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[OPEN] !! No Place Like Home [Invasion Defense]

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Mare :: Equine :: 14.1 hh :: eight (ages in frostfall) HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
Valiance :: Common Red Dragon :: Fire Breath Abba
#1

Resplendence</style>

FROM THE SCRAPES AND BRUISES
TO THE FAMILIAR ABUSES
I'LL KICK AND SCREAM BUT IT NEVER CHANGES ANYTHING



How long had it been since she'd shook in fear? How long since her mind had functioned farther than seeing the horns with blood dripping off of them? How long had it been since she'd spoken? Too long. Too long. The pain hadn't gone away. And now, she could feel the presence of other people in the lands. It was an ominous feeling. A sickening feeling. One like when the Grey had invaded her old home.

Wait? Invaded? Instantly, the mare was on edge. She may not understand how to fight. She may have always been too afraid to get head on into the fray. But, she no longer cared. She had lost her home once. She wasn't about to lose another one. Shuffling closer and closer to a misty area she had already knotted her tail up a little so that it didn't become and object of which to step on - the knot high so it couldn't get stuck in a branch and keep her locked in place.

The mists, over these past couple of days, had become a source of comfort for the shattered mare. They had offered a cloak. They had offered protection. They had shrouded her from the world, as they were mostly doing now, and she could do nothing but thank the mists. They were now as much a part of her as they were the Edge, and with her mind shattered enough to just barely take in what was around her, they were slowly beginning to heal her.

She wasn't afraid, not right now. The grief and shock was still coursing through her veins. Perhaps it was a sign. Perhaps this was how she would die. she deserved it. The stag had been aiming for her. The mechanical one had aimed for her not Rowan. It was only right, now, that if she were to go out she actually got a chance to attempt to help those which she was growing closer to.

Her feet shuffled back and forth, eyes taking in the surroundings completely. The trees were pretty much all behind her, minus one placed about fifty feet to her right, those behind her about thirty, maybe thirty five feet. No trees close on her left. The mists shrouding up to her chest, weakening as it went up her neck, and almost non-existent around her face. The joys of being so tiny, the mists were her metaphorical shield and it somehow offered her a bit more bravery. She had wanted to heal. But, with her home being invaded she would at least attempt to help defend her new home to the best of her abilities.

Her meek voice finally escaped her throat, just below a whisper and barely audible, words whisked off of her maw and disappeared into the mists that shrouded her. "I'll be strong. Your death won't be in vain, Rowan..."


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Word Count = 800
Standard Invasion Rules
Site Wide Plot restricts the magic/companions
4 posts && defense each - invasion time limit.
Setting: More open clearing with a few branches/rocks on the ground. Tree's behind Res and to her right. Mists are radiating along the ground, thicker on the bottom, you can make out her form from her shoulders up from a farther distance, shoulders down you have to be a bit closer to make them out. (much like driving in a heavy fog)

When I'm ready to fall
You're the one always holding me up
With love

Phaedra the Opulent Posts: 343
Deceased
Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.3 :: 6 Buff: NOVICE
Stella :: Secretary Bird :: None Aud
#2
Shallow graves for shallow hearts; for pick-me-ups and fall-aparts.
For promises that never started right. </style>




The golden-girl had felt surprised when the Dauntless had called her aside and told her that there was to be an Invasion of the Edge. She had momentarily thought the towering stallion would scold her, for not being the bearer of this news - but she hadn't even time to draw a breath in her own defense, before he advised that she would be a member of the Grey party invading.

I? I am a spy! Built for speed, not for battle. If Ophelia was here -

But she wasn't. Her mentor had been replaced with a medic, and now she was being sent to war fighting for the Basin. For a group who would just as soon seen her dead on the ground, as members of the Edge. This is what Ophelia meant She thought bitterly, setting her jaw defiantly. But the golden-girl would not be a deserter, as Ophelia had. She would do her duty to her family, even when it felt like she was being thrown to the wolves.

Just another test She thought, as she soared high in the dark sky. Just like with the earth amulet - the amulet! She had thrown it at Ophelia's feet the day the two mares confronted each other in the Grove. It had been an act of defiance, but now it seemed senseless. Damnit she thought scoldingly. It would have been useful. None the less, she had the Moon Amulet that she had found the day that the lobstrosity had crawled out of the sea. A trill at her side, reminded the beauty that the amulet was not all that she had. Stella, her secretary bird, flashed her dazzling talons, and trilled again - her bright orangey-yellow face appearing excited. We be fine she directed, her voice reassuring in Phaedra's mind, who nodded with her own smile.

As mists began to envelop the lands, indicating that she had gone far enough SW to have reached the air space over the Edge, Phae's dazzling green gaze began to recognize shapes in the mist: Archibald was there. And Tolio?. For a moment her heart surged, and suddenly the desire to represent her family was dwarfed by the need to impress the cinnamon stallion who had once again, barged into her life.

"No Stella. We'll show them all. She whispered darkly into the night, her large downy wings fanning the air with near silence, as she descended into the mist.



The spy had only ever sparred twice before, and it would be a push to say that she had an arsenal of tactics at the ready. Still, she had the ability to move without being seen, the amulet around her next, and her companion at her side. She was lithe of body, and fast in both air and ground. Knowing the Edge held mostly equines (albeit many with startling abilities pertaining to dragons), could it be that she could simply descend upon one of them? What could they do without horns or wings? Magic Stella silently sent, sending a chill through Phaedra's golden body. Yes. Magic... She would have to take care.

In the midst of half a grove of trees, the mist swirled oddly around a shape. While Phae's gaze could not penetrate to the lower half of the creature, from what she could tell, it was hornless and wingless. Do we just attack? Phae mentally sent to Stella, who merely shrugged in reply.

Damnit Archibald! This is why you don't send a spy!

From the skies, Phaedra rapidly descends, her flight fuelled by excitement and naive confidence . Her nimble frame, built for speed and agility easily cuts through the warming Birdsong atmosphere. Her body does not sparkle as it usually does, for she does not wish to appear as a star falling from the sky - she wishes to remain unseen, as best as she can. She advances with only endless night at her back, to help cloak her in the sky. Her path is directed towards the equine's - now obviously a mare - right side. With outstretched hooves, Phaedra aims to impact Res's right shoulder, coming now from behind, slightly to the right. Her gaze watches closely, to alter her course should the mare become aware of her and evade the attack. Given her speed and wings, she is confident that she will be able to adjust easily should she run, or turn.

As momentum carries her over, her hindlegs kick out - snapping at whatever is in their reach - likely Res's left shoulder or the left side of her neck, should she remain stationary.

[No place like Home lyrics ftw! :3

WC: 787
Attack: 1/4
M&C as dictated by the SWP: 0/2]



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#3

Resplendence</style>

FROM THE SCRAPES AND BRUISES
TO THE FAMILIAR ABUSES
I'LL KICK AND SCREAM BUT IT NEVER CHANGES ANYTHING



Oh, what was she doing here? She wasn't meant to fight? Her petite frame didn't have the muscles that went with a fighter! Her mind wasn't even completely there! That was the entire reason she was standing here. Uncertainly, she shifted her feet as her body trembled in anticipation. Someone was bound to come and attack her. It wouldn't be an invasion if that wasn't the case. And, after all, what was this? An invasion.

Res had never fought. But, Res had seen fights. She didn't have any magic to back her up. She didn't have a horn to slice into their side like that mechanical being had done. She didn't have wings to fly. She was locked to the ground, with a knotted up tail so she didn't trip and a missing ear. Her golden orbs were searching the sky for a few seconds, and then searching the ground before her, where she assumed the creature would have to be coming from. She still wasn't completely herself, though. Her eyes had a steely glaze over them, as she fought with the images of death and injury circulating her skull. It didn't matter. Nothing mattered. If she died it would actually be for a good cause, and karma had so wished it upon her. It was that simple. If she died it was because she hadn't been smart enough to learn how to heal.

Her brain was fogging as she stared blankly around the mists and into the black sky. Shapes of non-existent creatures were forming in the fog and sending her shuffling to the left, then shuffling to the right. Good Gods. I'm stupid, Res thought to herself, still shuffling and peering up at the sky. That last glance upward caused something to catch her eye. So, when she glanced through the fog again it only took her a couple of seconds to place the sound of something being off and the thing that caught her eye to have her stepping back a little and looking up toward where she had sworn she had seen it.

And then, something was plummeting from the sky. Instantly, her eyes widened. What the heck?! she screeched in her head before noticing that the creature was actually pinpointed directly at her frame. Move! Move! God! Don't just stand here! Move! You don't have anyone to take the hit this time! She yelled at herself as she felt her muscles begin to lock up while she started to stumble out of the way. Pinning her audits as she spun on her haunches to face the incoming missal only to realize that she had now put her right shoulder in the line of fire. One. Two. Wait for it. The feeling of wind rustled her mane. NOW! She spun toward her left about ninety degrees, turning on her haunches so her right shoulder started to pull out of the way of the hind legs that had kicked out. The tips of them just barely grazing against her barrel. Three. Plant her fore hooves into the ground and snap out with her haunches, aiming her flints toward the winged mare's own hindquarters.

Wings are weak and hollow... Those words, for some reason, returned to Res's cranium at this moment. They are as soft as a cloud. Kaj! Thank you! Thank you so much! She needed to aim for the wings. If she managed to injure one then they might be on an even playing field. But, did she have the strength or agility to do so? Turning the other ninety degrees, Res rocketed off, the endurance of her Morgan heritage, along with the grace of the gaited breed allowed her to catapult with ease. Speeding up so that she was parallel, her left side up against the winged one's right side. She pulled forward just enough to kick out with her haunches toward the mare's hollow wings in an attempt to see if she could shatter, or at least bruise, the wings which Kaj had told her were more of a hindrance than an aid in battle.

Perhaps then she would be able to actually be worth something...

706 words
[1/4]
magic && companions not applicable to res
@[Phaedra]

When I'm ready to fall
You're the one always holding me up
With love

Phaedra the Opulent Posts: 343
Deceased
Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.3 :: 6 Buff: NOVICE
Stella :: Secretary Bird :: None Aud
#4
Shallow graves for shallow hearts; for pick-me-ups and fall-aparts.
For promises that never started right.
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There was no blood lust that filled the veins of the golden spy; no desire to see blood pool and trickle down the creamy coat of her opponent. She did not yearn to feel her teeth pull away skin from bone, nor to hear cartilage and bone snap beneath her attacks. All of this, Phaedra knew about herself, but it did not detract from the overwhelming feeling of dissatisfaction - of being robbed - that flooded her mind, as she sailed unsuccessfully over the compact mare. Phaedra might be a spy, no more than a flirtatious beauty - but she was not used to not getting her way. Not with men, and not now. To hell with Archibald sending her here. To hell with Tolio's melting gaze (Is he watching me?). To hell with the Grey and Ophelia and all of this political nonesense.

She couldn't control that, none of it. But she could control this. And she would not lose. You're mine sugar.


Perhaps it was the silvery swirl of the mist, obscured by the moonlight, that not only wrapped around the lower half of the equine, but perhaps filled her out a little more as well? In the air as she descended, Phaedra perceived the mare as being a little shorter and more compact of build than her own - was it possible that the mist had added to Res's height and bulk, such that Phae had simply overestimated her position? It seemed unlikely, given that her gaze had been glued to the mare even as she rapidly plummeted towards her - even as Res twirled - moon glow glinting off of her eyes allowing the two mares to look upon each other - even then she had been ready. She had been looking for the mare to try and evade. How did she miss?

As her long and lean hind legs graze only the side of her opponent before snapping back to her lithe frame, Phaedra's owl-inspired wings pump with long ease, her sooty body tilting vertically as she curves swiftly upwards in flight. Below, she can hear the sounds of movement - of hooves spinning and raising upon a terrain obscured by mist. Wind is displaced, as if the mare has kicked out at Phaedra's retreating form. As her body curves in the air, out of the corner of her eye, she can see the mist swirling again, as her opponent kicks out once more, like a shadow boxer in this endless night.

A smile curves on the sooty spy's lips as she watches this misguided attack: Now Phaedra mentally thinks to Stella. Immediately both sets of wings hug their respective sides, and two bodies fall from the stars. As the red-tinged mare leaps into action, as if bitten by a hornet, Phaedra and Stella's minds interweave seamlessly, and their bodies part. Phaedra aims to position herself nearly parallel to Res in the air, slightly behind and to the right as before. As Res's hind-end lifts off of the ground, Phae's pale front hooves aim to slam into the morgan's impressive right thigh, hoping to twist her hip and send her off balance. At the same time, the much smaller and faster Stella, has tried to place herself on Res's left. With talon's outstretched, the secretary bird, a voracious hunter of the skies, aims her outstretched claws for the compact muscles of the left shoulder, and wither area.

As Phaedra's sooty body continues forward, her hind end, now slightly skewed to the right given the effort of throwing her weight forward into her attack, she kicks out with a renewed fervor, aiming for the pale right shoulder, or neck of her opponent. As Stella raises into the night, Phaedra's own wings slap down hard, trying to slap at the mare below, and disorient and annoy, if nothing else.

In another life, perhaps the two mares could have been friends. They had Quilyan in common, after all. In the back of her mind, Phaedra recognized the mare, as Quil's...what? Plaything? As well as a mare driven out of the Edge. Having never been driven out of anything, since coming to Helovia, Phaedra's heart did not ooze any sympathy for the equine attempting to defend her land. Only perhaps a little jealousy, for the golden spy would have liked more time with Quilyan, during those drunken evenings in the Woods.

Alas. It was bigger than that now. This was no catfight between two mares, this was an Invasion. And Phaedra, warrior or not, belonged to the Mercenaries.

You're mine, sugar.

WC:771
Attack: 2/4
M&C as dictated by the SWP: 1/2]




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Mare :: Equine :: 14.1 hh :: eight (ages in frostfall) HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
Valiance :: Common Red Dragon :: Fire Breath Abba
#5

Resplendence</style>

FROM THE SCRAPES AND BRUISES
TO THE FAMILIAR ABUSES
I'LL KICK AND SCREAM BUT IT NEVER CHANGES ANYTHING



She had spun. She had kicked out. All of it was an instinct she didn't know she had truly possessed. The last time her instincts had kicked in, you ask? Well, that had to have been fighting off the wolves that had killed her twins, killed Ciro. Her flints met nothing but air, the mists around her and shrouding her in their protection. But their protection from what? Peering eyes? Well, protection from nothing - except maybe her own mind. She had kicked out again, not realizing yet that the mare had allowed her wings to take her to the air.

Again, the winged mare dropped from the sky, and Res sees it as it happens, allowing her form to rocket from her position after her. She notices a bird - a strange bird - but thinks nothing much of it. It was probably startled from the trees, just like her mind was at this moment. Shattered, broken, torn, shaken. How could she have struck out twice without realizing the enemy had taken to the air? How could she have been so stupid? I'm not meant to fight, that's why.

But, it seems as though her attempt to pull ahead had worked, so with the mare slightly behind and to her right Res kicked out. Hope flooded her veins as she begged her flints locked onto her wings. What she didn't expect, though, was for flints to meet her instead of the wing. It hits her and jars her, stumbling a few inches to her left, a small gasp of air escaping her as she attempts to gather her balance and spin to face the mare. Though, before she can spin her eyes lock upon the same bird as earlier. Res falls back on her haunches and attempts to back up, careful with her hoof placement, the talons scratching against the tip of her shoulder and wither area, breaking the blood vessels. And this time, the life liquid upon her pelt is not that of Rowan's - it is that of her own. But, she's still lacking the feeling of pain - whether it's from the haze of memories of the horned one in her mind or the adrenaline rush from the fear of this skirmish, though, she does not know.

The winged one continues forward as a whine of shock escapes Res's maw, her eyes now locking on the mare who didn't require her to spin as she had thought she would have needed too. The winged one seemed to be at more of an angle than before, starting to cross into her path. So, when she kicks out, with Res backing up - still wearily eyeing the pair of winged things - the flints get within an inch or two of Res's flesh but do not hit their mark.

The bird shoots into the night sky again, and then the winged one was suddenly slapping down her wings. Panic officially sets in as tears start to flood through the Equine's eyes. She was not meant to fight. Before Res can even go to attack or attempt to do anything to retaliate for the pain that was caused the winged one was back in the air. A loud, piercing cry escaped Res's maw, audit pinned against her cranium in annoyance. "What the hell?!" she hissed, moving back a little so that she could eye the winged one in the sky before her.

Her sides weren't heaving, the endurance from her breed serving her well, but her nostrils were flared. Anger radiated in her orbs. Anger that the mare wouldn't join her on the ground - that she felt the desire to fly above her and keep her precious little pelt clean. She might have had a chance if all of her attempts at an attack was not thwarted by the creature taking to the air. Hollow. Hindrance. Those words kept replaying in her mind. Skull. Ribs. Death. That was the only way to get rid of rabid wolves - that was how she had needed to bloody her hooves to try and save her young ones. But she could do nothing when she was earth bound and this creature wouldn't allow her even a chance to prove that maybe she was worthwhile.

No. All this creatures was doing was proving that she should have been in the place of Rowan. That she should have died...

752 words
[2/4]
magic && companion not applicable

When I'm ready to fall
You're the one always holding me up
With love

Phaedra the Opulent Posts: 343
Deceased
Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.3 :: 6 Buff: NOVICE
Stella :: Secretary Bird :: None Aud
#6
Shallow graves for shallow hearts; for pick-me-ups and fall-aparts.
For promises that never started right.
</style>




Phaedra felt a surge of excitable energy hum through her body, as her hooves connected with stout morgan thigh. But it wasn't that she had landed an attack - it was how easily the leg had given away to her force. In her tussle with Birch, his body had been so solid, so un-moving... It was impossible to feel anything but weak and miniature next to him. But this mare, although of a more muscular build that Phae's own, still yielded easily under her force, making the sooty spy feel empowered and confident.

The feeling was delicious, and Phaedra craved more.

Thrown slightly from the impact, Phaedra's attempt to graze the brindled back or side of her opponent had been unsuccessful, as Res continued flail beneath her. As Phaedra's attack to Res's thigh, and Stella's attack to the mare's shoulder were meant to occur simultaneously, Phaedra wasn't able to see the outcome of her friends outstretched talons. But by the breath of pain that Phae could hear sharply escaping Res's lips, she had assumed Stella had not missed her mark.

Same Stella thought, sensing Phaedra's mind wondering about the attack. What? Phaedra replied, as her wings pulled her higher above the ground. Circling in the sky, Phaedra saw what her companion meant, and a silvery laugh escaped her pink muzzle. Yes! Same! Phaedra replied with amusement and praise; the pale mare, brindled with a reddish pink, had been given another sort of brindling, compliments of Stella's talons.

Phaedra's bright smile diminished somewhat, as Res's cry reached her ears. Circling around so that her body was about 15 feet off the ground, she studied the mare for a moment - Her flared nostrils, her missing ear, her bleeding shoulder. "What did you think would happen, sugar? What are you even doing here?" For a moment, the bright sparkle of her gaze fades. What are WE doing here her mind inserts. For it is merely their anatomical differences, that have allowed Phae to best this mare. Neither are warriors that much is clear, and while Phaedra might have 2 spars under her belt, she is still grossly out of place here. But she is alone in the air, and on that score alone, she cannot be beaten. " Why don't you just give up, leave the fighting to the big boys. Save yourself the scars." Phaedra's voice is flirtatious and playful as always, though secretly she hopes that the mare will accept her offer.

To emphasize her point, Phaedra's lithe form begins to nimbly dart around the airspace above Res's head - above the reach of her hooves, even should she stand on her hind legs. Intentionally, Phaedra allows her coat to once again gleam and glisten with the light of the stars, for there is no need to remain hidden. "JUST- Phaedra's wings beat harder as her body leans backwards, so that she remains more or less stationary. Her intent is to swirl the mists around Res, to distract and confuse. The mare already seems a little off - perhaps Phae could play off of that, without having to physical wound her again. "-QUIT" She finishes, as her body suddenly rises in the air, moving to the opposite side from where she was, continuing to beat and swirl the mists with her wings. Even Stella joined in; her bright orangey-yellow face darting it and out of the mist, forcing it to warp and ripple around her body.

Although she could not remember the exact words, the sentiments that Ophelia had shared with the spy, during their encounter in the Grove, would not leave her mind. Was this right here, what Ophelia meant? Attacking a mare, who seemed afraid of the pegasus' wings? Would Archibald continue on, were he in her place? Undoubtedly he would, but Phaedra was finding it difficult. This wasn't even their home they were fighting for - it was simply a fulfillment of a contract. Phaedra had already proved that she had best this mare, for really, if she stayed airborne, what could the one-eared pale faced mare do? Nothing but continue to squeal. Would that be enough, for her part in the contract? Did she really need to bloody the mare more, to prove her place within the Grey?

"Aren't there cliffs near by? Wouldn't want you to slip and fall, sugar. Best for you just to give in, now." She encouraged, her golden body glistening like a disembodied star.

WC:750
Attack: 3/4
M&C as dictated by the SWP: 1/2]






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Resplendence Posts: 466
Hidden Account atk: 4.5 | def: 8 | dam: 5.5
Mare :: Equine :: 14.1 hh :: eight (ages in frostfall) HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
Valiance :: Common Red Dragon :: Fire Breath Abba
#7

Resplendence</style>

FROM THE SCRAPES AND BRUISES
TO THE FAMILIAR ABUSES
I'LL KICK AND SCREAM BUT IT NEVER CHANGES ANYTHING



They were definitely bonded. The bird and the winged creature were connected spiritually. Tears were beginning to flood through Res's golden orbs. One. Two. Three. Breathe in. The winged creature wasn't attacking, she was simply pulling up in the air and circling around her. So high that there was no way she could reach her. And then, the winged one's sweet voice pulled out into the wind. What did she think would happen? A fight where she would actually get a chance to make a few hits! A fight where she might have actually been able to have something land and hit her mark! But no! The wings were dangerous. But, not dangerous in the way she had thought before Kaj. They were dangerous because they made the entire fight tilted in the one with the wing's favour.

Why doesn't she just give up? Why doesn't she leave the fighting to the big boys? Why doesn't she save herself the scars? Hah! She was already scarred. The tiny mare began to dark around, swirling the mists around her. It should have been disorienting. It should have thrown her off balance. But, with the tears the mists had already started to swim around in her vision so the added movement didn't bother her all too much. "What are you doing here? This is my home! You aren't one of those big boys either - little miss. I have to use my wings so I don't stain my pelt! You say to save myself the scars - but that's all you seem to be doing. I'm already broken and shattered beyond fixing. It's about time my body gained the number of scars my mind has collected over the years." Res hissed, her voice breaking a little as her tears choked her up. But, there was a strength in her words that she herself couldn't place.

For Rowan. For Quil. For Kaj. For Mirage. So that they have something to be PROUD of! Res stumbled back a couple of steps, her hooves instantly knocking up against a few branches. The mists weren't working in the winged one's favor, because the more she swirled it the higher up they went - the more they hid the tiny mare's frame who wasn't graced with the wings. Drop her head, making it look like shame. But the mists were now a sort of comfort. They were hiding her true pain from the world. Four. Grab the branch her feet had kicked. Five. It was thick. It was sturdy. But it wasn't long. Six. Re situate it in her maw so that she could throw it like a boomerang. Seven. Listen as the mare's wing beat harder and focus on the gleaming light of her coat as it remains stationary. She didn't help herself. Eight. Throw her head back. Feel the pull and the searing pain as it yanks on the gash in her shoulder, causing more blood to flow out. Nine. Give it a huge swing, Ten. Let go. Watch as it flies straight up toward the middle of the gleaming light. Instantly, she stepped back again, in the deeper confines of the mist and this time she felt a rock. A larger rock. More energy to throw, but she could pick it up. So, she did the same exact thing, tossing it with no hesitation this time.

What was that? Something about a cliff. Yes, there were cliffs, but not the direction she was moving. They were in front of her and to her right. She was going back and to her left. Another step. Something hard under her footing. The branch she picks up is heavier, but she knows how to carry it. It's much longer than the last one, and she has to balance even more on her fore-end in order to pull herself up. Hollow. Weak. Hell. It no longer matter if she aimed at the wings, the gleaming of her coat was still in her eyes. She rocked back on her haunches, keeping her head low to stay under the mists. And then, she rocketed forward, at the last second throwing her head up and taking a mighty leap into the air, trying to impale the branch into her wing as her eyes lock on the joint of the winged one's right shoulder. Her head was feinted in toward the mare's chest, letting the branch fly true toward her intended target. But, if the winged one managed to switch her weight and position before it reached her then nothing would work. Once her body was starting to fall back to the ground she allowed herself to drop the branch. landing on her forehand, carefully placing herself back into the mists as they acted as a source of comfort. She would fight.

800 words exactly
[3/4]
magic/companions not applicable

When I'm ready to fall
You're the one always holding me up
With love

Phaedra the Opulent Posts: 343
Deceased
Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.3 :: 6 Buff: NOVICE
Stella :: Secretary Bird :: None Aud
#8
Shallow graves for shallow hearts; for pick-me-ups and fall-aparts.
For promises that never started right.
</style>



"I'm winning sugar, that's what I'm doing here. " Her voice was the smugly confident tone, of a pretty girl, who knows she has won. It was such an ugly emotion - precisely the sort that Ru was likely trying to elucidate when she stormed out of the herd a few days prior, but Phaedra didn't care. She didn't like mares; she didn't like being forced to fight, especially for the racists unicorns. But more than all that, Phaedra hated to lose, and the knowledge that that could not happen, blocked out any shred of empathy that she might have showed the bleeding mare below.

"I belong to the Grey - I'm sure you remember the outcome of that little rumble and tumble, the last time we came for your home." The dazzling smile that graced her lips disappeared quickly as Res went on about her emotional and physical damage. Phaedra, who had at most one friend, was poorly equipped to deal with emotive fodder such as that, and so merely tossed her shimmering crown once more.

Curling her lip in a sneer at Res's last words, Phaedra snorted from her position in the air. "I can arrange that, Sugar."

As her wings swirled the mist, now shrouding them both, she began to feel a familiar ache in her joints. Phaedra was used to quick sprints and long glides, and although her body was perfectly engineered for flight, her muscles grew tired from the constantly flapping. As Res's head dipped low, Phaedra could heard scrapping upon the ground, and immediately sought information from Stella. Long..wood? Stella replied, but it was too late.

"Ooomph" Phae grunted, as air was sharply thrown from her lungs. Res's stick had struck Phaedra squarely in the chest, in the middle of her right muscle. Her right foreleg immediately raised to protect the wounded area, as well as dull the pain while the muscle spasmed and contracted.

GET HER Phaedra's mind screamed painfully, and immediately Stella was in motion. Her avian body moved swiftly and easily, targeting Res as she moved to pick up the rock. Stella's white wings blended in well with the fog, displacing little as she rocketed the short distance to where Res had retreated into the fog. With talons outstretched once again, Stella aimed to tear into Res's well-muscled left thigh, as she would the other mammals that she dined upon -first by 'stamping' upon Res's croup, before trying to tear her talons into flesh. Her body stayed forward enough to avoid hooves, should they suddenly raise, but was ready if the mare should try - the bird was certain she could cut a ligament, if it came within reach.

Phaedra's wings pulled her higher into the air as her friend attacked, for the pegasus sought the haven of the airspace in the trees, where it would be unlikely that the projectile objects could reach her. Not only would the canopy provide a barrier, but Res would have to apply significant force to reach her here. Just in case, Phae dulled the starsheen of her coat completely, and her body tensed - ears forward - listening and watching carefully for anything else thrown her way.

She flinched as she heard a rock striking the hard granite. Stella! Where? Her mind implored, and immediately Stella attempted to map out where she perceived the morgan to be. Yet Stella's mind-speech was still too limited to get a clear picture, which was why the spy was all the more jumpy, as she heard hooves sharply strike granite. Unsure where Res was, for her coat and short stature proved to be a valuable pairing with the fog, Phaedra nervously rose high into the air, sea-green gaze searching down below. Her body jumped visibly, as Res's one-eared skull pierced through, with another, larger stick. Whatever combination it was of flight, lack of sparkle, Stella's gaze, and Res's lack of expertise when it came to throwing gods-damned sticks - Phaedra was grateful, as she came away unscathed from these latter attacks.

Drawing a deep breath, Phae took a moment to investigate the instantly-bruised muscle, frowning as she did so at the lingering pain. "Really sugar? Sticks and stones? Aren't we a little old for that?" Gliding about 30 feet in the opposite direction, far enough that she judged Res couldn't throw anything without her at least hearing it first, Phaedra landed near the end of the cliff, her own sooty frame now obscured in the mist. Her body was growing tired - likely due to how tense she had become, although she didn't want Res to see this. Is this what happens? She throws sticks at me, until I can fly no longer?


WC:799
Attack: 4/4
M&C as dictated by the SWP: 2/2]






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Resplendence</style>

FROM THE SCRAPES AND BRUISES
TO THE FAMILIAR ABUSES
I'LL KICK AND SCREAM BUT IT NEVER CHANGES ANYTHING



Winning. Hah. That's only because she wanted to keep herself in the air. That was only because she was too afraid of bloodying her pelt. She belonged to the Grey. Instantly Res's muscles tensed. Res was almost near laughter. God. Her mind was broken. Witnessing the death of Rowan had torn her apart into shreds she couldn't even imagine. She was broken and being repaired in ways one wouldn't have imagined before.

It didn't matter. Res's endurance was there. She wasn't weak. She was used to running. She was used to fleeing. She was used to being afraid. It didn't matter that this mare was one of those who had stolen her old home from her. It didn't matter. So, when the branch had made contact with the mare as she grunted. By now, Res had cleared the tears from her eyes. You're weak. You're useless. She had used to be. She wouldn't be anymore. She would learn to be strong. She shifted her weight, and she snagged a rock. She swung her head, eyes glimpsing the oncoming talons just long enough to toss the rock, without paying attention to direction, and to shuffle out of the way, her body lurching forward and to the right, the talons only cutting off a few strands of her tail and leaving them discarded in the mist.

Oh. How she wanted to step on that bird, how she wanted to crush it's skull like she had the wolves who had killed her twins. It was just as badly covered in blood as the wolves, only this time it was metaphorical - not actually drenched in the blood. One would think that the rock missing would have begun to dissuade the mare from continuing to use these branches. But, she didn't care anymore. The mists were covering me well as I got another rock, jumping in the air. But the mare had rose even higher into the air in order to protect herself and the branch missing it's mark. God. Dammit. I'm going to cut you bitch. I really am. Those wings need to learn to stop flapping! That fear of wings, it was starting to become over-ridden when they weren't flapping in her face. In fact, it was beginning to turn into an anger and distaste of them.

And the mare's voice came again, Res instantly using it to lock onto the mare's position and continuing to shroud herself in the mists, moving carefully toward her. The hoofsteps were quite, barely audible as she used her gaited breed to float along the ground. And, when she almost tripped she snagged the branch, noticing it's sharpened edge. It was small, would just barely fit in her mouth - almost like a dagger. She had heard hooves hit the ground with a gentle thud. The winged one was finally earth bound. And, she noticed, that the farther she went the closer to the edge she was getting. But did she care? No. No she didn't care.

This is for you, Rowan. This is for you, Ciro. This is for you, my twins. I will not allow myself to sit idly by and watch as people die around me. So, with majority of the branch in her mouth, hair falling over it and blocking the sight of it protruding from the side of her jowls, she moved forward until she saw the faint outline of wings and the mare's frame. Her head, sticking out from the mists, ears prevalent. Res quietly moved to the side, placing herself so that she as she runs her dagger will be able to touch the flesh and act like a horn. Perhaps I can slice and dice...

Three. Two. One. NOW! She took off, still careful to barely allow her feet to touch the ground. Her golden orbs locked on the mare's chest as the mist started to wrap around Res's path and a bit away from the winged mare. The dagger was aimed for the mare's chest. Full speed. Don't stop. The cliff only ended on her left - she could go forward for a long time. But, that wasn't her plan. She skid to a halt the second she reached where the end of the mare's chest was before spinning toward her left and attempting to stab the dagger into the winged one's right shoulder, near the wing joint. Please let it hit the mark. God. I can't deal with these wings anymore. She pleaded to herself before letting her mouth jerk back and down, as if to cut a piercing line in the flesh before shooting back a few feet, to try and stay away from the flapping of the wings.

She would not be hit by these wings. She would not give in without a fight...

800 words exactly (again)
[4/4]
magic and companions not applicable

When I'm ready to fall
You're the one always holding me up
With love

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#10
Shallow graves for shallow hearts; for pick-me-ups and fall-aparts.
For promises that never started right.
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Secretary birds, often referred to as the devil's horse due to their speed and ferocity, are used to taking down fast prey. Thus, Stella was furious, that a mare with her head in a cloud of mist, was somehow able to fully side-step an attack from a full grown bird of prey, flying rapidly at her ass.

Some girls have all the luck.

As Phaedra landed, her breath continually caught in her chest, as her flanks heaved. She was used to being the silent one - the magic gifted to her by Ophelia (Oh! how even the thought of that name caused her chest to flutter!), allowed her to walk silently; to move unseen. But now, it was as if that gift was showered down upon both mares, with Res, if anything at the advantage due to her short stature.

Phaedra's sea-green gaze surveyed the fog: willing Res to appear. Though it was not necessarily Res she was afraid of - it was those damned sticks. The bruise on her chest was already sensitive to her movements, and Phaedra did not want to afford the mare an opportunity to throw something at her again. Given the distance put between the two, surely she would hear the morgan try to bridge the distance, were she going to try again?

Right?

Phaedra's sides heaved, even though she tried to draw shallow and silent breaths. Although her graceful and elegant lines made her an efficient flier, the amount of time she had spent in the air stagnant, had drained her energy considerably. She needed this moment to rest, and only hoped that she would have the luxury of hooves upon stone, to warn her of an attack.

...!

Small ears shot forward, trying to pinpoint the sound. It almost sounded like a branch being caught on something. Almost. Surely, she would be able to hear the morgan approaching? Although she was of a smaller and more muscular build than Phaedra, it wasn't as if she weighed nothing. Surely the spy would be able to hear, even the muffled sounds of hooves upon stone? It wasn't like the mist could hide that...

..!...!!!..!

There it was! Turning her head, Phaedra was almost sure she could hear the rhythmic sound of hooves upon stone. There..and there..and there! But as she turned her head, she realized with dismay that it was simply the sound of her own blood pounding in her ears.

Stella! Where!? She sent to Stella, her mental voice a whisper as if Res could somehow detect their communication. Stella, who had remained behind the mare, waiting for her bonded's command to attack, peered easily through the mist - her avian feet moving with a silence that the equines couldn't hope to match. Coming...stick! Stella sent, sending brief flashes of what she could see, before Res's form was swallowed in the mist.

Flanks heaving, the mare no longer tried to quiet her breath - obviously Res knew where she was. Gulping in air, Phaedra's long and lean legs shook with anticipation, as she tensed her entire body. If the mare's plan was to tire her out, she would not play into her hands, so easily. Wings outspread, and every inch of her sooty golden pelt standing on end, Phaedra waited at the cliff.

Had a number of things gone differently, Phaedra very nearly could have died. But it simply wasn't the case, that on such hard ground, that Res's sudden increase of speed went unnoticed. Perhaps, if she had kamikaze'd and not changed her course, she could have thrown them both over the cliff - but the noise, and the mare's decision to not commit suicide, where enough for the winged one to escape.

As Res's hooves struck the ground, Phaedra prepared to leap into the sky - coming...stick! Stella had said - in order to gain altitude fast enough, she would have to run forward - right into the charging mare. With only a second to decide, Phaedra hastily backed up, her hooves never slowing even as the cliff began to crumble under her weight. With a loud gulp of air, Phae felt the air pressure change as the mists rushed ahead of Res to wrap around Phae's disappearing form, and felt the chill of the air that surrounded the cliff begin to cling to her wings, as Phaedra allowed herself to fall.

The mare could still throw that damned stick, and Phaedra would not serve as target practice again. After only a few seconds, her body plummeting towards the blackened sea, she shifted forward with ease, allowing the fall to become controlled, as her wings shot from her sides, creating lift and saving her from the murky waters.

WC:800
Attack: 4/4
Closing Defense: 1/1
M&C as dictated by the SWP: 2/2]




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#11

P h a e d r a | R e s p l e n d e n c e
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By my verdict this fight is a TIE.
Neither party receives VP. Neither the invaders nor the defenders receive a point in their favor.


PHAEDRA -- post 1 (attack only)

[Realism]
+ 1| Attack: Forelegs to Res's right shoulder.
+ 1| Attack: Kick to Res's left shoulder/neck.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion: "Damnit Archibald! This is why you don't send a spy!"
0 | Easy Read: The first attack, you started her path as going to Res's right side, but then stated you were coming from behind and slightly right. To me, this added unnecessary complications to the scene in my mind.
+ 1| Flow

RESPLENDENCE -- post 1

[Realism]
- 1| Dropped Attack: While I figure that your stumble or your pivot brings Resplendence out of the way of Phaedra's attacks, you never clearly state whether or not her initial hit with her forelegs actually lands or misses.
0 | Defense: Pivoting to move her right shoulder out of the way of hind hooves, taking damage to the barrel. You do not mention pain or lack of pain, and you also failed to indicate which side of her barrel is injured, though from your other descriptors I would hazard right.
+ 1| Attack: Kicking out toward Phaedra's hind quarters. I think this attack could hit, regardless of Phaedra still being airborn, since you didn't aim for a particular area (especially one high up like the flank).
- 1| Borderline Powerplay: "...her left side up against the winged one's right side." -- You cannot dictate with certainty that Resplendence will be able to make it to Phaedra's side because it limits your opponent's actions. You may only attempt this sort of positioning.
0 | Attack: Kick toward the wings. Phaedra never states she lands, also, you cannot kick out at both wings at once, so state that you are kicking toward the right wing. I did not count this a purely bad attack, though, because I feel like the strategy as well as using advice from a friend is a very strong point here.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion: Nervous Nancy.
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Flow

PHAEDRA -- post 2

[Realism]
- 1| Defense: Soaring upward is a great way to escape attacks, but I think you are overestimating the speed with which she would change the direction of her movement and ascend to completely miss Res's first kick, which immediately follows Phaedra's own.
+ 1| Defense: Continue flying to avoid Res's second kick.
0 | Attack: Front hooves to Res's right thigh. The issue I have with this attack is that you wish it to be simultaneous with her second kick, but you already mentioned it earlier in this post, so the timing is incorrect: "...see the mist swirling again, as her opponent kicks out once more, like a shadow boxer in this endless night."
- 2| Powerplay: Imposing an attack your opponent did not launch - a third kick.
+ 1| Attack: Stella's claws toward Res's left shoulder/withers.
+ 1| Attack: Kick to Res's right shoulder.
- 1| Attack: Wing-slap. Phaedra would not be in range for this attack, if she had just finished kicking at Res's shoulder.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion
0 | Easy Read: You really lost track of timing and placement in this post, which made it difficult to read.
+ 1| Flow

RESPLENDENCE -- post 2

[Realism]
0 | Attack: Kick toward wings. Which wing, again? You cannot hit both at one time.
0 | Injury: Stumbling toward the left. No mention of pain, damage done, etc., though I do think you did well to seem surprised and off balance.
+ 1| Defense: Backing up to direct Stella's talons to her shoulder. You mentioned that she did not feel pain this time, yay!
+ 1| Defense: Continuing backing up to avoid Phaedra's kick. I struggled a bit with this one because kicks are fast and backing up for a horse is typically slow... however, I think it is still possible to get Res out of the way, given that it was started for Stella's attack prior.
- 1| Injury: Or maybe just general confusion? Did Phaedra's wing slap hit or not? I am not certain, as you never directly state that it does, but you mention pain caused by Phaedra in the next sentence. Either way, this was not clear.

[Prose]
+ 2| Emotion: "No. All this creatures was doing was proving that she should have been in the place of Rowan. That she should have died..." -- Aww, the Res feels, everywhere in this post. .___.
0 | Flow: You had several moments where Res was spinning but then not, doing this and then not, so the entire thing read as rushed and jerky. If you are going to talk about an action, follow through with it. Otherwise, it's just clutter taking up your wordcount and confusing the reader.
0 | Easy Read: I had a lot of, 'wait what?' moments in this post.

PHAEDRA -- post 3

[Realism]
+ 1| Experience: Recalling a spar with Birch and comparing the ease of attacks.
- 1| Dropped attack: You fail to mention Res's kick at the beginning of her post.
+ 1| Attack: Swirling the mists around Res to confuse her.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion
+ 1| Easy Read
+ 1| Flow

RESPLENDENCE -- post 3

[Realism]
+ 1| Defense: Crying blocking the disorientation. I never thought I would see crying used in a defensive way, but alas, there is a first for everything.
+ 1| Attack: Throwing a stick in the direction of Phaedra. I considered this for a long time... throwing long, slender objects using just my arm positioned like a horse's neck to try and make it as realistic as possible, while remembering that horses have stronger necks, etc, and I think this could actually reach 15 feet in the air, considering that Res is standing at nearly 5 already.
+ 1| Attack: Throwing a rock in the direction of Phaedra. Same deal... I threw smaller, denser objects this time, though.
- 1| Attack: Jumping to impale Phaedra with a branch. While I think, depending on how large of a banch we are talking about, this could reach her, the way it is written makes it flatly impossible. You mention Res rocking back onto her haunches and then jumping up. Watch this video of horses jumping in slow motion. See how they get a running start, pushing off with their front end mid-stride and then pushing off with their back end? Even then, these horses have their head up the whole time. They are probably 16-17hh, considerably taller than Res, and are not carrying a branch, and these leaps are still only 6ft, usually.
- 1| Borderline Powerplay: "It no longer matter if she aimed at the wings, the gleaming of her coat was still in her eyes." -- Phaedra may have stopped glowing, so you cannot dictate this. You could say "I could aim for what I thought was the glowing of her coat."

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion
+ 1| Easy Read: This post was easy to read, even with the innovative attacks. You did good!
+ 1| Flow

PHAEDRA -- post 4

[Realism]
+ 1| Injury: Stick to the chest.
+ 1| Attack: Stomping upon Res's croup.
- 1| Attack: Stella clawing at Res's left thigh. Stella is first landing upon Res's croup, but then trying to reach all the way down to her thigh? I realize that secretary birds have long legs, but I think this would unbalance the bird, making her fall off, if she tried to lean that far over, making this attack implausible. 15 roughly would be the croup, and the thigh is demarked by 20.
- 1| Borderline Powerplay: "Her body stayed forward enough to avoid hooves..." -- You may only attempt this, not say it with certainty. What is to stop Res from jetting forward, unbalancing the bird, and then kicking out?
+ 1| Defense: Flying upward to avoid the rock being thrown.
+ 1| Defense: Avoiding the stick by flying higher up still.

[Prose]
0 | Flow: You mention Stella clawing Res's thigh, then stomping before she claws, then clawing again, which should have just been written in order.
+ 1| Emotion: Phaedra: DUDE WTF STICK
+ 1| Easy Read

RESPLENDENCE -- post 4

[Realism]
- 1| Dropped attack: No mention of Stella's attempt to "stomp" on Res.
+ 1| Defense: Surging forward to the tail.
0 | Attack: Dagger-stick toward Phae's chest. No mention of the direction of approach here.
- 1| Borderline Powerplay: "She skid to a halt the second she reached where the end of the mare's chest...." -- Again, this is directive to your opponent. Phaedra could move or do anything in this span of time.
+ 1| Attack: Stab toward the right shoulder/wing joint.

[Prose]
+ 1| Emotion: Res getting fierce, finally!
+ 1| Flow
+ 1| Easy Read

PHAEDRA -- post 5 (defense only)

[Realism]
- 1| Defense: Cliff crumbling under Phaedra to avoid attacks. Realistically, since the Edge's cliffs are more like solid rockfaces and not overhangs, I find it very unlikely Phaedra is heavy enough to crumble the cliff. If Deimos was instilling his magic in it, maybe, otherwise, no.


PHAEDRA

[Bonus]
+ 1| Breed comparison: While you tried to keep this in mind throughout the fight, I think you treated it unrealistically. Andalusians (the other half of Phae's lineage) are stockier and bigger than Morgans! Morgans are also used for many disciplines which require speed, endurance, and elegant movement. So while Phaedra had the upper hand with wings, I think you overstated the agility of her build comparatively.
+ 2| Surroundings: Using the night and the mists to help hide her and disorient throughout the fight.
+ 1| Least injured.

[Injuries]
None.

[Creativity]
+ 1| I thought making the cliff crumble was creative, if not realistic.

Comments: I think your fought well, considering you have not spent nearly as much time fighting with Phaedra. However, I feel like you dwelled too much on when your opponent made mistakes and not enough on your own writing, as often when Res's posts had flaws, yours followed with some as well. Ultimately, try to keep yourself from getting caught up in all of those details and take the replies in stride. Do not let them throw you off in your fighting, and I think you will be a lot better for it. Good job!

RESPLENDENCE

[Bonus]
+ 1| Breed comparison: You do not often compare Res with Phaedra, but you did use the gaited qualities of the morgan breed to be stealth in the fight, which I really appreciated!
+ 2| Surroundings: Oh, boy, what did you not use surroundings for?

[Injuries]
None.

[Creativity]
+ 1| Sticks and stones attack to get Phaedra out of the air.
+ 1| Using waterworks as a defensive and useful strategy.

Comments: You are new to fighting, and it shows through small, rookie mistakes we all make. Overall, though, I think you have great potential to be an awesome battler with some practice! You had creative ideas and really kept in tune with your character throughout the fight, which always leads to better outcomes. Keep that connection and creativity, as it will be the difference between a great fighter and a good one later on. You should take some time to research the movement and anatomy or horses, watch some play fight videos maybe, but you are well on your way. Great fight!

TOTAL
Phaedra - 67
Resplendence - 67

image credit to Paulo Brandão


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