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02-20-2014, 11:45 PM
Hey, kid, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things; but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store? We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on- c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows!
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02-21-2014, 12:07 AM
Serenity blocks herself:
Petty things - she is a moral type and would find robbery petty candy store - she looks like cotton candy >_> with black mold, maybe under cover of night - darker wings streetlights - star markings STARS FADING BUT I LINGER ON DEAR STILL CRAVING YOUR KISS (Please tag me in every post)
02-21-2014, 01:11 PM
Tandavi blocks herself
Hey, kid, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things --> Yearling We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on- --> Afraid of the dark, owns a 'nightlight' item c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! --> Crescent blaze 'peeks' over her eyes
o. pixel pony credit to tamme
Seele blocks herself-
Hey, kid, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things; but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store? We can go under the cover of night, ---> Black coat when the streetlights are on ---> heart trinket glows c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! ---> Windows are glass, and she has a glass horn/glass hooves ●☽ ☾●
Glory and Gore go Hand in Hand That's Why We're Making Headlines ●☽ ☾●
02-21-2014, 08:49 PM
Abraham protects himself.
Hey, kid Abraham is a colt, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things Still fairly innocent and young in his actions, not criminal; but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store? We can go under the cover of night Black coat, when the streetlights are on White legs, aka lights- c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! Holy water cannot help you now Thousand armies couldn't keep me out I don't want your money I don't want your crown See I've come to burn your kingdom down pixel by tamme
02-21-2014, 09:47 PM
Jorogumo protects herself
Hey, kid, - Reference to age We can go under the cover of night, - reference to her appearance as she is a pureblooded Friesian c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! - Refers to her eyes as windows. Icon by Bronzehalo
02-22-2014, 11:01 AM
Midas and what he owns is safe.
Hey, kid, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things; - Midas can craft gold and when someone goes to steal something it is usually something of value. Such a money. Also he has a kind heart and likely wouldn't simply steal something for the sake of stealing. But I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store? - He had often thought about raiding the Basin for the sake of Asylum. We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on- c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! - Cover of night could be a color reference to his body, which is half black and half white.
02-22-2014, 09:56 PM
Apollo snorts. "I thought we've been through this, Shinigami. A coward even in such dark times..." Apollo protects himself.
Hey, kid, I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things; - Personality reference. Apollo is a law-abiding lad and detests doing 'unlawful' things. but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store? We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on - Physical reference; Apollo's black and white "night" and "streetlights" c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! - Apollo's eyes are sometimes referred to as 'windows to his soul'. I Just Want You To Know Who I Am Please Tag Apollo in All Posts!
02-24-2014, 09:05 AM
(This post was last modified: 02-24-2014, 09:05 AM by Confutatis.)
SACRE was wanted.
Hey, kid, Age reference (yearling) I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things; Personality reference: He is by no means a "petty" character; he's very sweet in his posts genereally, and family oriented with his twin but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store? Fluff We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on- Appearance reference: Cover of night = black. Streetlights actually was not really part of this. c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! Personality reference: peek through those windows = curiosity!
Join the Regime.
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02-24-2014, 10:53 AM
Hey, kid,
Age reference (yearling) +1| Good clue. I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things; Personality reference: He is by no means a "petty" character; he's very sweet in his posts genereally, and family oriented with his twin 0| Just because someone is sweet and family oriented, does not mean that they cannot also be petty. They are not mutually exclusive. but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store? Fluff We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on- Appearance reference: Cover of night = black. Streetlights actually was not really part of this. -1| Most, myself included, interpreted the streetlights as being meaningful. You have to be really careful with what you add in, when giving coat-clues! c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! Personality reference: peek through those windows = curiosity! 0| I had to think a lot about this one. But in the end, it was a 0. His profile says that he's inquisitive, not curious, and there's nothing in this clue to suggest his inquisitive mind - just that your character is suggesting that they peek through the windows (and not that it's something he would want to do, etc). Total of 0. Fail for me.
02-24-2014, 04:09 PM
Hey, kid,
Age reference (yearling) +1 | Good clue. I know you're not into robbery and other such petty things; Personality reference: He is by no means a "petty" character; he's very sweet in his posts genereally, and family oriented with his twin 0 | This made me think of someone that held very high moral standards, not someone who was family oriented. but I couldn't help but wonder, would you like to raid the candy store? Fluff We can go under the cover of night, when the streetlights are on- Appearance reference: Cover of night = black. Streetlights actually was not really part of this. -1 | Misleading clue - I would have thought that the streetlights were important. Basically, you should never have a clue where you have to specify that part of it isn't meaningful. People are going to assign it meaning. There is a difference between this misleading clue and the above fluff. c'mon, we may as well just take a tiny peak through those windows! Personality reference: peek through those windows = curiosity! +1 | Personality reference. Overall, you have 1/3 points necessary to pass. This is a FAIL for me. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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