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Torleik the Bloodskald Posts: 354
Outcast atk: 4.5 | def: 8.0 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 16.3 :: 11 HP: 66.5 | Buff: SWIFT
Irelyn :: Plain Griffin :: Molten Dagger RedGod
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Had some inspiration for it, so I decided to pop it out. Take your time with it if you need, I just want Torleik to learn a little more about the Sun God and Onni seems the best choice. :)




A certain kind of anger bloomed in Torleik's chest, anger mixed with humiliation as the Sun God ripped him apart in front of all the others - ripped him apart when all he had wanted was to show reverence. He had wanted nothing from the deity, wanted no special treatment, no gift, no reward for his reverence.

Instead he had received utter rejection and hate for what he had said; derisive words caustically singeing his ears because his worshipfulness had been twisted to suit the Sun God's cruel fancy.

Why?

What had he done wrong? What did the Sun God find lacking in him? The rabicano stallion did not understand. Was it because he felt closer to the Moon Goddess? Was it immortal jealousy? Was it because he was a Unicorn? Was it because he was male? Those who had received the god's favor were all female. One Unicorn, one equine and one Pegasus.

The Pegasus remained after the Sun God had disappeared into the sky once more, and Torleik turned his attention to this Onni. "You," he said, expression a mixture of wounded pride, anger and confusion. "Is the God of the Sun always so hateful towards males?" She was a Pegasus and that was not...desirable, but she seemed to earn the god's favor the most, so he reasoned she understood him best.


TORLEIK

"I know what I said - I want to make peace and be one, but I've got this taste in my mouth from yesterday's bleeding tongue."




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O, You Civilized Barbarian - by Torleik - 10-25-2013, 01:35 AM
RE: O, You Civilized Barbarian - by Onni - 11-02-2013, 09:22 PM
RE: O, You Civilized Barbarian - by Torleik - 12-05-2013, 05:45 PM

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