the Rift


Clarity

Catillatio Posts: 65
Banned atk: 5.5 | def: 9 | dam: 4.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 16.3 :: 12 HP: 60 | Buff: NOVICE
Loon
#1
Gold sun paints an end so deep
That I'm still here seeing spots.
Game rules make no sense to me
As I try not to act the robot.

'Cause you are the piece of me
I wish I didn't need.


Drop me from a cotton candy cloud
And race me to the ground.
Night falls around us
And you step closer secure without a sound.

If our love is tragedy
Why are you my remedy?


Join the line and I'm stuck
Here at the back.
Behind rivals that don't know
What they lack.

If our love's insanity
Why are you my clarity?

Phaedra the Opulent Posts: 343
Deceased
Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.3 :: 6 Buff: NOVICE
Stella :: Secretary Bird :: None Aud
#2
Phae protects herself.

Gold sun paints an end so deep Colour reference - palomino
That I'm still here seeing spots. Bird-catcher spots
Game rules make no sense to me History reference between her and Tio
As I try not to act the robot.

'Cause you are the piece of me
I wish I didn't need.

Drop me from a cotton candy cloud Pegasus ref
And race me to the ground.
Night falls around us
And you step closer secure without a sound.

If our love is tragedy
Why are you my remedy?

Join the line and I'm stuck
Here at the back.
Behind rivals that don't know
What they lack.

If our love's insanity
Why are you my clarity?
 HP: 45.5

Catillatio Posts: 65
Banned atk: 5.5 | def: 9 | dam: 4.5
Stallion :: Equine :: 16.3 :: 12 HP: 60 | Buff: NOVICE
Loon
#3
Phaedra was Sought
"Phaedra... why are you hiding from me?"

Gold sun paints an end so deep
That I'm still here seeing spots.
-- Color Ref. Sooty palomino with Bird-catcher spots. "End" referring to end of the day/sunset = Darker light.

Game rules make no sense to me
As I try not to act the robot.
-- Personality ref. Flirtatious nature, Makes Love into a game also "Stallions who fall in love with her don't understand the rules"

'Cause you are the piece of me
I wish I didn't need.
-- History ref. Phaedra is the only one who knows that Tio ever loved. While he's not in love with her, he also knows that she holds a piece of him by holding a piece of his past in the form of knowledge.

Drop me from a cotton candy cloud
And race me to the ground.
-- Pegasus Ref.

Night falls around us
And you step closer secure without a sound.
--Personality ref. She likes to be objectified and have stallions around to protect her. Indicating she likes to feel secure.

If our love is tragedy
Why are you my remedy?
--CURSE ref.

Join the line and I'm stuck
Here at the back.
Behind rivals that don't know
What they lack.
--This entire verse was about their relationship and how Tio feels like he's just joining a line of stallions who fight for her attention. He knows that none of the others actually know what they're doing, because they're all young.

If our love's insanity
Why are you my clarity?
--Relationship ref. Tio acted somewhat insane when he was around her and yet his manipulation tactics were see-through even while they were masterfully deceptive.


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