12:57 AM
Only One Direction
Can you take to the Dragon's Throat as it's surrounded by water. I would take off a point for this - what does the Throat have to do with anything..? Aurelius is a member of the Basin, and so is Faelene, techinically. Need some tea? You would ask what kind of tea. Basics are Green,Black,White. Aurelius has a green eye and a black eye. Faelene needs him back. Excellent. How about shiny things with clarity? Shiny things refers to his mane and tail. They are platinum coloring. Clarity would refer to his "unblemished" body. Good. You might be more capable of influence. In his personality he can be manipulative. He is also an Ambassador of the Basin. Good. Hey, don't shoot the messenger just because you need to change. Messenger also refers to ambassador of the Basin. The need to change is because he is on a quest to transform into a wolverine. Good I would pass this stealth. HP: 45.5
12-24-2012, 01:08 AM
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Not a direct reference. Need some tea? Since there is also white tea, oolong tea, english tea, black tea, etc, etc this clue would need alot more definition for it to be fair. Tea color is sort of like coffee. To me, this would indicate brown. How about shiny things with clarity? Shiny does not mean platinum. Alot of things are shiny. Even saying platinum would work, or silver. Clarity is an interesting word, and I would pass it if it had more of a clear direction. You might be more capable of influence. Good one, refers to being an ambassador which is an influential rank Hey, don't shoot the messenger just because you need to change. Double reference as above, so it doesnt count. And the changing one is pretty good for his quest. Only two definite clues. Fail. I would make sure to work on giving your clues a direction. It doesnt have to be obvious, lol. Just more of a word association. Not all words can substitute for others, which makes writing stealths very hard. Keep up the good work though.
12-24-2012, 01:19 AM
FAIL
Only One Direction Can you take to the Dragon's Throat as it's surrounded by water. Fail - not enough of a direct clue, this could be applied countless ways. Need some tea? You would ask what kind of tea. Basics are Green,Black,White. Aurelius has a green eye and a black eye. Faelene needs him back. Fail - there are so many different types and colors of tea and no reference that this would be an eye color at all. Too vague. How about shiny things with clarity? Shiny things refers to his mane and tail. They are platinum coloring. Clarity would refer to his "unblemished" body. Fail - these clues also are very vague and can be applied in many different ways. You might be more capable of influence. In his personality he can be manipulative. He is also an Ambassador of the Basin. Pass - this is a tentative pass, because it still seems a bit vague, but it is your strongest clue. Hey, don't shoot the messenger just because you need to change. Messenger also refers to ambassador of the Basin. The need to change is because he is on a quest to transform into a wolverine. Fail - this clue seems to apply more to Faelene than Aurelius and is again very vague. Change can mean a lot of things, shift or change forms, would have been a clearer, passing hint to his quest. Overall this stealth was far too vague.  HP: 1100Helovia Hard Mode
12-24-2012, 01:31 AM
I would definitely fail this too.
Only One Direction Can you take to the Dragon's Throat as it's surrounded by water. Fail - this is not a direct clue to anything. Need some tea? You would ask what kind of tea. Basics are Green,Black,White. Aurelius has a green eye and a black eye. Faelene needs him back. Fail -As mentioned above, too broad a clue. How are we supposed to know what colour tea you are referring to? How about shiny things with clarity? Shiny things refers to his mane and tail. They are platinum coloring. Clarity would refer to his "unblemished" body. Fail - shiny things to me refer to scales of a dragon, or amulets. Clarity makes me think of eyes or something. I don’t know. This line can be interpreted so many ways it can't be a direct clue. You might be more capable of influence. In his personality he can be manipulative. He is also an Ambassador of the Basin. Pass - This is a good, direct clue to his rank. Hey, don't shoot the messenger just because you need to change. Messenger also refers to ambassador of the Basin. The need to change is because he is on a quest to transform into a wolverine. Pass - Could be more direct, but it is certainly closer to what you need. Could I ask teeroo; your reply is very short and vague, would you mind elaborating some? 
12-24-2012, 01:46 AM
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Can you take to the Dragon's Throat as it's surrounded by water. This was confusing, as I don't know what it has to do with the Throat. Need some tea? You would ask what kind of tea. Basics are Green,Black,White. Aurelius has a green eye and a black eye. Faelene needs him back. I understand where the color is from, because there are those types of teas, and the color reference works. My first thought was name meaning, so I wouldn't have looked for that, and I don't know what is means, but I thought color reference was good. How about shiny things with clarity? Shiny things refers to his mane and tail. They are platinum coloring. Clarity would refer to his "unblemished" body. I think this was a really good clue, because platinum is definitely shiny, and I would match clarity to unblemished. You might be more capable of influence. In his personality he can be manipulative. He is also an Ambassador of the Basin. Profile reference is good, and I like the Ambassador nudge, because it does have to do with influence. Hey, don't shoot the messenger just because you need to change. Messenger also refers to ambassador of the Basin. The need to change is because he is on a quest to transform into a wolverine. Even though Ambassador is repeated, it's still a good clue because it goes with the transform into a wolverine.  Credits to picture on page, since they won't show up since they are in black: http://twiwolf.deviantart.com/art/Free-Love-362011598
12-25-2012, 11:08 AM
Thanks for the input. :)
I made this stealth vague as my other ones seemed obvious, and I thought the Throat might see the Basin would want their herd members back. I shall try again. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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