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[DROP] Last breath of a survivor

Rasta Posts: 305
Hidden Account atk: 7 | def: 10 | dam: 3
Mare :: Equine :: 14.1hh :: six (ages in Tallsun) HP: 62 | Buff: NOVICE
Ettore :: Red-Tailed Hawk :: None Abba
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There was so much screaming! There were so many voices! There were so many beings moving around and shaking the ground in their attempts to drag heavy objects. It was beginning to get overwhelming. And some of them were calling all of them selfish. Some of them were saying that the others had no compassion. Some where showing a completely rude side. Some were saying that others were basically daft for not asking for help. But, no matter how badly she wanted to chew out the creatures who had said such a thing - to say that she would have been willing to offer her nest as something to build off of - she bit her tongue. She would not fight. She didn't have the energy to do such a thing.

And they continued to move. They continued to speak. That was, until all seemed to fall silent as the vibrations continued to increase ten-fold. No. A hundred-fold. She could feel her entire body trembling from the overwhelming sensations that were being sent through her bones. Her eyes squeezed shut in pain. What was this so similar to? The border. This was exactly like the Helovian border. Where her other half had been so easily severed from her form without so much as a goodbye. But, she couldn't make out what it was. In fact, it was growing even more intense with each second that passed.

She stumbles backwards only to feel something cling onto her hooves the second she has started to stabilize her swaying frame. Legs spread wide and tears on her cheeks she doesn't even realize that the nests that were closest to the ground had begun to fill with this being that was creating all of the vibrations. She could not feel anything except this massive looming wall as it tore all of her senses from her. There was a pounding sensation in her cranium as the vibrations fought to screw with her head. Never had she felt so helpless -so broken and beaten. Her heart had sped up in an attempt to match the speed of the palpitations of this creature which was looming before her. And, then she felt the clinging begin to climb up her legs. Reaching, grabbing, clawing, sticking. It was trying to pull her down. And the oxygen was barely coming to her lungs. Her audits were pinned to her skull as she attempted to move forward, where she knew there was no tree directly in her path. Trying, trying so hard, just to start to break free from the one thing was trying it's hardest to kill her. Her glowing hawk marking shone brightly against the tar, the last symbol of her fight. The last symbol of the missing part of her soul.

A deep breath in and she let out a bellowing cry. "If you have wings get the egg. Someone give the creatures with the wings the Egg. Fly away! Fly away and don't look back. Do not pity us! You cannot save us..." She called out, her bellowing starting to turn into a wheeze as she felt the wall of vibrations continue to intensify and wrap around her chest. "S-save the ch-child. It d-de-ser-ves a life..." she choked out, kicking out toward the unseen wall, feeling some of it shatter under her hooves and the tar start to descend back down her chest, no longer squeezing her lungs. But, as soon as she fell still again it continued to crawl up her tiny body.

Her mind. Her soul. They were both broken. She would die alone. Or at least, if she died now, she would believe that she had died alone. The vibrations were creating such a headache that she couldn't tell if anyone was around her. She couldn't tell if the world was even right-side up. She just heard voices screaming. The words: it'll be okay! But, will it really be okay? She didn't feel like it.

She opened her mouth one last time, silent tears escaping her blind orbs as she fought to suck in more air while her lungs were starting to be constricted. A whine of pain. A whine of the torture, and then the wall was wiping away her tears. Like it was attempting to comfort her before she felt it beginning to claw at her face. She swung her neck. Again the creature was retreating from it's clawing upon her face, and back down her neck. But moving her legs was still proving difficult.

And then. A different vibration source was calling. A calmer one. One that was slower. One that actually sounded like a steady heartbeat. One that was beginning to edge into the vibrations that was clouding her entire world. She didn't know what it was. She didn't know if it was death coming to take her away before she could feel the real pulls and torture of this creature that had swarmed in. She didn't know if it was attempting to stop the creature. She just knew that she needed to concentrate on those vibrations and not the suffocating ones around her frame. "Let the child have a life - the one it chooses..." she choked out, her lungs still trying to be squeezed, and she could feel the bruises as they began to form just under her hide.

Then, there was nothing but pain and a black world as her mind fought to concentrate on vibrations that were not the wall, shrouding everything in black...

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So, Rasta isn't dying. She's just getting a lot of bruising and the tar is starting to suffocate her, but allowing her just enough room to get gasping breaths of air in. Basically... it's torturing her until she gives up fighting to live...


Messages In This Thread
Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 08-31-2013, 10:45 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Sakura - 08-31-2013, 11:22 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Sohalia - 08-31-2013, 11:30 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Rasta - 08-31-2013, 11:45 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Ampere - 09-01-2013, 12:45 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Myrddin - 09-01-2013, 10:17 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Arah - 09-01-2013, 07:38 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Arah - 09-12-2013, 08:09 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Arah - 09-16-2013, 01:39 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Arah - 09-24-2013, 06:27 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Arah - 09-29-2013, 07:08 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Raeden - 09-01-2013, 08:51 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Tingal - 09-02-2013, 12:04 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 09-04-2013, 12:13 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Faelene - 09-04-2013, 12:49 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Antheia - 09-04-2013, 07:00 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-04-2013, 11:29 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-10-2013, 11:25 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-18-2013, 01:38 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-20-2013, 03:31 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-21-2013, 04:36 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Artemis - 09-26-2013, 05:37 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Adalaide - 09-04-2013, 03:30 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Apache Renoen - 09-06-2013, 10:33 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 09-09-2013, 09:54 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 09-09-2013, 10:45 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Rasta - 09-09-2013, 11:39 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Faelene - 09-10-2013, 01:20 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Antheia - 09-10-2013, 06:43 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Ampere - 09-10-2013, 12:28 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Myrddin - 09-10-2013, 02:12 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Tingal - 09-10-2013, 05:32 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Apache Renoen - 09-10-2013, 06:40 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Apache Renoen - 09-19-2013, 11:43 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Yuri - 09-10-2013, 09:18 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Sakura - 09-11-2013, 04:27 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Raeden - 09-11-2013, 06:56 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 09-15-2013, 11:07 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 09-15-2013, 11:39 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Tingal - 09-16-2013, 05:15 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Raeden - 09-16-2013, 08:02 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Ampere - 09-16-2013, 10:10 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Rasta - 09-16-2013, 10:25 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Yuri - 09-17-2013, 11:02 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Faelene - 09-19-2013, 12:49 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Antheia - 09-19-2013, 06:40 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Sakura - 09-21-2013, 12:39 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 09-21-2013, 01:19 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Tingal - 09-21-2013, 02:20 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Faelene - 09-21-2013, 11:07 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Rasta - 09-21-2013, 07:40 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Sakura - 09-21-2013, 09:26 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Antheia - 09-22-2013, 08:12 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Ampere - 09-22-2013, 08:42 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 09-23-2013, 01:15 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 09-25-2013, 09:09 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Tingal - 09-26-2013, 07:45 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Rasta - 09-27-2013, 11:03 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 09-29-2013, 08:47 AM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Antheia - 09-29-2013, 08:46 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Random Event - 10-03-2013, 06:19 PM
RE: Last breath of a survivor - by Kirottu - 10-04-2013, 06:41 AM

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