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I'm Coming Home

Kodiak Posts: N/A
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[Thanks Neo! Sorry for the "shortness" of my last post, I was a little confused as to exactly how to start xD. But your advice was very helpful! I think my writing skills will really show and blossom more once I get into the RP more. So, I dont really care nescessarily where we are, It was just one of the options, so I picked Worlds Edge. :3]

The thick blinding precipitation drenched Kodiaks wiery coat. Turning it to a blur of abstract dark bearlike colour. However Kodiak despised the weather, It failed to reminded him of his peaceful, sleepy childhood in a similar land, which weilded cold fluffy, light layers of snow, and frost. But the rain, and sleet was what he hated, it slowly sinking its teeth into His bones. The knotty, twisted trees dripping large drops of icy mush into his usually flowing, light mane. Kodiak took in a deep heaving breath from his broad, chest as he begun to speak in his brilliant british voice, to the elegant, yet rustic, icy white friesian horse standing parallel to him.

"I have come is seek of a new home, a new life in this promising land."
The wet rain stung his desperate eyes as he looked up at the large stallion in anxious await or his response. He ogled at the stallion pure strength and stature. His longstrong legs, and elegant coat colour, and an icy blue horn protruding from his head. Something that was treasured in his old land [mostly containing equines] for its rarity, and pure beauty. Long feathers flowing from his ankles. And ebony spots scattered through the horse. His legs hold firm to the earth that seems to be trembling under him.



Messages In This Thread
I'm Coming Home - by Kodiak - 06-10-2013, 07:46 PM
RE: I'm Coming Home - by Mauja - 06-15-2013, 09:51 AM
RE: I'm Coming Home - by Kodiak - 06-15-2013, 12:11 PM
RE: I'm Coming Home - by Mauja - 06-17-2013, 08:06 AM
RE: I'm Coming Home - by Kodiak - 06-18-2013, 12:13 PM
RE: I'm Coming Home - by Mauja - 06-20-2013, 06:58 AM
RE: I'm Coming Home - by Kodiak - 06-20-2013, 10:46 AM
RE: I'm Coming Home - by Mauja - 06-20-2013, 11:26 AM
RE: I'm Coming Home - by Kodiak - 06-20-2013, 12:19 PM
RE: I'm Coming Home - by Mauja - 06-21-2013, 06:51 AM
RE: I'm Coming Home - by Kodiak - 06-21-2013, 08:47 AM
RE: I'm Coming Home - by Mauja - 06-22-2013, 05:41 AM

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