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A good wash [Oultik's Jade Dragon to Misael]

smitty the swift Posts: 22
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Mare :: Other :: 1 :: 1
#20
For as organized you say you are,
personality ref, on profile as organized

0 | He is not called organized in his profile.

you’re a sure mess.
fluff

-1 | I agree, this fluff was misleading.

I mean just look at you man,
gender ref

+1 | yep!

appendages and parts from the whole zoo!
appearance ref, goat hooves, lion tail, Antelope horns

+1 | I liked this clue, it made me think of both hybrids and animal-smorgasbord characters.

Your coat is all dirty with mud and grime,
appearance ref, brown and black colors

+1 | yep!

I’d recommend a wash, but minus the bleach this time
appearance ref, white spots

0 | I also like this clue, but it should stand on its own, like Blu said.

A bit of softener would do you best,
fluff


Hiding your emotions can be quite the stress!
personality ref, on profile emotions are challenging and he doesn't express them easily[/i]
+1 | yep!


3/3 is a pass from me.


Messages In This Thread
RE: A good wash - by Amaris - 03-02-2016, 01:51 AM
RE: A good wash - by Misael - 03-02-2016, 01:16 PM
RE: A good wash - by Prometheus - 03-02-2016, 02:26 PM
RE: A good wash - by Misael - 03-02-2016, 02:34 PM
RE: A good wash - by Deimos - 03-02-2016, 07:11 PM
RE: A good wash - by Archibald - 03-02-2016, 07:24 PM
RE: A good wash - by Iona - 03-02-2016, 07:42 PM
RE: A good wash - by Misael - 03-02-2016, 07:50 PM
RE: A good wash - by Misael - 03-02-2016, 07:51 PM
RE: A good wash - by Rikyn - 03-03-2016, 10:23 AM
RE: A good wash - by Misael - 03-03-2016, 02:04 PM
RE: A good wash - by Iona - 03-04-2016, 04:37 PM
RE: A good wash - by Misael - 03-04-2016, 04:51 PM
RE: A good wash - by Deimos - 03-04-2016, 06:47 PM
RE: A good wash - by Misael - 03-04-2016, 07:30 PM
RE: A good wash - by Misael - 03-04-2016, 10:47 PM
RE: A good wash - by Blu - 03-05-2016, 12:20 PM
RE: A good wash - by Tamme - 03-06-2016, 04:40 PM
RE: A good wash - by smitty - 03-06-2016, 10:39 PM
RE: A good wash - by ShadowMare - 03-06-2016, 10:43 PM

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