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[JUDGE] Nameless II

Confutatis the World Eater Posts: 179
Hidden Account atk: 5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Mare :: Equine :: 16.2hh :: 9 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Mongrel :: Common Kitsune :: Dark Illusions wanda
#1
They say there's a ghost in the decaying house over the bend. One of two, I heard, in fact. I heard it roams the cold house, darkness creeping in shadowed wings.

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Ulrik the Engineer Posts: 235
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Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.1 hh :: 11 HP: 69.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Kirchoff :: Common Hellhound :: Superspeed Tamme
#2
Ulrik blocks himself

They say there's a ghost in the decaying house over the bend. ---> Not a member of the Basin, thus a ghost

One of two, I heard, in fact. ---> One of two crazies? Him and d'Art

I heard it roams the cold house, darkness creeping in shadowed wings. ---> created the metal cage in one of the caves if the Basin, the "shadowed wings"

Andromeda Posts: 91
Dragon's Throat Healer
Mare :: Pegasus :: 16.1hh :: 5 (Tallsun) Buff: NOVICE
Lauren
#3
Ulrik is safe.
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Chemical Posts: N/A
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#4
Chemical blocks herself.

They say there's a ghost in the decaying house over the bend. -OOC name reference. Also could be referring to her mom whom she killed.

One of two, I heard, in fact.- One of two parents are dead.

I heard it roams the cold house, -Currently roaming in the Frozen Arch. Also pers. ref.

Darkness creeping in shadowed wings. -Black body, black wings.

Confutatis the World Eater Posts: 179
Hidden Account atk: 5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Mare :: Equine :: 16.2hh :: 9 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Mongrel :: Common Kitsune :: Dark Illusions wanda
#5
I do not want you. Leave.
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Ophelia the Amaranthine Posts: 701
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Tinek :: Royal Silver Dragon :: Frost Breath & Shock Breath Tamme
#6
Ophelia blocks herself and her sister, Ktulu


They say there's a ghost in the decaying house over the bend. One of two, I heard, in fact. I heard it roams the cold house, darkness creeping in shadowed wings.


Ophelia: ghostly white, land sort of around the river (according to map), one of two as in twins, with Mesec at her side (darkness creeping), and she roams in the north

Ktulu: had a bear ghost spirit wrap around her heart, land sort of around the river, she is black in color (like shadows) with two winged children




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Confutatis the World Eater Posts: 179
Hidden Account atk: 5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Mare :: Equine :: 16.2hh :: 9 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Mongrel :: Common Kitsune :: Dark Illusions wanda
#7
Both are safe.

Psyche the DarkEmpress Posts: 380
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RayoDeSoleil
#8
Psyche blocks Mauja.

They say there's a ghost - Killed Torasin
One of two - One of two rulers, or reference to Torasin & Solstice both being killed, possible reference to Irma
Cold house - Basin reference.
Darkness creeping in shadowed wings. - Possible personality reference, or reference to Irma
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Confutatis the World Eater Posts: 179
Hidden Account atk: 5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Mare :: Equine :: 16.2hh :: 9 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Mongrel :: Common Kitsune :: Dark Illusions wanda
#9
He is not wanted.

Destrier Posts: 180
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Stallion :: Equine :: 16.3hh :: 16 HP: 65.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Suli :: Common Green Dragon :: Fire Breath & Merlin :: Plain Black Dragon :: Frost Breath Dingo
#10
Destrier blocks his son, Luken.

They say there's a ghost in the decaying house over the bend. - He is mostly white, could also reference his moodiness D< 'Decaying house over the bend' could also reference to the Edge, which overlooks the ocean.
One of two, I heard, in fact. - Twin reference
I heard it roams the cold house,
darkness creeping in shadowed wings. - Shadowed wings could refer to Destrier and Laila, who are both black, while Luken is mostly white.

- Editted to add another clue and make it prettier. XD


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Confutatis the World Eater Posts: 179
Hidden Account atk: 5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Mare :: Equine :: 16.2hh :: 9 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Mongrel :: Common Kitsune :: Dark Illusions wanda
#11
I don't want the child.

Sulwyn Posts: N/A
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#12
Sulwyn blocks Amaris.

They say there's a ghostin the decaying house over the bend. --> pale color
One of two, I heard, in fact --> one of two twins.
I heard it roams the cold house, darkness creeping in shadowed wings. --> Currently roaming the Edge ("Cold house") with Mesec, who is the son of the Moon Goddess, with "shadowed wings"; The darkness could also be the little black dragon that she can summon from time to time.

d'Artagnan the Nightshade Posts: 364
Aurora Basin General atk: 6 | def: 9 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17hh :: 12 HP: 68.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Aramis :: Common Hellhound :: Hellfire & Superspeed imi
#13
d'Artagnan protects himself.

They say there's a ghost in the decaying house over the bend.
Could be a reference to him killing Solstice + his niece is also called Ghost.
One of two, I heard, in fact.
Has a hellhound companion, Aramis
I heard it roams the cold house, darkness creeping in shadowed wings.
Lives in the Basin, known for his dark personality.
Wings = Mesec?

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Confutatis the World Eater Posts: 179
Hidden Account atk: 5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Mare :: Equine :: 16.2hh :: 9 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Mongrel :: Common Kitsune :: Dark Illusions wanda
#14
Do not waste my time, Sulwyn and d'Art. Neither the poisoner or dragon child is wanted.

d'Artagnan the Nightshade Posts: 364
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Aramis :: Common Hellhound :: Hellfire & Superspeed imi
#15
d'Artagnan snorts and says then you may not have my cousin.
The Nightshade protects Deodat.

They say there's a ghost in the decaying house over the bend. -- possible reference to his past, his white marking over his withers, and the Basin
One of two, I heard, in fact. -- he and d'Aramitz are d'Art's cousins, meaning, there's two
I heard it roams the cold house, -- the Basin
darkness creeping in shadowed wings. -- Déodat's homeland and family were murdered by pegs

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Andromeda Posts: 91
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Mare :: Pegasus :: 16.1hh :: 5 (Tallsun) Buff: NOVICE
Lauren
#16
No, Deodat is not the one I would steal.
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Confutatis the World Eater Posts: 179
Hidden Account atk: 5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Mare :: Equine :: 16.2hh :: 9 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Mongrel :: Common Kitsune :: Dark Illusions wanda
#17
Time's up- CROWLEY was sought!

They say there's a ghost in the decaying house over the bend.
-- "ghost" refers to his white brindle markings (ghosts normally are white).

One of two, I heard, in fact.
-- hellhound companion

I heard it roams the cold house, darkness creeping in shadowed wings.
-- cold house -> part of Aurora Basin, darkness -> color reference, shadowed wings -> dark magic

Tamme the Tempting Posts: 140
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#18
Ghost --> ghost are traditionally all white, and there was nothing else about this clue to point to only part of it. If it had been worded something like "partial ghost" or "half-dead" or something along those lines, then I would have passed this. However, I cannot because I do not think that there was enough to peg this as bridling or any white markings.

One of two ---> means one of two ghosts. If Crowley's hellhound was white, I would totally be on this clue to accept it. As it is, I choose to neither pass or deny this. "One of two ghosts" to me would imply two of the same kind. As in twins, two healers, two leaders, etc.

Cold house Basin reference = pass

Darkness = color ref, pass

Shadowed wings, I am still not sure on. I think that this clue was misleading, and at the very least, I cannot pinpoint how wings and shadowing are related to his magic. Even the wing of a house doesn't necessarily point to magic.

Overall, I have to fail this stealth. I think alot of the elements were really good but required a little more clarification for it to be considered a fair stealth.

Boom Boom Posts: N/A
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#19
I fail this.

They say there's a ghost in the decaying house over the bend.
-- "ghost" refers to his white brindle markings (ghosts normally are white).
Fail.

Ghost in a decaying house does not say brindle or markings to me at all. I would have said like... crumbling white shutters on the dark house or something.
But a ghost makes me think more of a personality reference or haunting memory of some sort.

One of two, I heard, in fact.
-- hellhound companion

Kind of pass/fail?
This one I am iffy on because it could mean a pregnant mare or a mare with a foal, or someone with a companion. The problem is that the first reference you are using as a marking clue, while the other you are using to symbolize a companion. I would think in this case both characters would be lightly colored, and neither are.

Cold house is a great reference for the Basin, pass.

"darkness creeping in shadowed wings" just reads as a dark colored peg to me.... so darkness is a good color reference, but since Crowley's magic does not have to do with wings or flying, so I think the magic clue is more misleading than a clue, fail.

So, overall you have like 2~ good clues... but I'm still going to say fail, since you need 3 solid ones for a pass.

Confutatis the World Eater Posts: 179
Hidden Account atk: 5 | def: 8.5 | dam: 5.5
Mare :: Equine :: 16.2hh :: 9 HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Mongrel :: Common Kitsune :: Dark Illusions wanda
#20
Okay! Thank you guys so much- I'll definitely keep your feedback in mind for next time! :D


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