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When the Wind Blows [Ulrik to Kri]

Kri the Resolute Posts: 243
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#1
When the wind blows,
A whistle of energy through hollow bones.
They all feel lightened.
Except me.

Bound by earthly chains,
Locked in my hatred,
I feel cold.

Throw away my sword.
Replace it with bitterness and quiet.

Ulrik the Engineer Posts: 235
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Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.1 hh :: 11 HP: 69.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Kirchoff :: Common Hellhound :: Superspeed Tamme
#2
Ulrik is keeping Cass for a while longer.

When the wind blows,
A whistle of energy through hollow bones. ---> Cass is a pegasus
They all feel lightened. ---> Azzuen died, so energy still isnt enough
Except me.

Bound by earthly chains, ---> Stolen with a machine thing around her foot
Locked in my hatred,
I feel cold. ---> in the Basin

Throw away my sword.
Replace it with bitterness and quiet.

Kri the Resolute Posts: 243
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#3
I do not seek my sister.
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Ophelia the Amaranthine Posts: 701
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#4
Ophelia blocks herself

When the wind blows,
A whistle of energy through hollow bones. ---> Pregnant with shock child
They all feel lightened.
Except me. ---> Usually people are happy when pregners, but not Phi

Bound by earthly chains, ---> pregnant
Locked in my hatred, ---> Not very happy
I feel cold. ---> Feels lonely, often described as being cold ; also, she's white

Throw away my sword. ---> Horn ref/maybe leaving Foothills/Grey
Replace it with bitterness and quiet. ---> Often described as bitter - usually soft spoken




Undertow has come to take me. Guided by the blazing sun. Look at everything around us. Look at everything we've done.
Please. Anyone. I don't think I can save myself. I'm drowning.


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Kri the Resolute Posts: 243
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#5
I have no need for you, Ophelia.

Psyche the DarkEmpress Posts: 380
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#6
Psyche blocks Mauja.

When the wind blows,
A whistle of energy through hollow bones.
They all feel lightened.
Reference to Irma.
Except me.
This "me" being Mauja, thus not flying.

Bound by earthly chains,
Locked in my hatred,
Plague reference.
I feel cold.
Basin reference.

Throw away my sword.
Species reference.
Replace it with bitterness and quiet.
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Kri the Resolute Posts: 243
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#7
Mauja is not wanted.

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#8
48 hours have passed.
Ulrik was sought.

When the wind blows,
A whistle of energy through hollow bones.
Reference to his magic. Machinery like pistons which used compressed gas to transfer force.

They all feel lightened.
Except me.
Supposed to make you feel heavy, which goes well with the metal reference below.
ALSO, I think we can all agree that Ulrik is not the happiest in the crowd.


Bound by earthly chains,
Reference to his Earth magic, as well as a hint that it's not a pegasus.
Chains are metal, so a hint to his magic as well.


Locked in my hatred,
Personality ref to racism.

I feel cold.
Personality reference. Detached from others around him, cold and calculating mind.

Throw away my sword.
Species reference. Unicorn.
Also, Ulrik comes from a warring herd of the north, which he left.


Replace it with bitterness and quiet.
Personality ref. Rather mean and not very talkative.

Zdravilo Posts: N/A
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#9
Hasn't it only been 24 hours? Pysche had blocked some one on Yesterday, 02:32 PM. It has been slightly over 24 hours.
I may be waaaayyyyy off though so... ehm...


But if I am wrong, I pass this. Every clue was well thought out.

Tamme the Tempting Posts: 140
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#10
Ulrik is an outcast :3

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#11
Ignore me... I'm just a derp

Rishima Posts: 137
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#12
Pass
The first stanza is iffy for me, and I didn't really get any of your clues. But the rest is solid.

Odd the doer of things Posts: 115
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Odd
#13
When the wind blows,
A whistle of energy through hollow bones.
Reference to his magic. Machinery like pistons which used compressed gas to transfer force.

Fail. Hollow bones immediately makes me think of a pegasus's anatomy, rather than a machine reference. Metal bones (or any other synonyms) would have been a much clearer clue. As it stands, this clue seems misleading, given that it was a unicorn being sought.

They all feel lightened.
Except me.
Supposed to make you feel heavy, which goes well with the metal reference below.
ALSO, I think we can all agree that Ulrik is not the happiest in the crowd.

Fail. I'm disregarding the "goes well with the metal reference below" as in the rules it states that, a clue should ...not require understanding of prior clues above it. I fail to make the connection here, since metal doesn't need to be heavy.. Ulrik's profile states that because he was smaller and smarter than the rest of his herd, that he left them, which is contradictory to this clue, since he would either be enlightened where they would not, or that he would be the light one (in terms of weight). Other than that association, I don't see how this relates to him at all.

Bound by earthly chains,
Reference to his Earth magic, as well as a hint that it's not a pegasus.
Chains are metal, so a hint to his magic as well.

Pass. Good reference to magic.

Locked in my hatred,
Personality ref to racism.

Fail. His profile, nor his posts say that hatred has anything to do with his racism, merely an elitist view.


I feel cold.
Personality reference. Detached from others around him, cold and calculating mind.

Weak Cold makes me think of the Basin, or maybe someone who is blue/white. I can see the cold > calculating > black and white, but it isn't super apparent.


Throw away my sword.
Species reference. Unicorn.
Also, Ulrik comes from a warring herd of the north, which he left.

Pass - acceptable as a Unicorn reference. I think it fails in terms of him leaving his herd, as his reasons were based on differences in intelligence, rather than war.

Replace it with bitterness and quiet.
Personality ref. Rather mean and not very talkative.

Neutral: I don't see where Ulrik comes across as bitter - but he is described as being a creature of few words.

Ultimately, I am not counting the reference to him being a unicorn, since there was such a misleading clue about hollow bones, which I think most will agree immediately triggers 'pegasus'. For me, that leaves 2 passable clues, and 1 very weak clue. Given the amount of misdirection (pegasus reference, hatred, they call feel lightened) which do not apply to Ulrik, ultimately I would >fail this stealth*.


*In order to avoid bias, this has been cast as the Admin vote for this stealth.

Dingo Posts: 12
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Dingo
#14
When the wind blows,
A whistle of energy through hollow bones.
Reference to his magic. Machinery like pistons which used compressed gas to transfer force.

Fail. This also made me think of a Pegasus with the reference of "hollow bones", or somebody with an avian companion.

They all feel lightened.
Except me.
Supposed to make you feel heavy, which goes well with the metal reference below.
ALSO, I think we can all agree that Ulrik is not the happiest in the crowd.


Fail. Even though I think of heaviness when I think of metal, not all metal is light, such as aluminum. I am, however, able to see the personality reference in this clue.

Bound by earthly chains,
Reference to his Earth magic, as well as a hint that it's not a pegasus.
Chains are metal, so a hint to his magic as well.


Pass. Awesome magic/magic type reference :D

Locked in my hatred,
Personality ref to racism.

Fail. I agree with Aud on the same point. Ulrik see's equines and Pegasi as pawns, and would use them if he could. I don't beleive 'hatred' towards other races has ever been brought up with him.

I feel cold.
Personality reference. Detached from others around him, cold and calculating mind.

Pass. Good personality reference.

Throw away my sword.
Species reference. Unicorn.
Also, Ulrik comes from a warring herd of the north, which he left.


Pass. Good species reference.

Replace it with bitterness and quiet.
Personality ref. Rather mean and not very talkative.

Bitter - Proceeding from or exhibiting strong animosity,
Marked by resentment or cynicism.

Pass. I personally view Ulrik as such.

Overall, this is a PASS.
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Whit Posts: 2
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#15
I actually guessed this was Ulrik from the first day it was posted.

I PASS this.

When the wind blows,
A whistle of energy through hollow bones.
Reference to his magic. Machinery like pistons which used compressed gas to transfer force.
Not the strongest clue.


They all feel lightened.
Except me.
Supposed to make you feel heavy, which goes well with the metal reference below.
ALSO, I think we can all agree that Ulrik is not the happiest in the crowd.
This actually impressed upon me that it was a reference to a unicorn or equine.

Bound by earthly chains,
Reference to his Earth magic, as well as a hint that it's not a pegasus.
Chains are metal, so a hint to his magic as well.
Great strong clue

Locked in my hatred,
Personality ref to racism.
Clear personality reference

I feel cold.
Personality reference. Detached from others around him, cold and calculating mind.
Again, not the strongest clue, but still not invalid

Throw away my sword.
Species reference. Unicorn.
Also, Ulrik comes from a warring herd of the north, which he left.
Screamingly obvious unicorn reference to me

Replace it with bitterness and quiet.
Personality ref. Rather mean and not very talkative.
Not the strongest clue again, but clear enough.


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