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General Writing Help

Kahlua the Sunshower Posts: 662
Outcast atk: 5.5 | def: 9.5 | dam: 4.5
Mare :: Equine :: 15.3hh :: 9 [Orangemoon] HP: 65 | Buff: NOVICE
Khan :: Common Blue Dragon :: Frost Breath Sevin
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(11-11-2013, 04:02 PM)Torleik Wrote: After all, I know I'm not a huge, drug-addicted, hilarious oaf, now am I?

Work on this. I'm sure there is a shady street corner somewhere nearby, no? Lol.

ANYWAYS.... Thank you! It was incredibly helpful. It gives me a lot to think about, and makes me wonder if I shouldn't experiment a little bit. I don't think I want to force someone into feeling something they're not, and if that's an abrasive way to write then I'm not doing my job properly!


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Messages In This Thread
General Writing Help - by Torleik - 11-01-2013, 02:06 AM
RE: General Writing Help - by Cypress - 11-01-2013, 05:49 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Kahlua - 11-02-2013, 01:10 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Torleik - 11-11-2013, 04:02 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Kahlua - 11-11-2013, 06:09 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Torleik - 11-12-2013, 12:29 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Aurelia - 11-11-2013, 04:21 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Eris_ - 11-13-2013, 09:47 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Seele - 11-14-2013, 12:54 AM
RE: General Writing Help - by Torleik - 11-15-2013, 03:12 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Torleik - 11-27-2013, 03:38 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Eris_ - 11-27-2013, 04:45 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Aurelia - 11-27-2013, 05:22 PM
RE: General Writing Help - by Resplendence - 11-28-2013, 01:28 AM

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