the Rift


I know

Shadow Posts: 153
Deceased atk: 6.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 4.5
Filly :: Hybrid :: 14.2 :: 8 HP: 63 | Buff: ENDURE
Chan
#1
I know a story of tumbleweed,
tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle
I know a song of rocks and mountains,
looming tall against dark skies
I know a legend of a flower and a thorn,
trampled and forsaken in times long past

I know who you are
Do you?


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Zar'roc Posts: 22
Hidden Account atk: 3.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 7
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 15.3hh :: 5 years HP: 67 | Buff: NOVICE
Archeon :: Royal Hellhound :: Hellfire paddeh
#2
Zar'roc sneers and blocks himself.

I know a story of tumbleweed, - outcast
tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle
I know a song of rocks and mountains, - color ref? white body (mountains) and dark legs/muzzle (rocks)
looming tall against dark skies
I know a legend of a flower and a thorn, - thorn could be a reference to his horn
trampled and forsaken in times long past - paladin was kinda a bitch to him

I know who you are - they just met recently
Do you?
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Shadow Posts: 153
Deceased atk: 6.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 4.5
Filly :: Hybrid :: 14.2 :: 8 HP: 63 | Buff: ENDURE
Chan
#3
"Hector is dealing with you just fine, outcast. I have no further interest in the matter."

Zar'roc is not wanted.


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Ulrik the Engineer Posts: 235
Deceased atk: 5.5 | def: 9.0 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.1 hh :: 11 HP: 69.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Kirchoff :: Common Hellhound :: Superspeed Tamme
#4
Ulrik blocks himself

I know a story of tumbleweed, ---> outcast
tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle ---> his recent posts have his hair all in knots
I know a song of rocks and mountains, ----> believes that nature is the ultimate machine and worships it in a way
looming tall against dark skies ---> he is tall and black in color
I know a legend of a flower and a thorn, ---> he is a unicorn
trampled and forsaken in times long past

I know who you are
Do you?

Shadow Posts: 153
Deceased atk: 6.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 4.5
Filly :: Hybrid :: 14.2 :: 8 HP: 63 | Buff: ENDURE
Chan
#5
"Go free another day, unicorn."

Ulrik is not sought.


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Deimos the Reaper Posts: 527
Deceased atk: 7.0 | def: 12 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 72.5 | Buff: NUMB
Heather
#6
Deimos blocks Kri.

I know a story of tumbleweed, - tumbleweeds are driven around by the wind [ref to wind magic]
tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle - Kri is always in an eternal struggle with battles, or its a ref to being captured by the Basin.
I know a song of rocks and mountains, - Basin ref, her current prison.
looming tall against dark skies - looming tall against dark skies, species ref (Pegasus)
I know a legend of a flower and a thorn,
trampled and forsaken in times long past - history ref towards her daughter, Onni, whom she was told to kill.

I know who you are - Reference to Shadow being in the same herd, Dragon's Throat.
Do you?

Shadow Posts: 153
Deceased atk: 6.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 4.5
Filly :: Hybrid :: 14.2 :: 8 HP: 63 | Buff: ENDURE
Chan
#7
"Kri is very capable of freeing herself, Reaper."

Kri is not sought.


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Deimos the Reaper Posts: 527
Deceased atk: 7.0 | def: 12 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 72.5 | Buff: NUMB
Heather
#8
Deimos blocks Psyche.

I know a story of tumbleweed, - Roams from place to place
tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle - Personality reference (all her feels).
I know a song of rocks and mountains, - Basin reference
looming tall against dark skies - Rank reference (Leader- huzzah!)
I know a legend of a flower and a thorn, - Thorn, horn reference.
trampled and forsaken in times long past

I know who you are
Do you?

Shadow Posts: 153
Deceased atk: 6.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 4.5
Filly :: Hybrid :: 14.2 :: 8 HP: 63 | Buff: ENDURE
Chan
#9
"The Lady has no business within the borders of the Throat. I'd rather catch a rattlesnake than that mare."

Psyche is not sought.


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Ktulu the Constrictor Posts: 509
Outcast atk: 5.0 | def: 9.5 | dam: 6.5
Mare :: Hybrid :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 70.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Eytan :: Grizzly Bear :: Terrorize ali
#10
Ktulu says she is not going anywhere with you.

I know a story of tumbleweed, - spent most of her life moving from herd to herd and living as an outcast.
tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle
I know a song of rocks and mountains - her son is the earthsinger and she resides in the foothills (mountainous)
looming tall against dark skies - fairly tall, dark coat
I know a legend of a flower and a thorn - thorn could refer to her horn. Flower cold also refer to her mother and thorn could refer to her father.
trampled and forsaken in times long past - her sister has the LT 'Forsaken, and in ktulu's past she was considered inept because of a birth defect

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Shadow Posts: 153
Deceased atk: 6.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 4.5
Filly :: Hybrid :: 14.2 :: 8 HP: 63 | Buff: ENDURE
Chan
#11
"I have no interest in you."

Ktulu is not sought.


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Artemis Posts: 82
Hidden Account
Mare :: Unicorn :: 17hh :: 4 Buff: NOVICE
Sei
#12
Artemis blocks herself

I know a story of tumbleweed,

tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle
--Reference to her plait

I know a song of rocks and mountains,
--Colour ref, she is white with grey dapples.

looming tall against dark skies
--Height reference, she is 17 hh and has darker grey socks.

I know a legend of a flower and a thorn,
--Unicorn ref?

trampled and forsaken in times long past

I know who you are
Do you?

Deimos the Reaper Posts: 527
Deceased atk: 7.0 | def: 12 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 72.5 | Buff: NUMB
Heather
#13
Deimos blocks Roland.

I know a story of tumbleweed, - Color ref (light, goldenish brown -- red dun)
tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle - Confused about his role in Basin (conman)
I know a song of rocks and mountains, - Basin ref
looming tall against dark skies
I know a legend of a flower and a thorn, - Horn ref
trampled and forsaken in times long past - Restless past

I know who you are
Do you?

Shadow Posts: 153
Deceased atk: 6.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 4.5
Filly :: Hybrid :: 14.2 :: 8 HP: 63 | Buff: ENDURE
Chan
#14
Neither are sought


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Deimos the Reaper Posts: 527
Deceased atk: 7.0 | def: 12 | dam: 6.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.1 :: 7 HP: 72.5 | Buff: NUMB
Heather
#15
Deimos blocks Sia.

I know a story of tumbleweed, - reddish/brown hued coat like tumbleweed color
tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle - personality reference (lost)
I know a song of rocks and mountains, -Basin reference
looming tall against dark skies
I know a legend of a flower and a thorn, - Thorn reference to species
trampled and forsaken in times long past - history reference

I know who you are
Do you?

Shadow Posts: 153
Deceased atk: 6.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 4.5
Filly :: Hybrid :: 14.2 :: 8 HP: 63 | Buff: ENDURE
Chan
#16
Deimos posted after 48 hours have passed, thus the guess is void.

"Nay, Sia goes free. @[Faelene] is who I seek!"

I know a story of tumbleweed,
tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle ---> Personality ref. "Wrapped in dark layers, she is a tangled mess of sorts." "She's a creature meant to change, and adapt." Tumbleweed is always in motion, driven by the wind.
I know a song of rocks and mountains, ---> Basin ref.
looming tall against dark skies ---> Color ref. Her coat is black = dark
I know a legend of a flower and a thorn, ---> Horn ref.
trampled and forsaken in times long past ---> History ref. A war was fought over her since birth, making her an unwanted existence.

I know who you are
Do you? Fluff


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Tamme the Tempting Posts: 140
Administrator
Mare :: Other :: 2 :: 2 HP: 9001 | Buff: Admin
Tamme
#17
0 | I know a story of tumbleweed, ---? A tumbleweed is driven by the wind. When I tried to understand this, I was looking for a character who was out of control of the situation, or someone being pushed around. Even when I see the explanation of changing and adapting, I do not see that as a tumbleweed - which only goes where the wind takes it. It doesn't really change or adapt.


+1 | tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle ---> Personality ref. "Wrapped in dark layers, she is a tangled mess of sorts." "She's a creature meant to change, and adapt." Tumbleweed is always in motion, driven by the wind.
Tendrils of what? And how is this eternal? And what struggle? In everything that I have read about Faelene, she is not really struggling with herself in a way that this makes me think. Also, I cannot really pin this as a unique clue to Faelene since most characters have some sort of internal struggle. I cannot name one character on this site that isn't facing something challenging within themselves. However, it does aptly fit the profile.


+1 | I know a song of rocks and mountains, ---> Basin ref.
Definitely got this

0 | looming tall against dark skies ---> Color ref. Her coat is black = dark
This would have been a +1 if not for the tall... I understand the dark coat reference, even though it's applying to the mountains and rocks of the basin, not the character by way of phrasing. However, Faelene is not what I would consider tall, so I would think this was misleading.

0 | I know a legend of a flower and a thorn, ---> Horn ref.
What's the flower? I realise that the thorn is a horn, and I understood that, but what about the flower? The flower is misleading to me because it made me think rather than just one horn reference, maybe a situation where there was innocence involved with this unicorn. Also, would have been a +1 if I had seen some sort of explanation for the flower.

-1 | trampled and forsaken in times long past ---> History ref. A war was fought over her since birth, making her an unwanted existence.
"The Equine King tired of all the fighting, the blood already shed, and waste of Unicorns declared since she was not of the vision she could live. "
How was she an unwanted existence? How was she forgotten? by her profile, the Equine King allowed her to live since she was not the vision. Also, she wasn't born yet, so that wasn't really applying to her?

I know who you are
Do you? Fluff

Ultimately, there was nothing about this stealth that made me scream "Faelene" after the reveal. Mostly, I just ended up a little more confused.

Odd the doer of things Posts: 115
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Mare :: Other :: 5"2 :: 27 HP: 108 | Buff: badass
Odd
#18
"Nay, Sia goes free. Faelene is who I seek!"

I know a story of tumbleweed,
tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle ---> Personality ref. "Wrapped in dark layers, she is a tangled mess of sorts." "She's a creature meant to change, and adapt." Tumbleweed is always in motion, driven by the wind.

-1 FailPassing "tangled tendrils lost in eternal struggle" for "tangled mess" would be a stretch for me I think. But combining it with the tumbleweed, I think it just pulls this clue too far away from the original meaning. That being said, tumbleweeds do not change or adapt, so I fail to see how pointing out that they're in motion, relates.

I know a song of rocks and mountains, ---> Basin ref.
+1 Pass

looming tall against dark skies ---> Color ref. Her coat is black = dark
+1 Pass

I know a legend of a flower and a thorn, ---> Horn ref.

+1 Pass

trampled and forsaken in times long past ---> History ref. A war was fought over her since birth, making her an unwanted existence.

-1 Fail I don't really associate "trampled and foresake" with the sort of class that Faelene's history describes. In the end the Unicorn king says she is not the one they are looking for to stop the violence - so even your description I think is off, since I don't really read her as having an "unwanted existence", but more of heralded birth.

I know who you are
Do you? Fluff

Ultimately this is a fail for me.


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