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02-24-2014, 10:53 AM
Hey, kid,
Age reference (yearling)
+1| Good clue.
I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things;
Personality reference: He is by no means a "petty" character; he's very sweet in his posts genereally, and family oriented with his twin
0| Just because someone is sweet and family oriented, does not mean that they cannot also be petty. They are not mutually exclusive.
but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store?
Fluff
We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on-
Appearance reference: Cover of night = black. Streetlights actually was not really part of this.
-1| Most, myself included, interpreted the streetlights as being meaningful. You have to be really careful with what you add in, when giving coat-clues!
c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows!
Personality reference: peek through those windows = curiosity!
0| I had to think a lot about this one. But in the end, it was a 0. His profile says that he's inquisitive, not curious, and there's nothing in this clue to suggest his inquisitive mind - just that your character is suggesting that they peek through the windows (and not that it's something he would want to do, etc).
Total of 0. Fail for me.
Age reference (yearling)
+1| Good clue.
I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things;
Personality reference: He is by no means a "petty" character; he's very sweet in his posts genereally, and family oriented with his twin
0| Just because someone is sweet and family oriented, does not mean that they cannot also be petty. They are not mutually exclusive.
but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store?
Fluff
We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on-
Appearance reference: Cover of night = black. Streetlights actually was not really part of this.
-1| Most, myself included, interpreted the streetlights as being meaningful. You have to be really careful with what you add in, when giving coat-clues!
c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows!
Personality reference: peek through those windows = curiosity!
0| I had to think a lot about this one. But in the end, it was a 0. His profile says that he's inquisitive, not curious, and there's nothing in this clue to suggest his inquisitive mind - just that your character is suggesting that they peek through the windows (and not that it's something he would want to do, etc).
Total of 0. Fail for me.
