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Mother always said [voided]

Osiris Posts: 88
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Stallion :: Hybrid :: 17.3hh :: 13.
Comadre :: Plain Black Dragon :: Fire Breath Boom Boom!
#1
Mother always said
Keep your hands off the stove
Don't you ever learn?

Mother always said
Wash the dirt from your clothes
You still have not learned.

Mother always said
Treat your family well
You learned your lesson.

Mother always said
Use the stars to find your way
Guess you outsmarted mum.
Ascended Helovian

Mauja the Frozen Light Posts: 1,392
Outcast atk: 6.5 | def: 10.5 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.2 :: 14 HP: 79.5 | Buff: HUNTER
Irma :: Snowy Owl :: Terrorize & Diego :: Eurasian Eagle-Owl :: Rage Neo
#2
Mauja is safe.

Mother always said
Keep your hands off the stove
Don't you ever learn? -- I can recall countless times that he's been burned...

Mother always said
Wash the dirt from your clothes
You still have not learned. -- black spots on his white body

Mother always said
Treat your family well
You learned your lesson. -- he does care an awful lot about his herd

Mother always said
Use the stars to find your way
Guess you outsmarted mum. -- not sure about this, could be a ref. to Timey/Mauja's return, or that he's abandoned the Moon.
angels, they fell first, but I'm still here

Osiris Posts: 88
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Stallion :: Hybrid :: 17.3hh :: 13.
Comadre :: Plain Black Dragon :: Fire Breath Boom Boom!
#3
I'm never trying that again.
Mauja is safe.

Osiris Posts: 88
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Stallion :: Hybrid :: 17.3hh :: 13.
Comadre :: Plain Black Dragon :: Fire Breath Boom Boom!
#4
48 hours have passed. CORMAC was sought.

Mother always said
Keep your hands off the stove
Don't you ever learn?
Cormac has congenital analgesia, which is the lack of any pain perception.
Essentially, he would never learn not to get burned because it wouldn't physically hurt. People who manage to make it to adulthood with congenital analgesia often are missing fingers or have burned hands because of similar problems.


Mother always said
Wash the dirt from your clothes
You still have not learned.
Color reference: Cormac is brown (dark sooty bay), the color of dirt.

Mother always said
Treat your family well
You learned your lesson.
Personality ref:
"...in order to make a more powerful family, but he wants to settle now, become a good leader and be known for being him; not a tyrant."


Mother always said
Use the stars to find your way
Guess you outsmarted mum.
North star is often used for directional purposes, buuut, he has found one way better than mom.
Cormac is in possession of a golden compass, which is traditionally used for navigation.

"Mum" was also used to hint at his Irish Sport Horse breed.
Ascended Helovian

Mauja the Frozen Light Posts: 1,392
Outcast atk: 6.5 | def: 10.5 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.2 :: 14 HP: 79.5 | Buff: HUNTER
Irma :: Snowy Owl :: Terrorize & Diego :: Eurasian Eagle-Owl :: Rage Neo
#5
I PASS this.

It is well-written, and while I didn't piece it together to be Cormac (I'm not very familiar with the character), I did get the references about the color, personality and the guidance down, though I didn't make the connection to a compass as I didn't know he had it. xD

With the explanation it all makes perfect sense, well-written, consistent and definitely relating to the character in question. :)
angels, they fell first, but I'm still here

Ink Posts: 121
Hidden Account
Stallion :: Equine :: 16.2 hh :: 6 years
Blu
#6
PASS
Lots of extra fluff and lines, but nothing that misdirected and overall was an understandable stealth.


Mother always said
Keep your hands off the stove
Don't you ever learn?
Cormac has congenital analgesia, which is the lack of any pain perception.
Essentially, he would never learn not to get burned because it wouldn't physically hurt. People who manage to make it to adulthood with congenital analgesia often are missing fingers or have burned hands because of similar problems.
FAIL -- although I really like the explanation of this clue, I think at face value it doesn't direct that way enough for it to be solveable, as I don't think many people know that without doing some research and there's not enough in the clue to direct them that way. However it was neat.

Mother always said
Wash the dirt from your clothes
You still have not learned.
Color reference: Cormac is brown (dark sooty bay), the color of dirt.
PASS -- pretty simple

Mother always said
Treat your family well
You learned your lesson.
Personality ref:
"...in order to make a more powerful family, but he wants to settle now, become a good leader and be known for being him; not a tyrant."
PASS -- although this is a bit weak compared to the other clues, it's fairly easy to understand the point of the clue and apply it to characters that would have fit the others, so I pass this because it is solveable.

Mother always said
Use the stars to find your way
Guess you outsmarted mum.
North star is often used for directional purposes, buuut, he has found one way better than mom.
Cormac is in possession of a golden compass, which is traditionally used for navigation.
PASS -- stars and finding your way were a big signal to me about navigation and made me think of compass, sea-themed characters or related magic instantly.

"Mum" was also used to hint at his Irish Sport Horse breed.
FAIL -- my first response to this was huh? It's too vague to point to the breed.
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Neo the Blood Mage Posts: 2
Master of the Universe
Gelding :: Pegasus :: 167 cm :: 24
Neo
#7
'lo! Phanie just brought to my attention that she was absent between the 4th and the 9th, as this absence thread confirms: http://helovia.net/showthread.php?tid=6689 and this stealth was made on the 7th.

Boom Boom Posts: N/A
Unregistered
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#8
O: whoops. Didn't scan closely enough. X3
Sorrry, Phanie!

Cormac Posts: N/A
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#9
It's totally cool! I guess Osiris will just have to try again another time. :) Good stealth though Boom!


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