the Rift


I would love you.

Illynx the GildedBlade Posts: 413
Hidden Account atk: 7.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16hh :: 13 HP: 67.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Kyst :: Common Griffon :: Zapping Jab Bunnie
#1
Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow.
Who have you loved?
Why have they let you go?

Was the prison cold?
Is that why it crippled your soul?




WE; 0/3
DT;1/2
HF; 1/3
Magic/assault allowed to be used on Illynx at any time, in so far as it does not kill or seriously maim her without my permission. 

Morir Posts: 79
Up For Adoption atk: 4.5 | def: 6.5 | dam: 3.5
Stallion :: Unicorn :: 17.2 :: 4 HP: 54 | Buff: NOVICE
Arwydd :: Raven :: None Adoptable
#2
Morir blocks himself

Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow. - color ref + possible bone mask or marking ref since snow usually is white, Mor is black and has gray markings and a white bone mask.
Who have you loved? - is currently meeting Beloved, is also flirting around alot.
Why have they let you go? - history ref, was banished from his homeland

Was the prison cold? - came from northern steppes, whom would be quite cold.
Is that why it crippled your soul?

♦ Please tag Morir in all replies! 

Abraham Posts: 113
Absent Abyss atk: 4.5 | def: 8.0 | dam: 7.5
Stallion :: Hybrid :: 17.3 hh :: Three years HP: 71 | Buff: NOVICE
Gwyneverre :: Plain White Dragon :: Fire Breath & Brienne :: Royal Gold Dragon :: Frost Breath Time
#3
Abraham protects himself.

Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow. - Color ref, black with white legs
Who have you loved? - Loves his brother & parents
Why have they let you go? - He is currently not with any of his family

Was the prison cold?
Is that why it crippled your soul?

Holy water cannot help you now
Thousand armies couldn't keep me out
I don't want your money
I don't want your crown
See I've come to burn your kingdom down


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Illynx the GildedBlade Posts: 413
Hidden Account atk: 7.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16hh :: 13 HP: 67.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Kyst :: Common Griffon :: Zapping Jab Bunnie
#4
Illynx smiles and shakes her head no.

"Relinquish your fears. Neither of you are desired."
Magic/assault allowed to be used on Illynx at any time, in so far as it does not kill or seriously maim her without my permission. 
Ascended Helovian

Midas the Gallant Posts: 1,164
Deceased
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 14.3 hh :: Immortal :: Soul is 7 (FF) Buff: HUNTER
Fina :: Common Zephyr :: Phoenix & Wakiya & Neve :: Common Zephyr :: Arctic Angel
#5
Midas is safe.

Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow.
– Color ref, Midas is black and white.
Who have you loved? – History ref. He’s loved Ktulu, which ties into the below statement that she left him.

Why have they let you go?

Was the prison cold? – He’s recently built a prison. And has moved to HF, which is further up north.

Is that why it crippled your soul? – He misses is family and old friends.
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Illynx the GildedBlade Posts: 413
Hidden Account atk: 7.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16hh :: 13 HP: 67.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Kyst :: Common Griffon :: Zapping Jab Bunnie
#6
Illynx does not desire Czar Midas, or his things.

"Fret not, darling, I remember what kindnesses I am shared."
Magic/assault allowed to be used on Illynx at any time, in so far as it does not kill or seriously maim her without my permission. 

Aurelia Posts: 307
Outcast atk: 5.5 | def: 9 | dam: 5
Mare :: Pegasus :: 15.2hh :: 7 HP: 62.5 | Buff: NOVICE
baylee
#7
Aurelia is safe.

Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow.
- Many say her soul is dark. A RE said her heart was blackened. She is white. [personality ref & color ref]
Who have you loved?
- has loved many.
Why have they let you go?
-she usually leaves those that 'love her' or that sh loves.
Was the prison cold?
- was a falls prisoner for a long time.
- has what many say would be 'a crippled soul', she is suicidal, also.

Success isn't the result of spontaneous combustion.


Illynx the GildedBlade Posts: 413
Hidden Account atk: 7.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16hh :: 13 HP: 67.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Kyst :: Common Griffon :: Zapping Jab Bunnie
#8
Illynx laughs, mockingly shaking her head no.

"I have no use for you."
Magic/assault allowed to be used on Illynx at any time, in so far as it does not kill or seriously maim her without my permission. 
Ascended Helovian

Gaucho The Wildfire Posts: 1,004
Deceased atk: 8.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 8
Stallion :: Pegasus :: 17.2 :: 12 HP: 85 | Buff: PINNACLE
Mara :: Black Mamba Snake :: Paralyze & Vorsa :: Plain Zephyr :: Phoenix Odd
#9
Gaucho blocks Africa.

Blackness,
Blackness layered in snow. : Apperance reference - Africa is a dappled. The layers could indicate gray + dappling. Also, Silas is black but covered in star-glitter.
Who have you loved? | History Ref, she has loved in the past.
Why have they let you go? History Ref: Windwalker let her go, because she lied.

Was the prison cold? History Ref | Was a prisoner of the Basin.
Is that why it crippled your soul? History Ref: They crippled her wing, which in turn could be seen as having crippled her soul.
Please tag me in every post! Magic/Force is allowed on Gaucho at any time.


Illynx the GildedBlade Posts: 413
Hidden Account atk: 7.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16hh :: 13 HP: 67.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Kyst :: Common Griffon :: Zapping Jab Bunnie
#10
Illynx shoos the desert warrior away; she does not seek the one winged one.

"We've ruined her life enough, don't you think?"
Magic/assault allowed to be used on Illynx at any time, in so far as it does not kill or seriously maim her without my permission. 

Illynx the GildedBlade Posts: 413
Hidden Account atk: 7.5 | def: 11.5 | dam: 3
Mare :: Unicorn :: 16hh :: 13 HP: 67.5 | Buff: ENDURE
Kyst :: Common Griffon :: Zapping Jab Bunnie
#11
Two days have passed!

Illynx was seeking Ophelia.

Blackness,
- Appearance reference; skin is black
Blackness layered in snow.
- Appearance reference; coat is white
Who have you loved?
Why have they let you go?
- LT reference; to Forsake is to abandon or renounce.

Was the prison cold?
- History reference; was captured and held in the Tides during her life in Isilme
Is that why it crippled your soul?
- Personality reference; The stay made her bitter towards life.
Magic/assault allowed to be used on Illynx at any time, in so far as it does not kill or seriously maim her without my permission. 

Odd the doer of things Posts: 115
Administrator atk: 23 | def: 42 | dam: 108
Mare :: Other :: 5"2 :: 27 HP: 108 | Buff: badass
Odd
#12
Blackness,
- Appearance reference; skin is black
Blackness layered in snow.
- Appearance reference; coat is white
+1| I had to think about this one, but since Tamme does specifically state her skin colour on Phi's profile, I think it works. Especially 'layered in snow'. The entirely suggests covering something black, which is what a pristine white coat would do.
Who have you loved?
Why have they let you go?
- LT reference; to Forsake is to abandon or renounce.

+1| Again, I had to think about it, because to forsake isn't just something others do to you. The line could easily have read "Why have you let them go?" which would equally have referenced her title. HOWEVER, in the end I decided yes, since it does depict one meaning.

Was the prison cold?
- History reference; was captured and held in the Tides during her life in Isilme

0| This clue occurs too far in the past. I wasn't on Isilme, so I don't know anything about the Tides, and all that it says on her profile is that she was held there, but doesn't describe what it was like.

Is that why it crippled your soul?
- Personality reference; The stay made her bitter towards life.
0| Lines can't stack. Each clue has to be able to stand on its own. So even if I knew that 'cold prison' was a reference to Tides, I still don't think that gets you off the ground here. If it had said "Is that why the prison crippled your soul?" I would have given you the point.

2 overall, which is a fail from me.

Rayo the Reindeer Posts: 18
Hidden Account
Mare :: Other :: 16.2 hh :: 21
Rayo
#13
Blackness,
- Appearance reference; skin is black
Blackness layered in snow.
- Appearance reference; coat is white
+1 | This, to me, is essentially the same clue. However, it is a good appearance ref.

Who have you loved?
Why have they let you go?
- LT reference; to Forsake is to abandon or renounce.
+1 | I think this is quite a clever LT reference.

Was the prison cold?
- History reference; was captured and held in the Tides during her life in Isilme
Is that why it crippled your soul?
- Personality reference; The stay made her bitter towards life.
0 | While that is a part of her history, ultimately I don't feel like this portion of the stealth was specific enough to single that part of her history out. Further, as a personality reference, I feel that the one portion of her history was not the sole reason for Phi turning bitter, especially as we've seen her grow and develop on Helovia. Since this was a clue that was dependent on that history, I don't think it quite passes. This clue had me going in an entirely different direction.

2/3 needed to pass, so this FAILS for me.


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