I really appreciate the advice. You're right, I shouldn't have let myself get so tangled up in all of this. I feel like I got wrapped up in a net last night when I tried posting because I was fed up with all of the stylistic muses in my brain. xD I feel embarrassed to think this now -.- but I thought it was tacky to keep switching styles and perspectives, and I never really thought about the mental pain I was putting myself (and readers) through when I -didn't- realize it was hurting my writing. I need to do some meditation or something, and pull this tenseness out of me.
I kept thinking that everything needed to be consistent, but that makes for boring writing.
I'll play around with some style changes and stuff, see what happens.