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PASS
Maybe I'll go check the mail today, by myself, check out the scene and see new sights I never could before, take the route once blocked by electrical work to the clunky alloy P.O. box I haven't checked in years, you know, the kind that you picture all empty inside 'cept for shadows and cobwebs, who knows!
---No herd, & came out of the Rift alone/knowing nobody there
+1| [Rank ref] solid
---Blood Falls was unavailable before Time God "fixed it"
0| [History ref] too vauge
---Artorias is part metal/has metal items (specifically steel, which is an alloy) and shadows come from inside him
0| [Asset ref] hmm, I just really struggled with this, because cobwebs felt like a reference and shadows isn't the same as mist or fog. Also the alloy metal reference was super short compared to the mention of mail and 'haven't checked in years all empty inside' it just doesn't feel focused enough for me to say yes.
---Clunky is a reference both to his larger size and his build as a result from being fused with metal.
0| [Build ref] because his profile doesn't really describe him as clunky I don't feel this can apply. Who knows he could be a ballerina.
So I went, what a mob, took forever to get through that line, felt like four hours before it was all said and done.
---The first SWP fight had a lot of people and there were four threads to it.
0| [Thread ref] doesn't apply to the character
And would you guess what I found in the mail: an old plate, wrapped up in cloth and commemorating times of old, and more than just a little cracked!
---From appearance: "A grand figure of steel and cloth, mail and plate. "
+1| [Appearance ref] Niiice
---Commemorating times of old is meant to be in homage to all his Knightly stuff
0| [Personality ref] too vague
---The plate is "more than just a little cracked" because Artorias himself is described as broken in personality.
+1| [Personality ref] was a bit ont he fence with this one, but I think in the end it's clear enough.
I'd write to the sender, you see, tell them about the crimes of the post office and try and get their money back for them, but here's the kicker: I've got no family to write to!
---No lineage
+1| [Lineage ref] yup
4/3 necessary to pass
Maybe I'll go check the mail today, by myself, check out the scene and see new sights I never could before, take the route once blocked by electrical work to the clunky alloy P.O. box I haven't checked in years, you know, the kind that you picture all empty inside 'cept for shadows and cobwebs, who knows!
---No herd, & came out of the Rift alone/knowing nobody there
+1| [Rank ref] solid
---Blood Falls was unavailable before Time God "fixed it"
0| [History ref] too vauge
---Artorias is part metal/has metal items (specifically steel, which is an alloy) and shadows come from inside him
0| [Asset ref] hmm, I just really struggled with this, because cobwebs felt like a reference and shadows isn't the same as mist or fog. Also the alloy metal reference was super short compared to the mention of mail and 'haven't checked in years all empty inside' it just doesn't feel focused enough for me to say yes.
---Clunky is a reference both to his larger size and his build as a result from being fused with metal.
0| [Build ref] because his profile doesn't really describe him as clunky I don't feel this can apply. Who knows he could be a ballerina.
So I went, what a mob, took forever to get through that line, felt like four hours before it was all said and done.
---The first SWP fight had a lot of people and there were four threads to it.
0| [Thread ref] doesn't apply to the character
And would you guess what I found in the mail: an old plate, wrapped up in cloth and commemorating times of old, and more than just a little cracked!
---From appearance: "A grand figure of steel and cloth, mail and plate. "
+1| [Appearance ref] Niiice
---Commemorating times of old is meant to be in homage to all his Knightly stuff
0| [Personality ref] too vague
---The plate is "more than just a little cracked" because Artorias himself is described as broken in personality.
+1| [Personality ref] was a bit ont he fence with this one, but I think in the end it's clear enough.
I'd write to the sender, you see, tell them about the crimes of the post office and try and get their money back for them, but here's the kicker: I've got no family to write to!
---No lineage
+1| [Lineage ref] yup
4/3 necessary to pass
HP: 1100Helovia Hard Mode
