the Rift


I am you

Rishima Posts: 137
World's Edge Moon Advocate
Mare :: Equine :: 16.2 :: 15 Buff: NOVICE
Kali :: Common Griffin :: Draining Clutch Charks
#1
The clouds bloom red with blood, my dear
The death of summer's glow
I watch you from my lofty heights
You follow those below.

I'll freeze your bones and clear your mind
You'll never lie to me
I don't need moonbeams on my back
Your soul for me to see.
Ascended Helovian

Ophelia the Amaranthine Posts: 701
Outcast atk: 6.5 | def: 10.5 | dam: 7
Mare :: Hybrid :: 16.0 hh :: 6 Years HP: 77 | Buff: BULK
Tinek :: Royal Silver Dragon :: Frost Breath & Shock Breath Tamme
#2
Phi blocks herself.

The clouds bloom red with blood, my dear --> white mane with red fringes
The death of summer's glow
I watch you from my lofty heights -- >tall
You follow those below.

I'll freeze your bones and clear your mind -- >Tinek is the only frost dragon
You'll never lie to me -- >can read minds
I don't need moonbeams on my back --> white in color
Your soul for me to see. --> can read minds




Undertow has come to take me. Guided by the blazing sun. Look at everything around us. Look at everything we've done.
Please. Anyone. I don't think I can save myself. I'm drowning.


Please tag me in every response!

Rishima Posts: 137
World's Edge Moon Advocate
Mare :: Equine :: 16.2 :: 15 Buff: NOVICE
Kali :: Common Griffin :: Draining Clutch Charks
#3
Ophelia was sought

The clouds bloom red with blood, my dear
Color ref - white with red accents
The death of summer's glow
History ref - Sun God rejected her
I watch you from my lofty heights
Species ref - she cannot fly
You follow those below.
Personality ref - profile says she follows Ktu around like a puppy

I'll freeze your bones and clear your mind
Companion ref - see below
You'll never lie to me
Personality ref - profile says she's good at lying
I don't need moonbeams on my back
Your soul for me to see.
Companion ref - see below

Starting with the title, the poem follows a theme of coming from Tinek's pov. I am you refers to their soul bond, making them more or less one; I watch you from my lofty heights points at the fact that Tinek can fly, but her two breeds both exclude flight. I'll freeze your bones and clear your mind is a reference to his cold magic, and his ability to see into her mind; I don't need moonbeams on my back/Your soul for me to see. is a final reinforcement that this is not coming from Rishi's pov, as she has a moon marking on her back and soul reading magic, but Tinek needs neither to see into Ophelia's heart.


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