the Rift


Stealth Attempt #1

Sulwyn Posts: N/A
Unregistered
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#1
Oh, weary temptress
Sing us your deceptive song.

Do not play with me, lonesome spirit
Show me but one face, if not for long.

Come to me, peaceful martyr
And stand out in the cold no more.


Edge: /4
Foothills: /2
Basin: /4
Throat: /3

Deimos the Reaper Posts: 527
Deceased atk: 7.0 | def: 12 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 72.5 | Buff: NUMB
Heather
#2
Deimos blocks Angora.

Oh, weary temptress
Sing us your deceptive song. - Reference to Angora's magic.

Do not play with me, lonesome spirit
Show me but one face, if not for long.

Come to me, peaceful martyr - Gave herself up as a prisoner with no fight.
And stand out in the cold no more. - Currently a prisoner of the Basin.

Ignita Posts: 39
Banned
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16.2 :: 4
Pheonix
#3
IGNITA protects HERSELF

Oh, weary temptress
Gender ref. 'ress' is oftern added on the end of words to address a female.
Sing us your deceptive song.

Do not play with me, lonesome spirit
Show me but one face, if not for long.

Come to me, peaceful martyr
Assassin ref?
And stand out in the cold no more.
'Home' ref. She calls the Frozen arch home and the arch is cold.

Sulwyn Posts: N/A
Unregistered
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#4
"I'm sorry, Angora. I've failed you." -Angora was sought.

Oh, weary temptress
>>In her description, her eyes are described as constantly weary, and she has the seduce magic ability, therefore labeling her as a 'temptress'.
Sing us your deceptive song.
>>Her 'song' or words are deceptive because she uses them to toy with stallions and get what she wants from them. She acts like she is in love with them in one moment, but turns on them in the next. "How she plays isn't cruel, it's sneaky".

Do not play with me, lonesome spirit
>> She is described as "often lonely but her spirits never dim".
Show me but one face, if not for long.
>> "She uses different faces to trick stallions into pursuing her"

Come to me, peaceful martyr
>> Went willingly with Mauja when he tried to steal her. No blood was shed, therefore it was "peaceful". Martyrs are known to give themselves up for a certain cause/group/individual, and Angora gave herself up to Mauja for….?
And stand out in the cold no more.
>> "cold" refers to Mauja, who is the "Frost Heart". The line is a loose "metaphor" or some such for "no longer remain with Mauja the Frost Heart"

>>6 lines for age.

I obviously need to work on my stealths. XD

Could I have this marked to see if it would have passed or failed?


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