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02-24-2014, 04:09 PM
Hey, kid,
Age reference (yearling)
+1 | Good clue.
I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things;
Personality reference: He is by no means a "petty" character; he's very sweet in his posts genereally, and family oriented with his twin
0 | This made me think of someone that held very high moral standards, not someone who was family oriented.
but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store?
Fluff
We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on-
Appearance reference: Cover of night = black. Streetlights actually was not really part of this.
-1 | Misleading clue - I would have thought that the streetlights were important. Basically, you should never have a clue where you have to specify that part of it isn't meaningful. People are going to assign it meaning. There is a difference between this misleading clue and the above fluff.
c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows!
Personality reference: peek through those windows = curiosity!
+1 | Personality reference.
Overall, you have 1/3 points necessary to pass. This is a FAIL for me.
Age reference (yearling)
+1 | Good clue.
I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things;
Personality reference: He is by no means a "petty" character; he's very sweet in his posts genereally, and family oriented with his twin
0 | This made me think of someone that held very high moral standards, not someone who was family oriented.
but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store?
Fluff
We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on-
Appearance reference: Cover of night = black. Streetlights actually was not really part of this.
-1 | Misleading clue - I would have thought that the streetlights were important. Basically, you should never have a clue where you have to specify that part of it isn't meaningful. People are going to assign it meaning. There is a difference between this misleading clue and the above fluff.
c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows!
Personality reference: peek through those windows = curiosity!
+1 | Personality reference.
Overall, you have 1/3 points necessary to pass. This is a FAIL for me.
