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03-01-2013, 07:43 PM
After some thought, I've decided to FAIL this stealth.
While I believe it had the potential to be passable, I feel as though most of the clues were too vague and/or misleading for Psyche's character.
You look at the crimson red rose.
While I agree that Psyche is a stranger to love, I find that this clue didn't immediately pop-out as her. I feel that this was far too vague/misleading to properly identify her with, as I was searching for some kind of physical appearance.
So dark.
Perhaps the only clue that I do agree with. Dark = Black :: Color Reference. Good clue! :D
Don't cry wolf in front of him.
Terribly misleading. I believe that this clue was one of the most possibly influential ones in the stealth, and to find out that it was pure fluff...
Truly, you manly beast, confess.
Once more, far too vague/misleading. I feel as though while this was a good attempt at Psyche, it was too directing towards a male character. Perhaps if there had been more directed towards a 'female' perspective, then maybe...
Where do you emerge from?
This could be good, but once again, I feel as though it could be directed at possibly half of the population here on Helovia. It doesn't scream Psyche to me, once again...
Overall, like I said earlier, I feel that this had the potential to be a passing stealth. :3 I just feel like the atmosphere of this stealth was directed towards a male character, not female. If there had been more clues pointed towards the female populace, then my opinion probably would have changed.
While I believe it had the potential to be passable, I feel as though most of the clues were too vague and/or misleading for Psyche's character.
You look at the crimson red rose.
While I agree that Psyche is a stranger to love, I find that this clue didn't immediately pop-out as her. I feel that this was far too vague/misleading to properly identify her with, as I was searching for some kind of physical appearance.
So dark.
Perhaps the only clue that I do agree with. Dark = Black :: Color Reference. Good clue! :D
Don't cry wolf in front of him.
Terribly misleading. I believe that this clue was one of the most possibly influential ones in the stealth, and to find out that it was pure fluff...
Truly, you manly beast, confess.
Once more, far too vague/misleading. I feel as though while this was a good attempt at Psyche, it was too directing towards a male character. Perhaps if there had been more directed towards a 'female' perspective, then maybe...
Where do you emerge from?
This could be good, but once again, I feel as though it could be directed at possibly half of the population here on Helovia. It doesn't scream Psyche to me, once again...
Overall, like I said earlier, I feel that this had the potential to be a passing stealth. :3 I just feel like the atmosphere of this stealth was directed towards a male character, not female. If there had been more clues pointed towards the female populace, then my opinion probably would have changed.
