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09-03-2014, 11:07 AM
Blackness,
- Appearance reference; skin is black
Blackness layered in snow.
- Appearance reference; coat is white
+1 | This, to me, is essentially the same clue. However, it is a good appearance ref.
Who have you loved?
Why have they let you go?
- LT reference; to Forsake is to abandon or renounce.
+1 | I think this is quite a clever LT reference.
Was the prison cold?
- History reference; was captured and held in the Tides during her life in Isilme
Is that why it crippled your soul?
- Personality reference; The stay made her bitter towards life.
0 | While that is a part of her history, ultimately I don't feel like this portion of the stealth was specific enough to single that part of her history out. Further, as a personality reference, I feel that the one portion of her history was not the sole reason for Phi turning bitter, especially as we've seen her grow and develop on Helovia. Since this was a clue that was dependent on that history, I don't think it quite passes. This clue had me going in an entirely different direction.
2/3 needed to pass, so this FAILS for me.
- Appearance reference; skin is black
Blackness layered in snow.
- Appearance reference; coat is white
+1 | This, to me, is essentially the same clue. However, it is a good appearance ref.
Who have you loved?
Why have they let you go?
- LT reference; to Forsake is to abandon or renounce.
+1 | I think this is quite a clever LT reference.
Was the prison cold?
- History reference; was captured and held in the Tides during her life in Isilme
Is that why it crippled your soul?
- Personality reference; The stay made her bitter towards life.
0 | While that is a part of her history, ultimately I don't feel like this portion of the stealth was specific enough to single that part of her history out. Further, as a personality reference, I feel that the one portion of her history was not the sole reason for Phi turning bitter, especially as we've seen her grow and develop on Helovia. Since this was a clue that was dependent on that history, I don't think it quite passes. This clue had me going in an entirely different direction.
2/3 needed to pass, so this FAILS for me.
