the Rift


Ambition should be made of sterner stuff [Azarron to Deimos]

Deimos the Reaper Posts: 527
Deceased atk: 7.0 | def: 12 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 72.5 | Buff: NUMB
Heather
#1
Kindle your transgressions,
Forget your ambitions
Continue to tie a gilded noose around your throat.

One knot for audacity,
A slip for devotion,
A march up thirteen steps for impudence.

Now all we need is the fall.
A sudden drop, a quick stop.

[OOC Note: This is a Plague stealth and has been approved by Psyche.]

Mirage the DragonHeart Posts: 414
Deceased atk: 5.5 | def: 9 | dam: 6
Mare :: Equine :: 15.3 :: Eighteen HP: 68.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Akaith :: Royal Golden Dragon :: Fire Breath Whit
#2
Mirage blocks herself.

Kindle your transgressions,
Forget your ambitions
Continue to tie a gilded noose around your throat. -->> Gilded = golden = Akaith

One knot for audacity,
A slip for devotion, -->> She is devoted to the Qian.
A march up thirteen steps for impudence. -->> Mirage is 13 years old.

Now all we need is the fall.
A sudden drop, a quick stop. -->> Reference to the World's Edge.
Ascended Helovian

Midas the Gallant Posts: 1,164
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Stallion :: Pegasus :: 14.3 hh :: Immortal :: Soul is 7 (FF) Buff: HUNTER
Fina :: Common Zephyr :: Phoenix & Wakiya & Neve :: Common Zephyr :: Arctic Angel
#3
Midas defends himself.

Kindle your transgressions,
Fighting with d’Art

Forget your ambitions
Rank reference

Continue to tie a gilded noose around your throat.
Sun amulet, armor.
Herd ref

One knot for audacity,
A slip for devotion,
LOYAL TO THE THROAT. ;D

A march up thirteen steps for impudence.
13th letter of the alphabet is M.

Now all we need is the fall.
A sudden drop, a quick stop.
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Lythe Posts: N/A
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#4
Cormac protects himself

Kindle your transgressions,
Forget your ambitions -Cormac used to be the Captain of the Pirates and he wanted to invade a herd.
Continue to tie a gilded noose around your throat. -He wants to quest for a gold dubloon necklace

One knot for audacity,
A slip for devotion,
A march up thirteen steps for impudence. -Ref to his quest with the Earth God, he went onto land twice during his time under the sea and now has 13 days remaining of him being deaf before he can claim his magic

Now all we need is the fall.
A sudden drop, a quick stop. -Ref to pirates/hanging

Deimos the Reaper Posts: 527
Deceased atk: 7.0 | def: 12 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 72.5 | Buff: NUMB
Heather
#5
All are safe.

Sulwyn Posts: N/A
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#6
Sulwyn defends herself. << FORGOT TO STATE THIS.

Ambition should be made of sterner stuff
>> She is described as being ambitious, but she is also very shy and timid, so she is not "stern"; personality reference.

Kindle your transgressions,
>> Stated to be unafraid of breaking the law if it is for the best; personality reference.
Forget your ambitions
>>Described as ambitious in her profile; personality reference.
Continue to tie a gilded noose around your throat.
>>Could describe the gold markings on her body, a sun and two small dashes on her foreleg; appearance reference?

One knot for audacity,
>>She "dared" to try to take Angora from Mauja. If you look up the meaning of audacity, it is described as extraordinary boldness, and her attempt at stealing Angora could be described as bold.
A slip for devotion,
>>Described as devoted to her herd; personality reference.
A march up thirteen steps for impudence.
>>Punishment for trying to steal Angora?

Now all we need is the fall.
A sudden drop, a quick stop.
>> World's Edge reference; where Sulwyn lives.
Ascended Helovian

Ophelia the Amaranthine Posts: 701
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Mare :: Hybrid :: 16.0 hh :: 6 Years HP: 77 | Buff: BULK
Tinek :: Royal Silver Dragon :: Frost Breath & Shock Breath Tamme
#7
Ophelia blocks Ktulu

Kindle your transgressions, ---> uniquine
Forget your ambitions ---> lead of Foothills, recent
Continue to tie a gilded noose around your throat. ---> In love with Midas, the golden boy :P

One knot for audacity,
A slip for devotion, ---> devoted to family
A march up thirteen steps for impudence. ---> only one that doesnt quite make sense, thirteen is a dark number, so maybe a black reference

Now all we need is the fall.
A sudden drop, a quick stop.




Undertow has come to take me. Guided by the blazing sun. Look at everything around us. Look at everything we've done.
Please. Anyone. I don't think I can save myself. I'm drowning.


Please tag me in every response!

Deimos the Reaper Posts: 527
Deceased atk: 7.0 | def: 12 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 72.5 | Buff: NUMB
Heather
#8
You are no closer. Both are safe.

Corsair Posts: N/A
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#9
Corsair blocks himself.

Kindle your transgressions,
Lives at a beach; the waves of the ocean transgress
Forget your ambitions
Continue to tie a gilded noose around your throat.
Could be a reference to his love for Cosette who has golden eyes. Their relationship is pretty much doomed to fail.

One knot for audacity,
A slip for devotion,
Devoted to Pirates.
A march up thirteen steps for impudence.

Now all we need is the fall.
A sudden drop, a quick stop.

Deimos the Reaper Posts: 527
Deceased atk: 7.0 | def: 12 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 72.5 | Buff: NUMB
Heather
#10
Safe.

Deimos the Reaper Posts: 527
Deceased atk: 7.0 | def: 12 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 72.5 | Buff: NUMB
Heather
#11
It is has been over 48 hours.

Azzaron was sought.


Ambition should be made of sterner stuff.
Kindle your transgressions, [Kindle = fire reference to his magic. Transgressions is also a reference to his mistakes/social errors on bursting into the Basin.]
Forget your ambitions [Personality reference.]
Continue to tie a gilded noose around your throat. [Gilded= reference to his coloring. The noose is a reference to his continuing efforts on snagging Delinne and their child, despite the Basin threatening him. He causes his own problems.]

One knot for audacity, [Personality reference.]
A slip for devotion, [Personality reference.]
A march up thirteen steps for impudence. [Infamous thread in Basin. His actions could be seen as insolence towards Basin members telling him to leave.]

Now all we need is the fall.
A sudden drop, a quick stop.

The entire stealth was also a reference to the gallows, just for fun. ;D

Ink Posts: 121
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Stallion :: Equine :: 16.2 hh :: 6 years
Blu
#12
PASS
Although it was rather on the line for me, there were enough solid clues to support this stealth as passing, but I feel many of the clues provided had weak explanations as applying to Azzarron, some being rather vague and applicable to numerous characters, with no sure fire Azzaron clues leaping out at me. All the clues that did pass did not necessarily scream out the characters name to me, so in the future I would work on make it more tailored to the specific character.


Ambition should be made of sterner stuff.
Kindle your transgressions,
[Kindle = fire reference to his magic. Transgressions is also a reference to his mistakes/social errors on bursting into the Basin.]
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PASS -- though this was iffy for me because the only clue here that I deem passable is a single word among many others, and that kindle also makes me think of fire wood, overall I decided that kindle did make me think of fire and so was a solid clue. The transgressions was too vague to me to pass.


Forget your ambitions
[Personality reference.]
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FAIL -- which part of his personality? I checked his profile and nothing seemed to match this. Either way you already got a passed personality ref below and you need 3 passed clues of different types.


Continue to tie a gilded noose around your throat.
[Gilded= reference to his coloring. The noose is a reference to his continuing efforts on snagging Delinne and their child, despite the Basin threatening him. He causes his own problems.]
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PASS -- a good color ref, although first reading it makes me think of someone with a throat marking or a gold chain of some sort, but because this stealth is so heavy on hanging references that can be more easily ignored. Though the noose itself being a clue here about his actions is a weaker clue and doesn't hold with me.


One knot for audacity,
[Personality reference.]
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FAIL -- although I could deem this one more passable, I still don't look at his personality and see audacious jumping out at me. Either way you already got a passed personality ref below and you need 3 passed clues of different types.


A slip for devotion,[Personality reference.]
- - - - -
PASS -- devotion goes hand in hand with his loyalty.


A march up thirteen steps for impudence.
[Infamous thread in Basin. His actions could be seen as insolence towards Basin members telling him to leave.]
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FAIL -- I don't read Basin threads so it's not very infamous to me :x


Now all we need is the fall.
A sudden drop, a quick stop.

The entire stealth was also a reference to the gallows, just for fun. ;D
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I also did not make the 13 steps up a gallows connection, although I don't know much about gallows off hand, but the entire theme of the stealth would have made me think of some one more dark, related to death or choking etc when it was more of a fluff theme about him being hung if caught, which could be said of anyone taken prisoner. Although I don't hold that against you as a failed clue, it could have been a passable clue if better directing to the character being sought.
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Boom Boom Posts: N/A
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#13
Pass - I actually guessed this was Azzaron the first day. xD
YAY I WAS RIGHT.

Ambition should be made of sterner stuff.
Kindle your transgressions, [Kindle = fire reference to his magic. Transgressions is also a reference to his mistakes/social errors on bursting into the Basin.]
Good.

Forget your ambitions [Personality reference.]
Good. Could also refer to his history, challenging Kri for Leadership.

Continue to tie a gilded noose around your throat. [Gilded= reference to his coloring. The noose is a reference to his continuing efforts on snagging Delinne and their child, despite the Basin threatening him. He causes his own problems.]
Gilded was a great color ref.

One knot for audacity, [Personality reference.]
A slip for devotion, [Personality reference.]
A march up thirteen steps for impudence. [Infamous thread in Basin. His actions could be seen as insolence towards Basin members telling him to leave.]
All of these fit well too.

Now all we need is the fall.
A sudden drop, a quick stop.


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