the Rift


A Letter. [Insanity to Osiris]

Osiris Posts: 88
Hidden Account
Stallion :: Hybrid :: 17.3hh :: 13.
Comadre :: Plain Black Dragon :: Fire Breath Boom Boom!
#1
Biting
Fires leave cool burns
A cur

Shield
Blocking the light
Life follows death

Rupture Strengthen Dissolve Rebuild
Flee Find Grow Empty

Insanity Posts: N/A
Unregistered
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#2
Insanity blocks Aaron.

Biting
Fires leave cool burns
Magic reference, illusionary fire
A cur

Shield
Blocking the light
Life follows death

Rupture Strengthen Dissolve Rebuild
History reference, Aaron has been through lots of heartache but always come out more determined to improve himself.
Flee Find Grow Empty
History reference, he has left the Edge to join Foothills and rebuild.

Osiris Posts: 88
Hidden Account
Stallion :: Hybrid :: 17.3hh :: 13.
Comadre :: Plain Black Dragon :: Fire Breath Boom Boom!
#3
Aaron is not who I seek.

Osiris Posts: 88
Hidden Account
Stallion :: Hybrid :: 17.3hh :: 13.
Comadre :: Plain Black Dragon :: Fire Breath Boom Boom!
#4
Time is up.

Insanity was sought.

Biting
Personality ref. "She can be defensive and hot-headed as well as sharp tongued."

Fires leave cool burns
History reference to two events: Fire = passion, cold burns = heartache. Jackal breaking her heart.
Also, she left Avalon after the land burned down ridding her of her home.


A cur
History reference to Jackal.


Shield
Rank reference. Insanity "shields" her herdmates from potential stealths. Defender.

Blocking the light
Color reference. Blocked light is dark, she is dark.
Rank reference. Shadow.


Life follows death
"The mare took a chance at heading to the cliff in order to transfer from one life to the next."
History ref. Unsuccessful suicide attempt.


Rupture Strengthen Dissolve Rebuild
History ref.
Heartbreak and suicide attempt, finally moves past her dark times, the collapse of Avalon, moving on to seek a new home.


Flee Find Grow Empty
History ref.
Fleeing Avalon, finding Helovia and a herd, fitting in and growing as a character, but her personality section states: "While there resides a deep hole in her chest, it is possible to be filled again." - empty.

Blu the Bootyful Posts: 443
Administrator atk: 99 | def: 99 | dam: 99
Mare :: Other :: 5'7" :: 25 HP: 99999 | Buff: TWERK
Blu
#5
PASS

Ultimately you pass, but I really didn't like this stealth as all your clues were rather vague to me and had some complex explanations to them. Using single words as clues leaves way too much variability of interpretation. However, you had 3 clues that were passed, so the stealth is valid.


Biting
Personality ref. "She can be defensive and hot-headed as well as sharp tongued."
Fail. This is far too vague =/ sharp-tongued to me doesn't mean biting.

Fires leave cool burns
History reference to two events: Fire = passion, cold burns = heartache. Jackal breaking her heart.
Also, she left Avalon after the land burned down ridding her of her home.
Fail. This also doesn't really make much sense to me? You would have to interpret fire and cool burns in the exact same way you did.

A cur
History reference to Jackal.
Pass. Still vague, but a decent clue.


Shield
Rank reference. Insanity "shields" her herdmates from potential stealths. Defender.
Pass. Same as above.

Blocking the light
Color reference. Blocked light is dark, she is dark.
Rank reference. Shadow.
Pass. Your best clue.

Life follows death
"The mare took a chance at heading to the cliff in order to transfer from one life to the next."
History ref. Unsuccessful suicide attempt.
Fail. This clue doesn't really make sense to me =/

Rupture Strengthen Dissolve Rebuild
History ref.
Heartbreak and suicide attempt, finally moves past her dark times, the collapse of Avalon, moving on to seek a new home.
Fail. These are just words and do not, I feel, specifically direct me.

Flee Find Grow Empty
History ref.
Fleeing Avalon, finding Helovia and a herd, fitting in and growing as a character, but her personality section states: "While there resides a deep hole in her chest, it is possible to be filled again." - empty.
Fail. Same as above.
 HP: 1100

Helovia Hard Mode

Knox Posts: 262
Outcast atk: 4 | def: 7.5 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 17hh :: 7 Years [Tallsun] HP: 67.5 | Buff: NOVICE
Jen
#6
I think Blu outlined it well, and I agree- a Pass. The last stanza was tougher, but the first ones were clear enough to suggest insanity.

Tamme the Tempting Posts: 140
Administrator
Mare :: Other :: 2 :: 2 HP: 9001 | Buff: Admin
Tamme
#7
Also pass for the same reasons and wrap this up. :)


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